Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

[hulkty]

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Thanks again Malik!

[Cetra]

Seems a little to early and easy for the "release it all" boost but I guess that is okay. It does not always need to take 5 episodes.

Still - Gohan get out of there. Even if he would have hurt him, he either made him more angry or amused so he decides to torture Gohan even more.

[TheGmGoken]

Update is a little early this week because of the holiday. Enjoy!

I'll repost because the last pages were on the last page

[KentalSSJ6]

I saw some SSJ4 eyes there. That Gohan's Mystic form finally tapping into that SSJ4 power?

[Flame Dragon]

Classic Vegeta face on Bottom Left of 1st Page

[Malik_DBNA]

I saw some SSJ4 eyes there. That Gohan's Mystic form finally tapping into that SSJ4 power?

A little

[KentalSSJ6]

I saw some SSJ4 eyes there. That Gohan's Mystic form finally tapping into that SSJ4 power?

A little

So Gohan gets a pseudo SSJ4 form due to his Mystic Form I assume? Or is this along the lines of a Kaio-Ken for him?

[Malik_DBNA]

So Gohan gets a pseudo SSJ4 form due to his Mystic Form I assume? Or is this along the lines of a Kaio-Ken for him?

I can't say. It'll be fully understood soon

Seems a little to early and easy for the "release it all" boost but I guess that is okay. It does not always need to take 5 episodes.

Still - Gohan get out of there. Even if he would have hurt him, he either made him more angry or amused so he decides to torture Gohan even more.

It happened frequently through the early part of Z did it not? Gohan would frequently tap into his reserves, and then in a flash it was gone.

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Thanks again Malik!

No problem

[Cetra]

It happened frequently through the early part of Z did it not? Gohan would frequently tap into his reserves, and then in a flash it was gone.

For some (visibly) smaller (in comparison) attacks yes. This seems a bit too much but as said, I don't have anything against it. The pace of showing attacks does not need to be long. This way we can see more early.

[Malik_DBNA]

Ending of Chapter 33



Revised Chapter 7 Title Page


Revised pages from Chapter 8

[TheGmGoken]

Goten returns!

[Cetra]

Gohan never happened to read Dragon Ball in his entire life. Even though Dragon Ball is his entire life (mainly Goku's but you know what I mean). This is such a classic Dragon Ball-only the reader knows the action was useless from the very beginning in terms of winning-moment.

[Malik_DBNA]

Gohan never happened to read Dragon Ball in his entire life. Even though Dragon Ball is his entire life (mainly Goku's but you know what I mean). This is such a classic Dragon Ball-only the reader knows the action was useless from the very beginning in terms of winning-moment.

"Did we get him?"
"We can sense his power level, why do you bother asking?"
"I'm an optimist"

[Cetra]

Gohan. The only thing missing is not dodging the next move.

[Malik_DBNA]

Gohan. The only thing missing is not dodging the next move.

I would love nothing more then to put more team four star references in my comic, but I'm afraid it would make it too gimmicky

[TheGmGoken]

Gohan. The only thing missing is not dodging the next move.

I would love nothing more then to put more team four star references in my comic, but I'm afraid it would make it too gimmicky

Maybe a cameo? Like say they're at home. You can have a tot or pictures with TFS. Or even a picture of MasakoX since he does voice your character

[KentalSSJ6]

Gohan. The only thing missing is not dodging the next move.

I would love nothing more then to put more team four star references in my comic, but I'm afraid it would make it too gimmicky

How bout you draw T4S as background characters for a cameo?

[Malik_DBNA]

Gohan. The only thing missing is not dodging the next move.

I would love nothing more then to put more team four star references in my comic, but I'm afraid it would make it too gimmicky

How bout you draw T4S as background characters for a cameo?

I had thought about it before. Maybe during the world tournament

[Malik_DBNA]

Revised Chapter 8 pages

[goku1234]

Revised Chapter 8 pages

awesome and now on to revised chapter 9!!