sintzu wrote:I would've had BOG end with Beerus telling Goku he might contact him and Vegeta for something he needs done in U6.
While training with Whis in RF before Freeza is revived, Beerus tells them to not take long as afterwards they'll be going to U6 to deal with what he mentioned earlier. Seconds before Freeza destroys earth, Goku saves Vegeta alongside the others and that's when Beerus tells them what he needs.
The U6 arc starts with everyone going there to deal with the assassinations of important beings by an unknown person for unknown reasons and if Goku and friends take care of it, he'll get the remaining Super dragon balls from Champa and wish earth back. It's learned that the assassinations are being led by Hit and his assassin's, each having completely different abilities. During this arc we'll get to visit Planet Sadal where Vegeta saves the King from Hit's right hand man. After Hit is defeated, he tells them that a Kai from U10 named Zamasu is behind it and that he's causing trouble all over the 12 universes to achieve something called "the 0 mortal plan". As promised, the dragon balls are used to bring back earth but no one can rest as Zamasu could target U7 at anytime so Beerus suggests taking the fight to him in U10.
The Zamasu or U10 arc starts with Beerus trying to reach the pride troopers for potential back up but they already have their hands full with Zamasu's men in U11 so once they arrive in U10 they quickly reach out to the fighters there. Beerus meets with Rumsshi who's aware of the situation and both put a plan together in hopes of stopping Zamasu. Zamasu unfortunately figured out that plan and caught everyone off guard and they barely escape with their lives. Vegeta says those plans are useless and their best option would be to go after Zamasu directly but Rumsshi says no one's sen him in a long time as he's doing everything from behind the scenes. After another encounter with Zamasu's men, they tell Goku and his team to meet Zamasu at a specific place which they tell Beerus about. Rumsshi tells them to go ahead and when they finally arrive, a huge power is felt which everyone assumes is Zamasu but Beerus tells everyone to leave as his worst fear came true, It was Rumsshi. He explains that he's Zamasu but he had his mind switched with Rumsshi 1000 years ago which helped him infiltrate the other universes through U10's relations with them. A massive fight breaks out between Rumsshi and Beerus in which Beerus is completely defeated. Goku and everyone try to fight but it's no use and just as Rumsshi gets ready to deal the final blow, Toppo and the pride Troopers arrive. Beerus tells them to stand back as Toppo is U11's destroyer candidate. The fight between Toppo and Rumsshi begins and although it starts out with both equal, Rumsshi begins to gain the upper hand which forces Toppo to go into his destroyer mode and finally kill him after a long battle. Goku is amazed at Toppo's power but he drops a bombshell by telling everyone he's not even close to Jiren's level, something which Beerus thought to only be a rumor. Goku wants to fight him then thinks about having a tournament between U7, U6, U10 and U11. Beerus and Toppo think it could be fun so they tell Goku they'll ask the being above them, Zeno, if such an even can be held and with that the U10 arc concludes.
Many good ideas there. Really nice way of intertwining the arcs together and many solid corrections on the canon, although Mirai Trunks missing feels a bit weird. But the gang willing to go space adventure while the Earth is destroyed and Frieza ohohohoes with impunity rubs me the wrong way.
sintzu wrote:The Tournament of power starts with Zeno meeting with the 4 universes' destroyers to discuss this potential tournament and after the rules are set, Zeno agrees. Beerus goes to earth to explain the tournament, each universe will have 10 fighters for a total of 40 fighters. The fights will be 1VS1 but 2VS2 can happen if both destroyers agree to it. No one's allowed to kill and a fighter is out if dropped out of the ring or passes out. Goku manages to only find 7 fighters but Vegeta has an idea for the 8th one but he won't tell them about it. He asks Bulma to figure out a way to track down Freeza as he doesn't think the Planet's explosion did him in. Once detected, Vegeta goes off to bring Freeza on the team but only after he settles his fight with him. A massive fight breaks out between them in which Freeza's defeated in. Vegeta tells him about the tournament and he can either do that or die then and there. Freeza of course agrees but says they're still short on fighters as they just have 9. Once they get back, everyone surprised to see Freeza and more so that he agreed to take part in the tournament but just as Vegeta had a surprise for them, they had one for him, Future Trunks. While Vegeta was away, Bulma tested out the time machine she was working on and not only managed to meet her older self but also bring Trunks back with her. Trunks explains that it's the least he could do after everything they did for him and that it'd be a great chance for him to test out his new powers that he got through training with the Kais. Everyone goes to the world of void and the tournament begins.
This is a no no. For starters, Vegeta would never, ever consider Frieza as a fighter for the ToP - he would never ask for his aid or cooperation. Vegeta wants Frieza dead and buried, and Frieza successfully blowing up the Earth wouldn't make him reconsider. If anything, it would solidify his belief that Frieza is evil incarnate and needs to stay dead. I understand you
need your Vegeta win against Frieza, but this is an extremely fan-service-y way of achieving it. At that point in your draft, Goku and Vegeta need to swap places - Vegeta should scout for the Earth fighters (and think of Mirai Trunks) and Goku should think of Frieza. It makes no sense for Vegeta to not think of his progeny as a solid candidate. Also, how will Beerus react to Bulma resorting to Time Travel in order to find Mirai Trunks?
Which creates a huge loophole: If Beerus will somehow agree to Time Travel in order to find fighters, why not travel to nine different days ago and bring nine Gokus instead of Trunks, Frieza and all the others?
And another small loophole: If Frieza won against the Z fighters, he has no reason to do image training and upgrade his Golden form to conserve stamina. He won, he killed them (in his mind), ergo he has no reason to be better.