So, i created this thread so we could all express our own versions of the story, how we would have done it if we were the writers.. I want to see your version of the story
Btw, i created this thread just to have a little fun and to let our imagination fly, not to start an argument of any sort, so let's maintain mutual respect and civility please.
I'll start with my take:
Universe 11 was divided into 2 great nations who had great power, resources and influence all over the universe, and ruled over plenty of galaxies, civilizations and constelations..
Most of the west side of U11 was ruled by "The Federation" and the East side was ruled by the great "Galactical Union". Both nations emerged as a result of a great war that took place hundreds of years ago where plenty of civilizations perished and many people suffered.. The war was caused by an evil tyrant of Frieza's race who ruled all over U11 and declared war on the gods (the kai's), against the will of most of his people, forcing a bunch of innocent people into a war they didn't want to fight in the first place... U11 greatest leaders allied together and planned to overthrow this evil tyrant, starting a revolution. The evil tyrant was called "Emperor Kruos" (ancient greek for "Cold") who slowly started becoming insane and paranoid as the war progressed and ordered the destruction of many planets and his war tactics became more and more cruel, using chemical weapons on innocent planets, and murdering anyone he suspected about, etc. This fierce, bloody and degrading war dragged on for long, but at the end it was won by the rebels, but at a high cost.. Many people lost their lives, and Kruos destroyed many planets before his fall.
After this war, U11 leaders agreed to split the universe for eachother, many different nations throughout the universe. Some of these nations became more powerful than others, some were poor, others were violent and crime ridden, etc. But 2 of these nations grew exceedingly strong, and started invading, colonizing and conquering other territories, extracting their resources and become even more powerful. These 2 nations later ruled over almost half the universe each. One ruled over the west (The Federation) and the other one ruled over the East (Galactic Union), and the power struggle started. It was virtually a Cold War between both nations, with spies, intelligence, assasins, special ops, secret experiments, etc.
Jiren's planet was on the west, very close to the Capitol of "The Federation". His family was a family of warrios for the most part and they were loyal to the federation. Jiren's father worked for the Intelligence Department of The Federation, he was a strong special ops soldier and was out working most of the time, providing for his family. Meanwhile, Jiren trained at home, because he wanted to grow up to be a strong fighter, just like his father.
One day, Jiren's father was working on a secret mission, to steal a sample of a particle that could trigger an instant mutation on any sentient being, causing the subject to change drastically.. He was to steal it from a lab at a secret facility owned by the Galactic Union. Things went wrong, the Union was alerted about the operation by a whistle blower, and the Galactic Union responded by sending 4 "super soldiers" to stop Jiren's father and his team. These soldiers were abnormally powerful and vicious, but Jiren's father and his squard were no pushovers, so they managed to beat the super soldiers and escape with the substance, while the secret facility's alarms were blasting!!
They brought the particle back to headquarters and were congratulated by the whole department. When Jiren's father was about to head back home, he accidentally overheard a conversation between the minister of Defense and the head of the Intelligence Department, they were talking about using how glad they were to obtain this particle and it was the last missing peace, to start the process of creating big strong soldiers, using said particle. But Jiren's father tried to convince himself to let this go and get back home to his family, which is more important.
2 days past, and jiren's father can't stop thinking about what he heard from the head of the Department of Intelligence, so he decides to go back to headquarters, and sneak into a room where they hold all the classified documents, he starts digging, and finds a document that stated that The Federation has been kidnapping small kids and experimenting on them for years. They were playing with biogenetics, trying to create the perfect bio soldier, and the only thing they needed, to boost these subjects was the particle that Jiren's father got for them. Jiren's father couldn't help but feel disgusted, started thinking for a way to stop this madness.
The next day, Jiren's father (i'll name him Gris), called his most trusted men, Kalos and Ruru, both belonged to his unit, he told them all about his findings, and started plotting a sabotage and a plan to save the kids that were kidnapped, at least the ones who are still alive (many failed experiments resulted in the subjects death), both Kalos and Ruru agreed.. Gris (jiren's father) said that they will meet the next day in another planet, to not arise suspicion.
