The Emperor's Wrath

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Re: The Emperor's Wrath

Post by Polyphase Avatron » Sat Aug 29, 2015 6:25 am

Nice update! I hope King Cold gets to fight too in an upcoming scene. And maybe he and Freeza could do some more training, and Goku and Trunks would have to fuse to fight them.
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Re: The Emperor's Wrath

Post by ekrolo2 » Sat Aug 29, 2015 9:09 am

Oh man, if the endings implying what I think its implying then the Android vs Cell vs Freeza war is gonna be freaking awesome!
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Re: The Emperor's Wrath

Post by supercat » Sat Aug 29, 2015 1:53 pm

Polyphase Avatron wrote:Nice update! I hope King Cold gets to fight too in an upcoming scene. And maybe he and Freeza could do some more training, and Goku and Trunks would have to fuse to fight them.
Thanks! I definitely have something nice in store for them all! Glad you're liking it so far.

As for your fanfic, I read up to the part where Beerus met North Kaio. I love how the transitional phases that led up to that point unraveled in such a way that not only progressed at the ideal pace, but fluidly came together. While fan adaptations provide us with a basic foundation to work with, they can often host their own array of challenges. Trying too hard to keep things consistent with their original counterparts can often times result in a forced and/or rigid turn of events, but going too far beyond the depths of previously established personas can excessively change the story in undesirable ways.

There's a fine line between uncharted territory and a border less window of opportunities when writing fanfics; I think you did a fine job keeping things right in the middle, where they should be. Impressive work indeed!
ekrolo2 wrote:Oh man, if the endings implying what I think its implying then the Android vs Cell vs Freeza war is gonna be freaking awesome!
You'll just have to see! Thanks for keeping up thus far! I'm glad you've been enjoying it.

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Re: The Emperor's Wrath

Post by supercat » Tue Sep 29, 2015 5:36 pm

Took me some time to put the following chapter together due to a busy month. Hope you all enjoy!

Feel free to ask away any questions that pertain to power levels and such; most of the characters if not all, stand several notches above their original counterparts in terms of raw power.

Chapter 7 - Three Years of Mayhem
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Re: The Emperor's Wrath

Post by ekrolo2 » Tue Sep 29, 2015 6:11 pm

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EDIT: Yes! The showdown I was waiting for did not disappoint one bit, and with that ending things are about to get real crazy real soon.
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Re: The Emperor's Wrath

Post by Polyphase Avatron » Wed Sep 30, 2015 5:33 am

Good update, I noticed the reference to RoF in how Freeza killed Yamcha.

Also I'm wondering if any characters we know are now part of Freeza's army, like Taopaipai (maybe he could have his cyborg body upgraded with Freeza's technology). Freeza might even see him as a kindred spirit of sorts, since they both lost to Goku and were crippled and forced to become cyborgs, and hate Goku... Taopaipai could even thank Freeza for killing him and pledge to serve him, and maybe become a commander, and Krillin or Master Roshi could fight him later.

I was also kind of hoping Dr. Gero would survive, although it appears he might if 19 recovers his head. And what about 16?

I also wonder if Freeza and King Cold are going to do any more training.
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Re: The Emperor's Wrath

Post by supercat » Wed Sep 30, 2015 1:35 pm

ekrolo2 wrote:Image

EDIT: Yes! The showdown I was waiting for did not disappoint one bit, and with that ending things are about to get real crazy real soon.
Thanks! Glad you liked it.

As for the intricate details of the battle itself, Vegeta was Grade 2 SSJ, while Piccolo was tapping into the pinnacle of his strength. The two manage to get a lot stronger by the time they complete their training.
Polyphase Avatron wrote:Good update, I noticed the reference to RoF in how Freeza killed Yamcha.

Also I'm wondering if any characters we know are now part of Freeza's army, like Taopaipai (maybe he could have his cyborg body upgraded with Freeza's technology). Freeza might even see him as a kindred spirit of sorts, since they both lost to Goku and were crippled and forced to become cyborgs, and hate Goku... Taopaipai could even thank Freeza for killing him and pledge to serve him, and maybe become a commander, and Krillin or Master Roshi could fight him later.

I was also kind of hoping Dr. Gero would survive, although it appears he might if 19 recovers his head. And what about 16?

I also wonder if Freeza and King Cold are going to do any more training.
Thanks! Glad you're enjoying it.

Check the spoiler tag for a quick sneak peek on what's in store for the future.

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