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Post by Forgotten Hero » Fri Aug 22, 2008 5:15 pm

Where can I see or read this SSJ2 Bardock action?
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Post by Forgotten Hero » Sun Aug 24, 2008 1:25 am

New page coming in a few hours.
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Post by Forgotten Hero » Mon Aug 25, 2008 12:35 am

Wow! New page was great!
I hope Cargot wins. 8)
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Post by NeptuneKai » Mon Aug 25, 2008 12:44 am

Okay that new page got me pumped up. It looks like Cargot is having an easy time dealing with Nappa's blows but I still hope Nappa wins. :lol:
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Post by Forgotten Hero » Mon Aug 25, 2008 12:47 am

Nappa is a dumb-ass, I hope he dies! :x
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Post by SSj_Rambo » Mon Aug 25, 2008 12:50 am

The sound effect "toc" is unusuall but is somewhat realistic. If Cargot is not a special Namekian Warrior than sadly I predict that Nappa will defeat him, but I'm really hoping that he turns out to be some sort of Super Namek and actually defeating Nappa.

Great pages, keep up the good work. I can't wait to see the rest!

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Post by NeptuneKai » Mon Aug 25, 2008 12:53 am

Forgotten Hero wrote:Nappa is a dumb-ass, I hope he dies! :x
It's clear he won't die, he's in the beginning of the comic looking at the battle in awe which obviously takes place further in the tournament.

After reading through your comic again let me say I really like your design of Pan.
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Post by Forgotten Hero » Mon Aug 25, 2008 12:55 am

It could be Nappa from another dimension....Or he just lost but didn't die.

I hope Future Gohan shows up and Bardock meets Goku.
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Post by The Time Traveller » Mon Aug 25, 2008 9:28 am

Isn't Cargot Dende's brother who got killed on Namek? :D

I want History of Trunks One-armed Gohan too, maybe he went Super Saiyan 2 after Trunks dies. Maybe Bulma stops working on the Time Machine and built him a robotic arm.

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Post by Xyex » Mon Aug 25, 2008 3:17 pm

Forgotten Hero wrote:Where can I see or read this SSJ2 Bardock action?
Check my signature. There's a link to my fanfiction in it. You want the Altered History series. Starts with Legend of the Super Sai-jin. (Sai-jin is my 'AU spelling', long story.) After LotSSJ is Day of Darkness, Return of Recoome, Rise of Vegeta, and then Red Ribbon's Revenge. Heaven and Hell is the currently running saga and next to last of the AH series (though there's still a lot more related stories to go :shock: )
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Post by DNA » Mon Aug 25, 2008 6:24 pm

Although the author doesn't like Tullece, I really like the character. So I've been wondering about the possibility of a universe where he would be the strongest, and this is what came out of it:

So lets take to account each and every villain in dragon ball z.
First step is that Tullece actually manages to kill Goku. He then easily disposes of the rest of the gang which is already half dead, then proceeds to eat all those fruits until basically he "absorbs" all the energy of the planet earth. You can imagine that by now he is really strong, but not enough that he can just go tackle Freeza. So he travels through space and eventually bumps into Slug which he would battle and eventually win, killing most of his best henchmen, but keeping some, now their loyalties shifted, he most likely got some new henchmen and a bunch of footsoldiers. The next step is to slowly dispose of Freeza bases and henchmen, Kiwi for example and eventually he would have to battle Raditz, Nappa and Vegeta.

Now, since this boy's been busy, fighting Slug and probably eating more of those fruits, he's bound to be more than a match for these guys, but still the fight is hard and as he survives, his power level ups again. Nice.

He manages to keep destroying Freezas army in the shadows, Freeza keeps sending lackeys and they keep being killed, Zarbon and Dodoria eventually suffer the same fate, until Freeza sends the entire Ginew Tokusentai. Now again, although they are strong, Tullece is not dumb and certainly kept recovering and eating more of those magic fruits of him. He also has some henchmen to help him, so he eventually manages to destroy the Ginew Tokusentai. Long story short, slowly but surely, Freeza, Coola and Cold go down as well.

So, since Earth has been destroyed long ago, neither the Androids nor Cell are never created. Also since the Kaio's planet is never destroyed, Bojack is kept sealed. And furthermore, Buu and Hildegarn are never released. Janemba is also never formed.

So there is only one last obstacle for his total universal domination: Brolly. And since he looks so much like Goku, is in for a world of trouble. But since by the time he actually reaches Brolly he will probably know how to transform into a Super Saiyan, that with all the battle experience, lots of fruits and dirty fighting tactics, he eventually manages to destroy Brolly.

And now we have Emperor Tullece of the Universe, with all of Slugs, Freezas and Paragus footsoldiers at his disposition and more.
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Post by Raki » Mon Aug 25, 2008 6:41 pm

DNA wrote:*Tullece Story
Forget about Kaioshin....or Boo?
The series doesn't start with the arrival of Raditz. Stop being lazy and watch Dragonball.

