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Kataphrut wrote:It's a bit of a Boy Who Cried Wolf situation to me...Basically, the boy shouldn't have cried wolf when the wolves just wanted to Go See Yamcha. If not, they might have gotten some help when the wolves came back to Make the Donuts.
Chuquita wrote:I liken Gokû Black to "guy can't stand his job, so instead of quitting and finding a job he likes, he instead sets fire not only to his workplace so he doesn't have to work there, but tries setting fire to every store in the franchise of that company".
So you don't like the Goku at all eh? Could you elaborate a little more (if there is any more to say) It's trying to sound like a Nozawa/Kelamis Goku... some like it others don't.It's not bad, but you really need to work on your voice not getting so high pitched when you're yelling. Also, Goku's voice is really bad, he sounds like Abridged Krillin in my opinion. If you're going for an imitation of Ocean or Japanese Goku, fine, but I'd still tone it down a bit.
And I also agree that Yamcha vs. Droid was really good (except for the Goku voice over at the end).
Forget Raditz and Piccolo. None of them (except Raditz) was supposed to sound like FUNi's but more Japanese style. My voice is at a higher pitch to do those voices though....Piccolo's Makankosappo was... bad. Raditz voice was bad, Piccolo's didn't really help either.
Kataphrut wrote:It's a bit of a Boy Who Cried Wolf situation to me...Basically, the boy shouldn't have cried wolf when the wolves just wanted to Go See Yamcha. If not, they might have gotten some help when the wolves came back to Make the Donuts.
Chuquita wrote:I liken Gokû Black to "guy can't stand his job, so instead of quitting and finding a job he likes, he instead sets fire not only to his workplace so he doesn't have to work there, but tries setting fire to every store in the franchise of that company".
I think is something I did wrong for this fandub. The voice is coming from my upper throat - nose areas instead of my chest. So the voice does not sound "intimidating" enough or mad enough. The screams, I think, sometimes come out a little flat with my Goku. I see what you mean with Nozawa, when Goku is mad, the voice deepens and hisses.When Goku says "Let's go", put a little more oomph behind it by speaking from the chest, not from your nose (In choir, you learn to do this by standing really straight, cupping your hands and holding them between your stomach and your waist, then making the most powerful sound you can). Your voice might be a little lower, so if you don't like this, maybe instead of hanging the Leeeeeets, in "Let's go", just say the words really quickly and forcefully, and try to put some scratchiness in it, like Nozawa does sometimes.
This was a tough line to do because of the flaps, but you know that. The line was "You can't beat me, I'll take you all/y'all on!" If I wanted to say the line in full I had to speak it really quickly, which in turn, would lose the oomph in the scream.Also a little nitpick about "You beat me, I'll take you all on!"....
After I have listened to this for awhile, It's like "Bring... it... on!" in a less tense/anger sound with a, how you put it, whinier sound, that sounds too slow for my tastes. If I was to redo it, I would approach it differently.2:01-2:08, the way you enunciate the sentence is somewhat...babyish. It sounds more like Goku's whining and getting mad rather than saying something in a way that raises tension.
With Yamcha thank you.ThunderPX wrote:The Goku one occasionally sounds like a good Kelamis impression, but it's kind of hard to take seriously overall. I think Fionordequester pretty much covered all the technical details there.
The Makankosappo one... no offense, but it was pretty bad. Raditz sounds like a parody of Justin Cook's screaming, and Piccolo's voice was just plain inappropriate.
I have no complaints about Yamcha though. I was actually very impressed, and I think I like your version better than Chris Sabat's.
