Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by rereboy » Wed Jun 27, 2012 7:11 pm

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rereboy wrote:It won't. It will last for a few more pages.
Only a few more? This makes me sad (But at the same time I understand that it shouldn't drag for too long).
Well, the chapter is ending hehe :lol:

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by dprez » Wed Jun 27, 2012 9:50 pm

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Scarz wrote:I really, really hope this match doesn't end in a beam struggle.
Unlikely, but I'd like it if Vegeta pumped a bit more power into his attack, overwhelming Trunks and sending him sprawling backwards and skidding across the ring in a crouched position. When he finally regains himself and gets ready to charge again, he looks up and see's his father holding his hand point blank to his face, mocking him in a fathery-Vegeta way.
This is something I can see happening, and would actually like to see. Vegeta needs to show his superiority here if he ever hopes to defeat Son Goku.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Gohaz » Wed Jun 27, 2012 11:53 pm

Trunks seem awfully calm aswell
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by mattymoron » Thu Jun 28, 2012 7:56 pm

I still think it was a missed opportunity to not have an alternate universe where GT happened. Would have been neat...

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Post by rereboy » Thu Jun 28, 2012 8:39 pm

mattymoron wrote:I still think it was a missed opportunity to not have an alternate universe where GT happened. Would have been neat...
It would have been pretty cool but then everyone would want to reach SSJ4 as soon as they learned about it :lol:

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by mattymoron » Thu Jun 28, 2012 8:49 pm

rereboy wrote:
It would have been pretty cool but then everyone would want to reach SSJ4 as soon as they learned about it :lol:

The only characters that would have mattered would have been like. An adult Pan with some weird female SSJ form, Vegeta who can go SSJ4, and Majuub.

Then they could have had ANOTHER alternate universe with an adult Goku and Vegeta Jr.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by TheDevilsCorpse » Fri Jun 29, 2012 1:41 am

mattymoron wrote:Then they could have had ANOTHER alternate universe with an adult Goku and Vegeta Jr.
No, that was never going to happen even with GT characters in the mix. The Vargas didn't travel through time to find their competitors, they are all from the same year across the universes.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by dprez » Fri Jun 29, 2012 2:52 pm

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Trunks is clearly using more effort.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by rereboy » Fri Jun 29, 2012 2:59 pm

Yes, he is sweating. Vegeta isn't.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Scarz » Fri Jun 29, 2012 3:00 pm

dprez wrote:Trunks is clearly using more effort.
How? They both seem to be using the same amount of effort.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by dprez » Fri Jun 29, 2012 3:08 pm

Scarz wrote:
dprez wrote:Trunks is clearly using more effort.
How? They both seem to be using the same amount of effort.
Sweat and veins, mostly sweat.

Toriyama did this throughout the manga. Check Vegeta vs. 1st form Freeza and Tenshinhan vs. Goku at the 23rd Budokai Tenkaichi, when they are actually doing the same thing, grabbing each others hands pushing there power at each other. Wish I knew where to find high quality Dragon Ball manga scans, then I could show you...

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Insertclevername » Fri Jun 29, 2012 4:36 pm

rereboy wrote:Yes, he is sweating. Vegeta isn't.
Even though you're probably right, those sweat marks could just be to signal that he is in grade 3.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by rereboy » Fri Jun 29, 2012 5:15 pm

I think that's what his noticeable veins are for.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by dprez » Fri Jun 29, 2012 5:53 pm

rereboy wrote:I think that's what his noticeable veins are for.
Yes, as we can clearly see once Ssj Goku and Gohan use their full power in the Cell games, the obvious bulging veins we see on Super Vegeta when he "transformed" are not present, nor is the extreme exertion of energy. Here we can see the obvious physical differences between the Grade forms and FpSsj.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by rereboy » Sun Jul 01, 2012 7:31 am

Today's page has a noticeable decrease in the art quality. Just a heads up.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Michsi » Sun Jul 01, 2012 8:11 am

rereboy wrote:Today's page has a noticeable decrease in the art quality. Just a heads up.

Well.... :(

I've been wondering if I , as the artist/writer, were able to stay dedicated to such a long running fan-comic. I mean, even Toriyama seemed noticeably less patient at the end of the Buu Saga.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by rereboy » Sun Jul 01, 2012 8:35 am

In this case, I don't think its a matter of patience, but more a matter a time. Gogeta Jr probably has a lot more going in his life than a few years ago.

As for this page, this is the only page so far that will probably deserve the criticism that its going to get regarding its art, IMO. The criticism so far has been unfair and exaggerated, IMO, but not so much for this page if it follows the same overall lines. Anyway, afterwards, the pages have the usual quality. Its just this one that took a noticeable blow for some reason.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by dprez » Sun Jul 01, 2012 2:03 pm

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Panel 4 Vegeta looks strange... :?

I figured this Trunks was capable of defeating Perfect Cell. He could probably even give Super Perfect Cell a fight.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by rereboy » Sun Jul 01, 2012 2:05 pm

Vegeta finally starting to get serious.

Also, Vegeta states that Trunks would "only" give serious problems to Perfect Cell. Seems to me that Vegeta is saying that this Trunks could have a shot of beating Cell at the Cell games, but only a shot. In other words he is probably telling us that Trunks' power is still inferior to Perfect Cell of the Cell games or maybe its comparable.

Btw, kind of awkward having Vegeta say "Perfect Cell".

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Scarz » Sun Jul 01, 2012 2:19 pm

Eh, the art doesn't look terrible to me.
rereboy wrote:Vegeta finally starting to get serious.
Vegeta wasn't serious three pages ago?

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