Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

rereboy · Post by **rereboy** » Fri May 22, 2009 6:34 pm

I`ve read the pages regarding this fight in one go, and it is good.

In fact, I`ve re-read the entire manga and the pacing is nice. Nothing takes too long since there aren`t that many pages. One can read the entire manga so far rather quickly.

In my opinion once all the pages of this fight are done, we will be able to read it all in a few minutes. That`s not dragging. The only thing that drags is the time between pages.

SSJ2bardock · Post by **SSJ2bardock** » Sun May 24, 2009 3:50 pm

New page, Cell regenerates, yada yada yada....

Can he please just blow away Dabura in the next page? Please...

Rod · Post by **Rod** » Sun May 24, 2009 4:02 pm

The new minicomic is awesome, he can't remember his characters.

as for the actual strip, can we please move on t the new fight?

Scarz · Post by **Scarz** » Sun May 24, 2009 5:24 pm

Rod wrote:The new minicomic is awesome, he can't remember his characters.

I'm starting to really love the minis.

DNA · Post by **DNA** » Sun May 24, 2009 6:56 pm

Page 123 and the fight is still going. It got pretty gory and brutal. I think you guys are gonna like it. Must be ending really soon.

Dayspring · Post by **Dayspring** » Mon May 25, 2009 12:53 am

Regarding Mini-Comic: Pan is a teenager, not just "older." We knew that, but for those who weren't sure...

Here's a less awkward translation:
Dabura: "Heh*! With your chest sliced open and an arm cut off, you've already lost."
Cell: "Aaah!" (This was a needless change; "Aaah" and "Haaa" are the same in both languages)

*"Keuf" is a forced mocking cough, like a snicker. It's simply doesn't translate at all, as it's not done in English. In English you'd either snicker, snort, or say "Heh/Feh" in this situation. Since that isn't a coughing sound, their "Kof" is neither right nor wrong as a translation.

@DNA: Oh god, more than four pages left?! This fight is going to make up 1/5th of the series! This is fucking ridiculous!

BlueSky · Post by **Kaboom** » Mon May 25, 2009 12:55 am

"Vegetto? Isn't he one of Oda-kun's characters?"

EDIT: Hey, how long has someone else been going by "Kaboom" in the comments? o_O

Innagadadavida · Post by **Innagadadavida** » Wed May 27, 2009 2:07 pm

Looks like Pan is going to have her first fight to the death.

Also, that new page looks terrible. The artwork just looks so strange. The proportions look off or something. Come to think of it, the last few pages have gone downhill in terms of artwork.

Rod · Post by **Rod** » Wed May 27, 2009 2:11 pm

There's something bout Cell as a father that's very unsettling

rereboy · Post by **rereboy** » Wed May 27, 2009 2:40 pm

Innagadadavida wrote:Looks like Pan is going to have her first fight to the death.

Also, that new page looks terrible. The artwork just looks so strange. The proportions look off or something. Come to think of it, the last few pages have gone downhill in terms of artwork.

I don`t see any snificant changes in quality. They still look awesome.

However, I do agree the art looks better in black and white than in color.

Pain · Post by **Pain** » Wed May 27, 2009 3:03 pm

Innagadadavida wrote:Looks like Pan is going to have her first fight to the death.

Also, that new page looks terrible. The artwork just looks so strange. The proportions look off or something. Come to think of it, the last few pages have gone downhill in terms of artwork.

Well the artwork doesn't seem to have changed. It still looks pretty good. But I'd have to agree with rereboy: I'd prefer the pictures without those colors. But oh well, they look great, anyway.

DaemonCorps · Post by **DaemonCorps** » Wed May 27, 2009 3:08 pm

Really, I don't see all that big of a change in the style. Maybe it's because we rarely see Cell and the Jr.s together, so we don't really have a good feel of their proportions to each others. I mean Cell is supposed to be pretty tall, right?

Whatev, awesome picture. Morbidly cute

.

And glad to know that we'll be going to another fight soon enough. The Dabra/Cell fight was getting pretty old after a while. If anything, I think they should pull what they're currently doing with Bleach right now and constantly change between multiple battles all happening at the same time.

Innagadadavida · Post by **Innagadadavida** » Sun May 31, 2009 2:00 pm

http://www.dragonball-multiverse.com/en/page-121.html

This new page is eavily awesome. I take back what I said about the art. Looks like that was just a fluke, the amazing artwork is back.

Kaiser Gogeta · Post by **Kaiser Gogeta** » Sun May 31, 2009 3:06 pm

Well, Game Over, Dabura.

Dayspring · Post by **Dayspring** » Sun May 31, 2009 6:28 pm

Regarding Translation:
Negatives: Dabra's "eavily" should read "gravely," and Cell's "take that" should read "take this." Seriously, this is getting pretty lazy.
Positives: "Vouf" being translated to "Voof" works, as leaving it as "vouf" might lead to mispronouncing it in English ("Vouf" is how you pronounce "Voof" in French).
Oddities: The "^" accents on the Os were removed in the English translation of Makankosappo. This is neither right nor wrong, just a random inconsistency (both versions should either have or not have them).

Still more than 2 pages left. What the hell is left? A page of bragging, a full-page finishing attack... Any other guesses?

Wojak · Post by **Wojak** » Sun May 31, 2009 8:27 pm

Or maybe "eavily" wasn't a mistranslation, and just a typo?
Look at this: Heavily.

As in "You should be heavily wounded".

SSJ2bardock · Post by **SSJ2bardock** » Sun May 31, 2009 8:53 pm

Wojak wrote:Or maybe "eavily" wasn't a mistranslation, and just a typo?
Look at this: Heavily.

As in "You should be heavily wounded".

I thought that was obvious?

Wojak · Post by **Wojak** » Sun May 31, 2009 9:54 pm

SSJ2bardock wrote:
Wojak wrote:Or maybe "eavily" wasn't a mistranslation, and just a typo?
Look at this: Heavily.

As in "You should be heavily wounded".
I thought that was obvious?

I thought that it didn't seem like that. Otherwise I wouldn't type that, ne?

Dayspring · Post by **Dayspring** » Mon Jun 01, 2009 11:15 am

Wojak wrote:Or maybe "eavily" wasn't a mistranslation, and just a typo?
Look at this: Heavily.

As in "You should be heavily wounded".

It's both. Which is why I call it lazy. There's also a mistake in Cell's translation.

The French word for "gravely" is used in the same context for both languages. While the meaning isn't lost by switching to "heaviy," it's a needless change. It's as if they translated the French word impossible to "not possible" instead of "impossible," and then spelled "not" incorrectly.

JulieYBM · Post by **JulieYBM** » Wed Jun 03, 2009 2:18 pm

The page you've all been waiting for: http://www.dragonball-multiverse.com/en/page-122.html

Can't help but smirk at Raditz's comment. I'm quite interested in learning more about Universe 13.