Gris, Kalos and Ruru met the next day and started planning in a lost abandoned house, when all of a sudden, they heard a knock at the door "in the name of The Federation, "Gris the Grey", you are to be sentenced for treason to the nation", Kalos and Ruru looked back at Gris, and aimed their weapons at him, they told him "Gris, you are under arrest for treason to the nation", the door was knocked down and the federal forces came in, a fight broke out, but Gris was held down and brought back to headquarters, but on their way back, he notices that they are not going back to headquarters, they are going back to his home planet, they bring him tied up back to his house, only to realize that they have his wife and his son ( kid Jiren) tied up, Kalos then procedes to kill his wife, Gris gets really mad, powers up and realeases himself to punch kalos, who he thought was his most trusted friend, Ruru and the rest beat Gris, and then executed him in front of Jiren.. They later kidnapped kid Jiren, because they noticed high potencial in him, and started doing painful experiments on him with the particle..
Fast foward 5 years later, Jiren is a teenager, a super soldier, the success of the biogenetic experiments.. Him and a group of 5 are The Federations Super Soldier Unit. No one in Uni11 is supposed to be stronger than them. The fall of the great Galactic Union happens due to internal issues and divides into 4 smaller nations. Now The Federation is the only great super nation in U11.
One day, the secret facility where they held jiren was raided by a group of rebels.. They discover that there was a bunker where they held several experiment subjects, they see teenage Jiren in a small room, training... The rebel leader "Kimori" notices that jiren is a prisoner and releases him, the facility is about to explode, so there's no time to release anybody else, so Jiren runs away with the rebels. Kimori is a strong warrior who used to be loyal to the Federation, but he learned about the evil schemes and manipulation of The Federation and decided to rebel with a group of military men who also opposed to the methods of The Federation. Kimori later becomes Jiren's master, he trained him and together, they amassed a great group of men determined to fight the federation, but they were crushed. Kalos and Ruru were sent to deal with Kimori and his people, but Kimori's men were no match for Kalos and Ruru, they were all killed in the battle. After years of battle, Jiren and Kimori were alone, most of their comrades were dead, and their guerrilla was growing weaker and weaker, some of them surrendered, others were arrested and publicly executed, others were killed in battle, etc. One day, Kalos came with an army of Federation men to intercept Jiren and Kimori.. Kimori died in the battlefield, Jiren raged and powered up, killed kalos and wiped out the whole army who came with him...
Jiren started building his own army composed of the remnants of Kimori's guerrilla, and some newcomers, they called themselves "The Troopers". He raided some of the Federation's military bases, Ruru was killed in one of these raids. The Federation started coming at them full force, sending their super soldiers, forcing Jiren's men to surrender, only to be executed later.. These Super Soldiers were virtually unbeatable, their ki was insame, they had no feelings, they were killing machines. These genetic freaks had Jiren's men shaking in fear, so Jiren's men started betraying him, they started snitching, giving out information to the feds, so Jiren kept getting raided by the feds, killing most of his men, until at the end, Jiren was all alone, most of his men got killed or betrayed him.. Jiren had no one to rely on, this is where his real power came to surface. All his suffering, all his frustration and all his anger was channeled.. He unlocked his true potential, so he went to the capitol with 2 of his remaining men (Toppo and Kasheral) and started a big revolution, when the people saw the power of these men, they were inspired to join.. Most people were unhapping with the current state of things, so most people supported the revolution.. At the end they were able to overthrow the capitol and dismantle The Federation, creating a more fair state.. Toppo and Kasheral were filled with pride, so they decided that they were no longer "The Troopers", they were now "The Pride Troopers".. The end.
I got a little bit lazy there at the end, but this is just for fun, so let's just enjoy ourselves
