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Post by Mystic Buu » Mon Feb 24, 2014 3:01 pm

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Post by Gyt Kaliba » Mon Feb 24, 2014 3:15 pm

...Ehh?

Not that I'm opposed to the alternate universe Yamcha and #18 ending up together - 18 does seem to have a soft spot for kindness - but...I dunno about Old Kai being a matchmaker. It's a cute comic though.
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Post by Mystic Buu » Mon Feb 24, 2014 3:28 pm

Krillin's face when #18 was falling was priceless :lol: .
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by omegalucas » Mon Feb 24, 2014 3:40 pm

The hell happened to the Portuguese version? It's almost like we're back to the beggining of the translation, it looks like whoever did it used Google Translate O.o

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Wasn't one of you guys a translator? (rereboy, Puto or DNA, I'm not sure)
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by rereboy » Mon Feb 24, 2014 4:01 pm

That is not an official translation. Sometimes we miss the mini comics because their release schedule is sporadic. I'll provide an official translation and wait for them to replace it.

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Post by Tzigi » Mon Feb 24, 2014 4:32 pm

omegalucas wrote:The hell happened to the Portuguese version? It's almost like we're back to the beggining of the translation, it looks like whoever did it used Google Translate O.o
I'm by no means related to the Portuguese part of DBM (my Portuguese is limited to understanding the basics of any given text but without any stylistic consideration) but I think that any problems there were with it might somehow connected to the fact that this minicomic started of in Brazilian Portuguese - here's the original version submitted by Menkyon on DA:
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Fionordequester » Mon Feb 24, 2014 4:59 pm

You know, I kind of like Old Kai as a matchmaker! I can picture it, him being a perverted old man...but still ultimately a good guy.

EDIT: Also, about that badly translated Portugese strip. Is it better or worse than this?

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Post by Kamiccolo9 » Mon Feb 24, 2014 5:03 pm

That was cute.
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Post by Marco Polo » Mon Feb 24, 2014 7:55 pm

Cute comic. I was wondering if it would end with a joke or something like the previous mini-comics, but I'm fine with this. This actually adds more to the DBM universe in one page than most special chapters do in 10+ pages.
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Post by ZombieVito » Tue Feb 25, 2014 1:18 pm

Isn't Cyborg Yamcha married to Bulma?
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Post by Scarz » Tue Feb 25, 2014 1:51 pm

Cyborg Yamcha and 18 disgust me!
Zombie wrote:Isn't Cyborg Yamcha married to Bulma?
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by RandomGuy96 » Tue Feb 25, 2014 2:59 pm

Zombie wrote:Isn't Cyborg Yamcha married to Bulma?
So..? This is Yamcha.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Gyt Kaliba » Tue Feb 25, 2014 5:23 pm

Scarz wrote:Cyborg Yamcha and 18 disgust me!
W-Whaaaa? :shock: That's kind of unexpected coming from you, Scarz. Might I ask why?

And ugh...can we not go into the Yamcha-is-a-cheater-no-he's-not-yes-he-is-I'm-right-you're-wrong-grr' debate again? *rubs forehead*
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by RandomGuy96 » Wed Feb 26, 2014 1:42 pm

Obvious sarcasm is obvious... I think...?
And ugh...can we not go into the Yamcha-is-a-cheater-no-he's-not-yes-he-is-I'm-right-you're-wrong-grr' debate again? *rubs forehead*
I was just pointing out that it wouldn't matter if he's already in a relationship, because it didn't stop him in the series, when someone wondered why he was doing this when apparently married to Bulma.
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He's probably referring to the Bardock special. Zarbon was the one who first recommended destroying Planet Vegeta because the saiyans were rapidly growing in strength.
It was actually Beerus disguised as Zarbon #StayWoke
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Mystic Buu » Wed Feb 26, 2014 3:41 pm

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Ninja Murasaki » Wed Feb 26, 2014 4:45 pm

RandomGuy96 wrote:I was just pointing out that it wouldn't matter if he's already in a relationship, because it didn't stop him in the series, when someone wondered why he was doing this when apparently married to Bulma.
Could you not do the character bashing in this topic? I get you don't like him already.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Saiga » Wed Feb 26, 2014 9:17 pm

It might just be me, but the first panel looks hilarious with the way Gohan's lying on the ground and how it looks like everyone's just having a casual conversation.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by TheGmGoken » Wed Feb 26, 2014 10:08 pm

Speaking of which. Doesn't Gohan only knew Krillin for 1 month during Namek? I wonder how are they best friends(Well one of them) already.
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Post by mAcChaos » Wed Feb 26, 2014 10:23 pm

TheGmGoken wrote:Speaking of which. Doesn't Gohan only knew Krillin for 1 month during Namek? I wonder how are they best friends(Well one of them) already.
You can bond pretty fast with people in intense situations. Especially life or death ones.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by TheGmGoken » Wed Feb 26, 2014 10:31 pm

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TheGmGoken wrote:Speaking of which. Doesn't Gohan only knew Krillin for 1 month during Namek? I wonder how are they best friends(Well one of them) already.
You can bond pretty fast with people in intense situations. Especially life or death ones.
How was it intense? They didn't know that Freeza(And gang) and Vegeta was going to be there. They was just going to be
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