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Help Me Come Up With A "Mr.Satan" Disclaimer.

Post by Tanooki Kuribo » Sat Jun 02, 2012 4:37 pm

Hey guys, so I'm up to episode 87 on my DragonBall Z Kai Edits Guide. I have a small dilemma. I really don't wanna note and add a word bubble to a screen shot each and every time "Mr.Satan" is changed to Image. So, to avoid this I decided I'll put up a small disclaimer in the begining of the episodes from here on out noting this change. I came up with this...

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But, I don't like it. It looks really lame. So, if anyone here wants to help come up with something, it doesn't necessarily have to say exactly that but maybe something along those lines? I'd really appreciate it.

Maybe I'll even choose more than one and rotate between episodes.

Once I decide which on to choose, I'll put up episode 87. Thanks!
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Post by DBZGTKOSDH » Sat Jun 02, 2012 4:46 pm

Wasn't he named Hercule?
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Post by Gyt Kaliba » Sat Jun 02, 2012 4:47 pm

I don't have the artistic ability to come up with something good (I've only got paint), but just thought I'd note - I think it's an 'e', not a 'u' in Hurcule. Wasn't sure if you were spelling it that way to avoid a word filter, or if it was on purpose at all or not. If it was, then just ignore this. ^_^;

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Post by Tanooki Kuribo » Sat Jun 02, 2012 4:52 pm

Fixed. Now make me some images! :lol:

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Post by Pokewhiz7 » Sat Jun 02, 2012 5:20 pm

I wasn't sure of the exact shape that you wanted, so I made a banner type-thing.
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And a bigger one: http://i.imgur.com/DBp1O.png
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Post by Gaffer Tape » Sat Jun 02, 2012 5:32 pm

Love both choices of image, but I'm not crazy about the wording so far. It just sounds rather unnatural. I do love the "Remember!" opening, as if it's a traffic safety warning, though. How about:

"Remember! My name is Mr. Satan on home video, but on your television broadcasts, I am known as Hercule. Don't let this confuse you, as I am the World Combat Sports Champion either way!"

The last sentence might be a bit superfluous and wordy for an image, though.
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Post by jjgp1112 » Sat Jun 02, 2012 6:27 pm

Gaffer Tape wrote:Love both choices of image, but I'm not crazy about the wording so far. It just sounds rather unnatural. I do love the "Remember!" opening, as if it's a traffic safety warning, though. How about:

"Remember! My name is Mr. Satan on home video, but on your television broadcasts, I am known as Hercule. Don't let this confuse you, as I am the World Combat Sports Champion either way!"

The last sentence might be a bit superfluous and wordy for an image, though.
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Post by Hades » Sat Jun 02, 2012 6:27 pm

Is it just me, or did I read that disclaimer in Mr Satan's voice?
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Post by Tanooki Kuribo » Sat Jun 02, 2012 7:03 pm

Hmm, I don't hate it. I would just switch some words around...

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Post by AgitoZ » Sat Jun 02, 2012 7:16 pm

Tanooki Kuribo wrote:Hmm, I don't hate it. I would just switch some words around...

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Post by Tanooki Kuribo » Sat Jun 02, 2012 7:59 pm

And...

I think I have my disclaimer...

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Post by dbboxkaifan » Sun Jun 03, 2012 11:20 am

Tanooki Kuribo wrote:*pic*
Awesome!

Hurcule looks pretty weird, I'd preferred Hercule over Hurcule in this case.

Btw, the #98 bonus episode clips, you got them from Kai Part 8?
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Post by Tanooki Kuribo » Sun Jun 03, 2012 8:15 pm

dbboxkaifan wrote:
Btw, the #98 bonus episode clips, you got them from Kai Part 8?
Yea. I mean I have a Blu-ray rip of that episode from the Japanese Blu-ray. But, I wanted it to be dub clips.

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