Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

[DragonBalllKaiHD]

The background feels like Star Warsy. It reminds me a bit of the original Knights of the Old Republic. Not that it's a bad thing. I actually like it.

Looks like the city from the beginning of Clones.

It doesn't feel like it's from Coruscant. More like Nar Shaddaa or Star Forge.

Star Forge:

[Craddle]

This is a really good story. I like the art as well. I don't particularly care for the specials. I am 1/2 way through the story. I'll finish the rest tomorrow. Great job so far.

[Gyt Kaliba]

The new page went up, but I was waiting to see if someone else could get a better 'copy' of it. I dunno what they did, but whoever uploaded the page did it really weird this time, compared to everything else.



The way my cursor is working going over it, on the actual site, it's like...they made the page part of the background, and then put text boxes where they are on the page, and simply typed the dialogue in there, or something. Yeah, I don't even...anyway, the missing dialogue is -

'This story happened in universe 3. In the year 780 on planet Zioga 3.'
'Glup...'

Glup indeed.

[rereboy]

They simply haven't inserted the text into the page yet. Normally, the ones responsible for that always insert the text into the page (in multiples languages) before the page comes out. This time, they didn't.

[funrush]

This new special is going to be 48 pages, at 3 a week. So, 4 month special. I hope it's good. It looks promising so far.

[Puto]

Text:

Top panel: ‘This story happened in universe 3. In the year 780 on planet Zioga 3.’
Hoi: ‘Glup...’

[TonyTheTiger]

Gotta be honest, if you told me this was a Gogeta Jr. page I'd probably have believed it.

[Puto]

Inserted the text myself into the image, and had a go at improving the English while I'm at it.

[Gyt Kaliba]

They simply haven't inserted the text into the page yet. Normally, the ones responsible for that always insert the text into the page (in multiples languages) before the page comes out. This time, they didn't.

Ohhh, okay. So that's what happened.

Gotta be honest, if you told me this was a Gogeta Jr. page I'd probably have believed it.

Same here, I wonder what the chances are of this being our new main artist. Using him or her in a special, to show people what they can do, would be a good way to endear people to him or her faster.

[Bussani]

It's hard to tell from this one page alone, but yeah, my first thought was: "This artist seems good. I wonder if they're the new main artist."

[rereboy]

Inserted the text myself into the image, and had a go at improving the English while I'm at it.

Good. Next time use Komika Text Kaps. That's the font they used in all the other pages.

[bkev]

I don't think Gogeta Jr was ever cheap enough to use gradients in his art. At least not as part of a background. That said, the character and environment art themselves look much better than that. Wait and see I guess.

[CaBrPi]

So, Universe 3 is the Tapion, Bardock, Raichi, and Daimao universe, right?

[Gyt Kaliba]

So, Universe 3 is the Tapion, Bardock, Raichi, and Daimao universe, right?

Indeed it is, and I'd completely forgotten about Daimao coming from there. I wonder if his story will be in this special as well, but...I can't imagine how. It'll probably take a 3rd special for this Universe eventually to delve into that story.

[DNA]

So far this is the most retarded and out-of-character special I've ever read. And that's saying a lot judging from the previous ones. And I bet it's only going to get worse. Get ready for a roller-coaster ride of shit.

[Marco Polo]

So far this is the most retarded and out-of-character special I've ever read. And that's saying a lot judging from the previous ones. And I bet it's only going to get worse. Get ready for a roller-coaster ride of shit.

???

We haven't seen anything yet

[Tzigi]

So far this is the most retarded and out-of-character special I've ever read. And that's saying a lot judging from the previous ones. And I bet it's only going to get worse. Get ready for a roller-coaster ride of shit.

It's awkward to argue about the special that only few of us can see now (the translation team and even then only up to page 634) but I've got to say that I disagree with you completely. For me the characters are so wonderfully themselves that I couldn't even imagine them reacting differently. Also the art is superb (better than Gogeta Jr when he began DBM and that says A LOT). Beta has, as far as I can see, only one weakness - she doesn't understand that one should vary the tickness of the line - the characters are always drawn with a line that has exactly the same tickness as the background what makes them blend too much...

[Kingdom Heartless]

So far this is the most retarded and out-of-character special I've ever read. And that's saying a lot judging from the previous ones. And I bet it's only going to get worse. Get ready for a roller-coaster ride of shit.

Wow. That was a great impression of one of those internet folks who see a 12 second teaser trailer for a movie and then condemn it as a god-awful piece of trash.

[DBZGTKOSDH]

So far this is the most retarded and out-of-character special I've ever read. And that's saying a lot judging from the previous ones. And I bet it's only going to get worse. Get ready for a roller-coaster ride of shit.

Wow. That was a great impression of one of those internet folks who see a 12 second teaser trailer for a movie and then condemn it as a god-awful piece of trash.

DNA is part of the Translation Team (Portuguese), so he has seen more than us, the normal readers (up to page 634, according to Tzigi, another member of the Translation Team).

[TonyTheTiger]

I don't know how out of character it could be given that we barely got to know these characters at all.