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Post by SSj Gogito » Tue Jun 02, 2009 8:39 am

General Blue

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Hope you like

Here's also a preview of one of my next works :wink:
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Post by omegacwa » Tue Jun 02, 2009 11:49 am

His facial features are too close together, making him look like he has a "small face".

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Post by SSj Gogito » Tue Jun 02, 2009 9:21 pm

omegacwa wrote:His facial features are too close together, making him look like he has a "small face".
I redone the face spread more apart and it looked wierd, It seems thats the way his face is suppose to be.
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Post by SSJ2bardock » Tue Jun 02, 2009 9:34 pm

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omegacwa wrote:His facial features are too close together, making him look like he has a "small face".
I redone the face spread more apart and it looked wierd, It seems thats the way his face is suppose to be.
Leave everything where it is, but just move the mouth down a little bit. It should look better then.
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Post by SSj Gogito » Wed Jun 03, 2009 2:43 am

SSJ2bardock wrote:
SSj Gogito wrote:
omegacwa wrote:His facial features are too close together, making him look like he has a "small face".
I redone the face spread more apart and it looked wierd, It seems thats the way his face is suppose to be.
Leave everything where it is, but just move the mouth down a little bit. It should look better then.
Done, Updated the link, Thanks Guys.
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Post by omegacwa » Wed Jun 03, 2009 11:02 am

Still looks, um, odd to me. I am thinking maybe the nose is too long, or the eyes are to high up. Also maybe if his Irises were shifted outward slightly. I'm not sure, I would just have to redraw it myself to find out, lol.

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Post by SSj Gogito » Wed Jun 03, 2009 1:30 pm

omegacwa wrote:Still looks, um, odd to me. I am thinking maybe the nose is too long, or the eyes are to high up. Also maybe if his Irises were shifted outward slightly. I'm not sure, I would just have to redraw it myself to find out, lol.
Yeah i know what your saying mate, I guess i will just need to fiddle around abit, Will see what happens in the next few days.
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Post by The Tori-bot » Wed Jun 03, 2009 3:26 pm

SSj Gogito wrote:Here's also a preview of one of my next works :wink:
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Is it just me or does this look uncannily like the cover of a hentai doujinshi? :shock:

Don't bother answering that: it is the cover of a hentai doujinshi. Naughty boy! ;)
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Post by DragonBalllKaiHD » Fri Jun 12, 2009 11:07 pm

Booney wrote:How's this?

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I decided to stay as true to the special as possible so that explains the hair.
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Post by Metalwario64 » Sun Jun 14, 2009 1:11 am

Just a sketch of Super Saiyan 2 Goku I whipped up on an impulse:
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Post by Pain » Sun Jun 14, 2009 1:31 am

I like this drawing. Your style is really unique. :wink:
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Post by Metalwario64 » Sun Jun 14, 2009 1:48 am

Pain wrote:I like this drawing. Your style is really unique. :wink:
I hate to be presumptuous, but is that supposed to be sarcastic?
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Post by Pain » Sun Jun 14, 2009 1:51 am

Metalwario64 wrote:
Pain wrote:I like this drawing. Your style is really unique. :wink:
I hate to be presumptuous, but is that supposed to be sarcastic?
Nope. I think that the drawing is pretty good.
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Post by JAPPO » Sun Jun 14, 2009 6:29 am

I like it too :)
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Post by TrunksTrevelyan0064 » Sun Jun 14, 2009 6:56 am

Alright, let's see how my work gets received here.

http://kevtrev.deviantart.com/art/A-Rad ... m-73940004

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Post by darkhawk5 » Wed Jun 17, 2009 12:46 am

This is my new W.I.P.
Pencils by deviant art user alexss and line art and colors by me
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Post by Shiyonasan » Wed Jun 17, 2009 10:11 pm

TrunksTrevelyan0064 wrote:Alright, let's see how my work gets received here.

http://kevtrev.deviantart.com/art/A-Rad ... m-73940004

This is currently probably the best Dragonball piece in my deviantart gallery. Feel free to check out the rest of my work on there.
That's not bad. Poor Raditz in Super Saiyan 3 though, having too much hair to keep track of! I bet his hair weighs more than he does. :wink:

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Post by TrunksTrevelyan0064 » Thu Jun 18, 2009 6:58 am

Heh, thanks.
If I hadn't run out of paper to draw on, his hair would've been even bigger :P
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Post by darkhawk5 » Fri Jun 19, 2009 3:30 am

Here is the finished version of the W.I.P. I posted earlier.
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Post by JAMM » Fri Jun 19, 2009 5:43 am

^
Nice man very nice
Your style is kinda cool.

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