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Post by SSJ2bardock » Mon Aug 25, 2008 6:46 pm

Raki wrote:
DNA wrote:*Tullece Story
Forget about Kaioshin....or Boo?
Read the whole thing, he explained both of those. :wink:
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Post by Raki » Mon Aug 25, 2008 6:47 pm

SSJ2bardock wrote:
Raki wrote:
DNA wrote:*Tullece Story
Forget about Kaioshin....or Boo?
Read the whole thing, he explained both of those. :wink:
No Supreme Kai(Kaioshin) in that excellent fanfic. I just saw Buu in the second re-read I did.
The series doesn't start with the arrival of Raditz. Stop being lazy and watch Dragonball.

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Post by DNA » Mon Aug 25, 2008 6:55 pm

Well, in the original universe (the one in the series) Kaioshin only intervene when Buu was around. So he probably didn't thought that Tullece was a real threat to the universe, although he was eating planets every now and then... but also eliminating universal threats... so it's an even thing. Again, remember that Kaioshin didn't intervene against Freeza.

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Post by Pain » Mon Aug 25, 2008 7:09 pm

These pages are very nice. The story so far is like a total mystery. Feel like it leaves a cliffhanger after every page.
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Post by Rocketman » Mon Aug 25, 2008 8:56 pm

DNA wrote:Well, in the original universe (the one in the series) Kaioshin only intervene when Buu was around. So he probably didn't thought that Tullece was a real threat to the universe, although he was eating planets every now and then... but also eliminating universal threats... so it's an even thing. Again, remember that Kaioshin didn't intervene against Freeza.
Also, unless I missed it, Tullece isn't immortal in the story.

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Post by Saiyan-Professor » Mon Aug 25, 2008 10:51 pm

DNA wrote:So there is only one last obstacle for his total universal domination: Brolly. And since he looks so much like Goku, is in for a world of trouble. But since by the time he actually reaches Brolly he will probably know how to transform into a Super Saiyan, that with all the battle experience, lots of fruits and dirty fighting tactics, he eventually manages to destroy Brolly.
Would that be a realistic scenario concerning Broli? All of those other instances in which you mentioned were contingent on Son Goku and his latter interaction with Vegeta. Take those two out of the equation then all that you mentioned would occur. However, Broli is an unknown. If Paragus’ original intent was removed i.e. taking revenge on the royal house of Vegeta and conquering earth then his attentions may have turned else where so that would most likely quash the chances of their first meeting. Paragus would probably have sought to destroy the Cold clan himself through Broli. Perhaps they would have met Tullece at the same time to battle Freeza and Tullece presence would have initiated a psychotic episode in Broli that freed him from his father’s control and thus ending Tullece and Freeza’s life. Alternatively, it could have played out differently with Paragus and Broli seeking after Tullece in order to capitalize on his fame (that is if I kill the warrior that killed the strongest fighter in the known galaxies then I can take that designation).

Then there is the strength factor to take into consideration. If I recall accurately the movie relates that only certain type of planets held the intrinsic qualities that were able to germinate the Shinseijû. Therefore, I do not think he could just casually fly around the universe planting the seed repeatedly in order to capitalize on its fruitage. Then once Freeza was defeated would Tullece even concern himself with his combat strength? He would have accomplished his goal of successfully overthrowing the ruling polity. Once he fought Broli in mortal combat, his resemblance to Kakarrot would send Broli into a fit of rage and awaken his “Legendary” transformation that clearly overwhelms a single Super Saiyan that has neglected his physical development. He also possibly would have an eventual confrontation with Redgic or General Rilld (since Tullece is Saiyan) if he had successfully defeated Broli. According to Dragonball GT, Rilld alone is equal to or greater in power than Majin Buu is, if not him then one of the other Neo Machine Mutants. You have Lood or Super Sigma for example. I know that the majority here has a distaste for GT with the exception of a minority (I would be included in that marginal group), so if you take the initial GT villains out of the equation Tullece would still have to contend with Broli.
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Post by SSj_Rambo » Mon Aug 25, 2008 11:52 pm

The large sphere/planet that Nappa and Cargot are fighting on reminds me a lot of Kaio-sama's planet...I wonder if it has an increased gravity? If the gravity is changeable for that little sphere it would be great for some of the bigger fights; maybe we'll see somewhat of a repeat of the Vegeta vs Pui Pui fight, where someone thinks a certain amount of gravity gives them an advantage then gets blown away.

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Post by Forgotten Hero » Tue Aug 26, 2008 12:51 am

Xyex wrote:
Forgotten Hero wrote:Where can I see or read this SSJ2 Bardock action?
Check my signature. There's a link to my fanfiction in it. You want the Altered History series. Starts with Legend of the Super Sai-jin. (Sai-jin is my 'AU spelling', long story.) After LotSSJ is Day of Darkness, Return of Recoome, Rise of Vegeta, and then Red Ribbon's Revenge. Heaven and Hell is the currently running saga and next to last of the AH series (though there's still a lot more related stories to go :shock: )
Ok sweet! Thanks! :wink:
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