Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

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Re: Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

Post by Flame Dragon » Tue Aug 19, 2014 6:39 pm

The new design for SSJ5 looks badass. Especially Rigor, Black and Gold is such a great combination, coupled with his black sclerae eyes he looks much more intimidating than before.

Can't say i liked the old design, while it was certainly more unique, it lacked in the consistency factor
(Why would an evolution of SSJ4 lose the body hair for no reason? It made no sense to me. Especially since SSJ4 was basically SSJ + Oozaru body to me so ditching the hair would just remove the Oozaru portion to me.)
and looked kinda bland to me.
So overall, i think the change is for the best.

Now i think you should practice drawing Goku SSJ4 hair, it gives you much trouble i see :)



And now for an in-universe question... Can Rigor actually defeat Lord Beerus?
Rigor is definitely more powerful, but he technically should have a huge disadvantage because of his lack of Godly Ki.

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Re: Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

Post by Cetra » Tue Aug 19, 2014 7:26 pm

I like the SSJ4 hair.


And Rigor would wipe the floor with Beerus. Just as he could with the Kaioshin who also have godly Ki.
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Re: Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

Post by enjyu123 » Thu Aug 21, 2014 9:57 pm

Does any one know when new chapters will come out, sorry but I'm but uninformed, and I really love this manga ( yes ill call it a real manga since it is that good.Also Malik I was wondering if you are going to incorporate the new things we see in the 2015 movie.
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Re: Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

Post by DragonBalllKaiHD » Thu Aug 21, 2014 10:58 pm

New pages come out every week. Kind of like Weekly Shonen Jump.
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Re: Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

Post by enjyu123 » Fri Aug 22, 2014 9:04 am

DragonBalllKaiHD wrote:New pages come out every week. Kind of like Weekly Shonen Jump.
Thanks for the info. :D
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Re: Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

Post by dbzfan7 » Fri Aug 22, 2014 1:49 pm

Still not a fan of back to gold again...just makes SSJ4 seem out of place by being the only form with a different Super Saiyan hair colour.
Why Dragon Ball Consistency in something such as power levels matter!

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Re: Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

Post by coola » Tue Aug 26, 2014 11:31 am

I've finally recieved Volume 1, and I'm really enjoying it, i was little afraid, it would look strange in Daizenshuu format, but, it looks really nice, and bonus chapter was really cool as well, looking forward for Volume 2 :)
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Post by Malik_DBNA » Sat Aug 30, 2014 2:06 am

Facebook Followers have spoken and demanded, so here's History of Rigor part 1 and part 2
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Re: Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

Post by KentalSSJ6 » Sat Aug 30, 2014 4:39 am

Well ain't Rigor just a little badass.
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Re: Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

Post by Cetra » Sat Aug 30, 2014 6:43 am

That was very nice. And Separi: "Aww ..."

Could it be that without that Vegeta would have never killed Rigor's mother? And Vegeta is probably all "no one witnessed this either" right after that?
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Re: Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

Post by coola » Sat Aug 30, 2014 9:15 am

Even as 3/4 year old, Vegeta was a jerk, if Freeza didnt decide to blow Vegeta up, i can imagine, that someday rebel would start, little Saiyans are so adorable :) I can see inspiration from Bardock squad, at least in characters (There even is food loving guy) it make me wonder how Vegeta could forget Rigor, with his ego, and whole elite/low level class talk, surely he would remember a Saiyan, who dared to be close to him in strength.
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Re: Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

Post by DragonBalllKaiHD » Sat Aug 30, 2014 10:54 pm

Seriously, someone has to animate this! If we could get Shida or Nakatsuru to do it, this would be the best special ever. Don't you agree, JulieYBM? :wink:
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Re: Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

Post by coola » Sun Aug 31, 2014 7:26 am

But who would voice new characters? Personally, i ssee Nana Mizuki as perfect Separi, she is great with caring and badass characters. Not sure who would voice Rigor and their kids.
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Re: Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

Post by Doctor. » Sun Aug 31, 2014 10:42 am

I'm not a fan of stories that follow the GT line and stories that bring more Saiyan survivors into the picture, so I didn't like this much in the beginning. It was the Aladjinn deal that made me like this doujin. However, I disliked how it's Vegeta again who gets taken over. One would think that after being taken over twice, he would build up some resistance.

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Re: Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

Post by ChahikoDBZ » Fri Sep 05, 2014 5:52 am

I'm really looking forward to seeing the fight between Rigor and Vegeta. This is very interesting so far. Keep it up Malik!
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Re: Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

Post by coola » Fri Sep 12, 2014 3:26 am

Sorry if it sound like a nitpick, but, Rigor and others are about 4-5 years old in this, Radditz later say about Gohan, that "It is impossible for mere kid to have power level above 710!" Not to mention, that Radditz look kinda patheticly weak with his 1200 pl at adult age, surely not elite he like to call himself.
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Re: Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

Post by Cetra » Fri Sep 12, 2014 7:58 am

I am sure Vegeta wouldn't tell Raditz that he got owned pretty badly. Just as no one knew for sure Rigor is the Saiyajin of Legend (I guess).
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Re: Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

Post by Malik_DBNA » Fri Sep 12, 2014 5:26 pm

Cetra makes valid points that I was going to state. Also, Vegeta later contradicts Radtiz' statement when he said he surpassed King Vegeta when he was only a child. Raditz is likely astounded by Gohan seeing as Gohan clearly was not a trained fighter, and let's face facts, Raditz has always been regarded as pathetically weak. Not every Saiyan develops at the same rate, and some are limited to extremely low power. Raditz is a great example. Also, look at Nappa. Nappa was much older than Vegeta, and was furiously hungry for battle, yet his PL sat around 7000.

You have to remember that in this timeline, Vegeta and Rigor were born with already highly irregular power (as stated by Gine). It would make sense that after a few combat missions, they would have PLs exceeding 1000. This would especially be the case in regards to Rigor, as he has a heightened Zenkai, and gets stronger than normal Saiyans after severe injuries.

Rigor's heightened Zenkai always boosts him by 50% after severe injuries, sometimes more depending on the severity. So lets take a look his PL after just one Zenkai:

Rigor's birth power: 538
1st Zenkai boost amount: 269
Rigor's power after 1st Zenkai: 807

So, as you can see, after just ONE near-death beating, Rigor's power is only 200 away from exceeding 1000. He has been on multiple missions at the point in time when we see him in part two, so even if he had only been severely injured ONCE more in those missions, his PL would be 1210. Even if he hadn't been beaten to near death at all during that time and only received modest power boosts, his PL would still exceed 1000. The same goes for Vegeta.

Here's the (tentative) PLs for the squad at the time of Part 2:
Prince Vegeta: 1400
Rigor: 1350
Tucel: 1100
Cabba: 1000
Separi: 250

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Re: Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

Post by Cetra » Fri Sep 12, 2014 6:09 pm

On the other hand, Vegeta must have coped with it very well if he doesn't even remember that after Rigor introduces himself about half a century later. Not even a "!", "It is him! The one who put up a fight against me!" or something like that - well at least you have not drawn that reaction until now for the momet when Rigor explained who he is.

And yes, it fits that elite warriors have a high battle power early while it might be Raditz' battle power as an adult.
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Re: Fanmanga - Dragon Ball New Age

Post by Malik_DBNA » Mon Sep 15, 2014 3:23 pm

Next batch of revised pages. Chapter 10
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