Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

[miguelnuva1]

I'm just waiting for him to hax Vegeta to the point he can beat SSJ3 Goku.

Salagir needs to give the fans the one hax will all want though and make Gogeta take on Vegito.

[rereboy]

[coola]

Wouldn`t it be better, if Gohan just destroy Babidi ship, then distracts Dabura (If he was trained by Vegeta, he could use his dirty methods, and blind Dabura, like during Vegeta vs Zarbon) then kill Babidi quickly, Dabura just returns to his homeworld, Kaioshin come, and take care of ball with Buu, special ends

[rereboy]

Wouldn`t it be better, if Gohan just destroy Babidi ship, then distracts Dabura (If he was trained by Vegeta, he could use his dirty methods, and blind Dabura, like during Vegeta vs Zarbon) then kill Babidi quickly, Dabura just returns to his homeworld, Kaioshin come, and take care of ball with Buu, special ends

The fan fiction I'm writing is kind of like that, but also rather different. When I'm done I'll share with anyone interested. And there will be no Vegeta bullshit.

[Scarz]

Honestly, out of all the specials we've seen so far, this one bothers me the least. Even though I see the glaring issues, I actually don't have a problem with them. I can't believe I'm going to say this but it's been pretty enjoyable so far.

[RandomGuy96]

Wouldn`t it be better, if Gohan just destroy Babidi ship, then distracts Dabura (If he was trained by Vegeta, he could use his dirty methods, and blind Dabura, like during Vegeta vs Zarbon) then kill Babidi quickly, Dabura just returns to his homeworld, Kaioshin come, and take care of ball with Buu, special ends

That will create one huge plothole: why doesn't Gohan just ask Kaioshin to one-shot the androids as a reward? Hell, why doesn't he ask the Demon King? Dabura did have sense of honor after all. And if Kaioshin just takes the ball without taking five minutes out of his day to repay Gohan by walking over to the androids and looking at them, killing them instantly... that just makes Kaioshin look like a stupid ungrateful asshole, and wouldn't really be in character.

[DNA]

Wouldn`t it be better, if Gohan just destroy Babidi ship, then distracts Dabura (If he was trained by Vegeta, he could use his dirty methods, and blind Dabura, like during Vegeta vs Zarbon) then kill Babidi quickly, Dabura just returns to his homeworld, Kaioshin come, and take care of ball with Buu, special ends

That would require writing skills, which Salagir lacks.

[Marco Polo]

So they removed a few events "to gain time and panels", but they kept two pages of Gohan saying Dabra is slow.

[RandomGuy96]

Oh look. More bullshit. Not all that surprising.

[Kamiccolo9]

At least the artwork isn't bad.

[TonyTheTiger]

What bugs me most about the changes is how completely unnecessary they are. There is no reason to screw with Freeza and Dodoria's power levels. It's perfectly believable that a combined Oozaru assault could kill an unprepared and suppressed Freeza. It's perfectly believable that a powerful Saiyan roughly around Bardock's level could delay Dodoria for just long enough to pull a fast one even without fighting (he's not the brightest, after all). You don't have to mess with the numbers to make those plot points work. Same with Bardock's backstory. Salagir changed how Bardock got his powers just because. Ditto with Gohan apparently training with Vegeta. How does it serve anything relevant to the plot at hand? It doesn't facilitate a damn thing. It's change for change's sake.

And given how DBM is primarily written around the butterfly effect, those random changes create all kinds of causality problems. On one hand, we're expected to consider that timelines can skew off of each other because one event happens instead of another. But at the same time we're presented with "alternate" interpretations of events and are told "this is how it always happened" irrespective of any alternate universe interpretation. You can't go around playing butterfly effect games with "the Dragon Ball you know" when even "the Dragon Ball you know" is getting changes of its own. It's like the first rule of experimentation. You only change one variable at a time.

[Marco Polo]

From the comments:

"Sara
Half suspecting Salagir will alter canon further and have Dabura be the one who lobs Gohan's arm off, instead one of the androids, with his fancy devil sword."

[Hellspawn28]

I still wish they would finish up DBM and get it over with. It been almost 5 years since they started DBM and I have been reading since the first few pages back in 2008. It's 2013 and I still feel like the story is going nowhere. I see people talking about they hope for a DBM2, but I doubt that will happen.

[Tzigi]

I still wish they would finish up DBM and get it over with. It been almost 5 years since they started DBM and I have been reading since the first few pages back in 2008. It's 2013 and I still feel like the story is going nowhere. I see people talking about they hope for a DBM2, but I doubt that will happen.

If you read the OP by Salagir, you'll notice this piece of information: "If the story goes well, the tournament will finish and a big adventure will follow."
Also Salagir stated(half-joking, I suspect) that he plans to die of old age after finishing DBM. It would seem that the story will be much longer. And that Salagir won't be bothered much by your comments (he never seemed to be bothered by any negative opinion regarding DBM).

[Marco Polo]

I still wish they would finish up DBM and get it over with. It been almost 5 years since they started DBM and I have been reading since the first few pages back in 2008. It's 2013 and I still feel like the story is going nowhere. I see people talking about they hope for a DBM2, but I doubt that will happen.

If you read the OP by Salagir, you'll notice this piece of information: "If the story goes well, the tournament will finish and a big adventure will follow."
Also Salagir stated(half-joking, I suspect) that he plans to die of old age after finishing DBM. It would seem that the story will be much longer. And that Salagir won't be bothered much by your comments (he never seemed to be bothered by any negative opinion regarding DBM).

DBM will stop when it won't have an audience left, ironically just like DBGT.

[DNA]

DBM will stop when it won't have an audience left, ironically just like DBGT.

Yeah but it does have it's own fandom that keeps booming, the comment sections are always filled to the brim.

[RandomGuy96]

Have you actually read the comments? Pretty funny stuff. Says stuff like:

"Well present Gohan wasn't training while Future Gohan was and should be sharper and a better fighter therefore he should be able to beat Dabura"

"I don't care what some shitty 'official' handbook says, King Cold is the strongest" (comes from a guy with a King Cold avatar)

"its a fanfic ya know so f**k the cannon on this site and evreone whos saying i didnt know buu could revive pure energy even if so its a selmade fanfic site"

"This is a great special screw you guys who say it isnt go troll somewhere else"

(all exact quotes)

I wonder if any sensible fans left when Gogeta Jr left...

[Storm101]

@everyone
Gohan wins the fight against dabura. Remember we didnt see anyone but the androids appear in this timeline at the tournament. Gohan wins against dabura but sadly is defeated by the androids or etc. if not, gohan would have appeared at the tournament. Stop blabbering about daburas power coming down this is a fan made comic things are not supposed to make sense its suppose dto surprise everyone.
You cannt put cannon logic into this comic its not the same you ignorant people.

Dear god...

[Insertclevername]

Whats his problem...

[DNA]

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