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Re: Fanmanga- Who wants to be a superhero?

Post by JulieYBM » Fri Jun 01, 2012 8:12 pm

I'll be damned. Lunch x Tenshinhan is possibly a thing. O.o
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Re: Fanmanga- Who wants to be a superhero?

Post by Saiga » Fri Jun 01, 2012 10:59 pm

Well there you go. In my HC they never did get together, but good for them. Poor Chaotzu would be a total third wheel though. :?
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Post by Gonstead » Sat Jun 02, 2012 4:52 am

Saiga wrote:Poor Chaotzu would be a total third wheel though. :?
or be the victim of being dressed up as a Baby.
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Re: Fanmanga- Who wants to be a superhero?

Post by Piccolo Daimao » Sat Jun 02, 2012 12:23 pm

Gonstead wrote:
Saiga wrote:Poor Chaotzu would be a total third wheel though. :?
or be the victim of being dressed up as a Baby.
Or a sissy maid.

I mean...forget what I just said! :o
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Re: Fanmanga- Who wants to be a superhero?

Post by Saiga » Sat Jun 02, 2012 9:26 pm

Now I think in a future chapter Michsi should have Tenshinhan and Lunch get together. 8) It would be nice to see happen.
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Re: Fanmanga- Who wants to be a superhero?

Post by Scarz » Mon Jun 04, 2012 9:52 am

Piccolo Daimao wrote:
Gonstead wrote:
Saiga wrote:Poor Chaotzu would be a total third wheel though. :?
or be the victim of being dressed up as a Baby.
Or a sissy maid.

I mean...forget what I just said! :o
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Re: Fanmanga- Who wants to be a superhero?

Post by Piccolo Daimao » Mon Jun 04, 2012 10:07 am

Scarz wrote:
Piccolo Daimao wrote:Or a sissy maid.

I mean...forget what I just said! :o
Must... stop... hand from... drawing... must stop...

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Post by Gonstead » Mon Jun 04, 2012 6:41 pm

Good god, KILL IT WITH FIRE!!!!
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Re: Fanmanga- Who wants to be a superhero?

Post by hulkty » Mon Jun 04, 2012 8:10 pm

Very impressive! It seems that you changed the art-style for Launch/Lunch very much, but it still looks familiar to a different manga I've read. Her facial expressions were absolutely amazing. Keep it up!
Do you just upload them here, or do you put them on DeviantArt first or something?

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Re: Fanmanga- Who wants to be a superhero?

Post by Michsi » Tue Jun 05, 2012 8:23 am

CHAOTZU, WHAT HAVE THEY DONE TO YOU!

Very impressive! It seems that you changed the art-style for Launch/Lunch very much, but it still looks familiar to a different manga I've read. Her facial expressions were absolutely amazing. Keep it up!
Do you just upload them here, or do you put them on DeviantArt first or something?
Yes, Lunch does look different the most. I do try to stay faithful to Toriyama's style for the most part, but I can't get it 100% right and ,to be honest ,I don't really want to. Also, his end-of -DB style is the easiest to mimic imo, since it's very simplified and a bit geometric and I don't think he ever drew Lunch in that style for me to better see how she'd look like. I did have the 23rd tournament for reference pictures , but she didn't turn out like that either. I didn't spend too much time on her face though, since I also kinda liked how she looked in this style. Tough I'm curious what manga you mean.

I do upload on DeviantArt too, but this is always the first place I post the new pages.
Now I think in a future chapter Michsi should have Tenshinhan and Lunch get together. It would be nice to see happen.
I'd like to do something like this , but I already have the chapters for this story outlined, so there is sadly no more room for Lunch or the others.

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Post by Michsi » Tue Jun 05, 2012 5:05 pm

Double postin' so to bump the thread with an update :D

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I also wanted to let you all know that the story is kinda drawing to a close. The few next "chapters" are going to be the last ones. I haven't decided yet if I want to have the last pages posted all in one go or just upload them a little at a time, like I have done up until now, but it will be a while before I'll have anything ready.

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Post by Scarz » Tue Jun 05, 2012 5:15 pm

Oh NO! It's... uh... It's... um... Honestly I don't have a clue.
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Post by Michsi » Tue Jun 05, 2012 5:33 pm

Scarz wrote:Oh NO! It's... uh... It's... um... Honestly I don't have clue.
Really? The "he is just temporary" didn't give you a clue :(

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Re: Fanmanga- Who wants to be a superhero?

Post by Piccolo Daimao » Tue Jun 05, 2012 5:44 pm

It's...it's Gotenks, right? :shock:
Michsi wrote:I also wanted to let you all know that the story is kinda drawing to a close. The few next "chapters" are going to be the last ones. I haven't decided yet if I want to have the last pages posted all in one go or just upload them a little at a time, like I have done up until now, but it will be a while before I'll have anything ready.
:cry:

Nah, but you know, Michsi, this has been great. I've loved this. :D
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Re: Fanmanga- Who wants to be a superhero?

Post by batistabus » Tue Jun 05, 2012 7:20 pm

I couldn't really tell it was Gotenks either. It might've helped if you had retained the vest and pants at least, along with his token pose;

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Post by TheDevilsCorpse » Tue Jun 05, 2012 7:36 pm

I think it was pretty evident that it was Gotenks. Goku stating that his mystery person went overboard with their display of power, he's a temporary being and then finally Piccolo's sweet, sweet reaction to having to deal with him again... gold.
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Post by hleV » Tue Jun 05, 2012 7:38 pm

I for whatever reason thought it was Kuririn.

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Post by batistabus » Tue Jun 05, 2012 7:41 pm

hleV wrote:I for whatever reason thought it was Kuririn.
I thought so too...but I'm not really sure why...him or Trunks.

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Post by Z-Dragon » Tue Jun 05, 2012 10:19 pm

Yep, that's so troublesome for Piccolo. I thought that Goku's going to play his role as a villain, but Goten and Trunks were asked by Goku to fuse into Gotenks before playing his role as villain instead.

hleV wrote:I for whatever reason thought it was Kuririn.
Me too, but I see both of hair sides under this hat seems to be Gotenks. I don't think that Krillin's good at acting as a villain, but Gotenks would be best to be acting because of his personality.

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Re: Fanmanga- Who wants to be a superhero?

Post by Chuquita » Tue Jun 05, 2012 10:58 pm

Goku trying to fix things. X3
The poor fast-food vendor in the frame where Vegeta's eating. XD
And Gotenks with a "moostache". :3

Looking forward to seeing how this plays out. Piccolo and Gotenks' personalities clash in such a fun way.
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