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Post by Terra-jin » Mon Sep 01, 2008 5:18 am

About DNA's Tullece story: wouldn't it be more likely for the Saiyans to switch sides with Tullece, once he gets to them? I mean, a fellow Saiyan out to destroy the tyrant which destroyed their homeworld and all? Seems like Raditz and Nappa would be more than willing to help out. About Vegeta: well, he'd probably have a hard time accepting a Saiyan low-class who surpassed him (sound familiar?) but between him and Freeza, I'd say he'd go for Tullece after all.
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Post by Xyex » Mon Sep 01, 2008 5:28 am

Now, since this boy's been busy, fighting Slug and probably eating more of those fruits, he's bound to be more than a match for these guys, but still the fight is hard and as he survives, his power level ups again. Nice.
Probablem being, Turles was already stronger than Vegeta when he arrived on Earth. Piccolo was at 18,000 in movie 3 and Turles blocked a Special Beam Canon with one hand and little effort. And considering all the Kaiokens Goku piled on Turles was likely over 100,000 just by the end of the movie. And Slug's easily in the 1 million range. So if eating all the fruit puts Turles up to Slug levels Raditz, Nappa, and Vegeta would be swatted aside with ease.
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Post by Forgotten Hero » Mon Sep 01, 2008 4:32 pm

Jheece forfeits?!?! I hope they don't allow forfeiting. Freeza will nail him.
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Post by DNA » Mon Sep 01, 2008 9:34 pm

To Rocketman:
I never said he was immortal, but he could have learned about the Namek Dragon Balls and wished for it now that you mention it

To Saiyan-Professor:
I didn't took GT into consideration because the author didn't as well.
As for Brolly, I do understand your point, but you also have to think, how did Freeza Family resist against Brolly? And Cell? And the Androids? They are all there.
We could also assume that Brolly didn't even exist in that universe, or again, Tullece asked for immortality, or maybe he was just that good at fighting dirty.
And about the "stopping to concern about his strenght" stuff, he's a Saiyan, they never do that, they will continue to improve because they love fighting and becoming stronger.

To Terra-jin:
That makes sense, although I don't see Vegeta and Tullece working well together... Also, Vegeta didn't see any problem in loosing Raditz and later dispose of Nappa, so even if Tullece didn't kill then there, they would turn against him after and probably get killed then. Either way it doesn't matter, the point is that he killed them.

To Xyex:
I didn't say the fight against Tullece was hard, also, I don't really take power levels into account, but you are probably right.
But either way that is not the point. The point his that he would fight and win.

The little story I wrote was only plot-points and guidelines to what would probably happen, the only edgy thing is really against Brolly. I don't like it, but since this is a story about how Tullece would be the strongest in his universe, we have to find a way for him to dispose of Brolly.

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Post by Rocketman » Tue Sep 02, 2008 12:10 am

DNA wrote:To Rocketman:
I never said he was immortal, but he could have learned about the Namek Dragon Balls and wished for it now that you mention it
Does he speak Namek? :P

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Post by DNA » Tue Sep 02, 2008 5:35 am

Why do you keep bursting my bubble ;_; all right, so he's not immortal, that's completely besides the point, and never was an issue in the first place.

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Post by Saiyan-Professor » Wed Sep 03, 2008 3:44 am

DNA wrote:To Saiyan-Professor:

And about the "stopping to concern about his strenght" stuff, he's a Saiyan, they never do that, they will continue to improve because they love fighting and becoming stronger.

Yes, it is true that Saiyans are devoted to fighting but the only time that they get an increase in strength is when they have a near death experience. On the other hand, they can also achieve this if they endure through intense training exercises that push them beyond their physical threshold. Look at the number of years Vegeta served Freeza, yet it is implied that he did not start making strides worth noticing as far as combat power is concerned until he had his encounter with the warriors on earth. Even if we look back at the Bardock special, there we see his training regimen consisting of his contending with opponents that are far weaker than he is i.e. Saibaimen. Bardock was the only that acquired a constant power increase and that was because of the difficulty level of his missions.

In the manga (Viz), Vegeta says while watching Kakarrot exchange blows with Kidd Buu, “I still fight to win…to enjoy it…to kill enemies…to puff up my pride.” I think this statement sheds some light on the psychology of the Saiyans. While it is true that they love to fight strong opponents (Vegeta’s own words corroborates this some chapters back when explaining why he was going to let Cell reach his perfect state), their pride also compels them to fight weak opponents in order to stroke their own egos. I believe that I can safely say that this attitude can be superimposed on Tullece. Given the fact that the movie seemed to not only present us with a look at what Kakarrot would have been like if he did not suffer brain damage but also a battle that somewhat parallels the fight with Vegeta from the Saiyan Saga. In addition, we must take into account that Tullece and Vegeta were both Saiyans raised on Planet Vegeta; they would naturally share similar behavior patterns and way of thinking.

Subsequent to the defeat of Freeza, Tullece would have thought that there would not have been any further obstructions to reaching his goal of universal dominance. All through the Namek Saga, all we heard was how Freeza was the epitome of strength and skill. I believe that Tullece’s skills would eventually wane unless a new challenger appeared soon after the defeat of Freeza. Therefore, about the time Broli would appear Tullece would not be much of an obstacle.
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Post by DNA » Wed Sep 03, 2008 5:48 am

Well... Again, we can just eliminate Brolly from the equation.
I was going to say that Vegeta kept training even if there were no menaces when he discovered that his body improved by surpassing is own limits, but, to be frank, what moved him was the prospect of one day defeating Goku.

So yeah, if it bothers so much, if it wouldn't work, let's just say that Brolly never existed in that story.

But still I can find another way though. Tullece had a large empire by then, with Slug's and Freeza's footsoldiers, so information about a rival group of people would flow to him and he would learn it was the Legendary Super Saiyan, being a more arrogant bitch than Vegeta his, I don't believe he would cower in fear, but would start training like hell to surpass his limits to defeat him. Even if he didn't know how strong the Legendary Super Saiyan was, he would have a pretty good idea that he was strong beyond belief.

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Post by Saiyan-Professor » Wed Sep 03, 2008 9:15 am

DNA wrote:So yeah, if it bothers so much....
It does not bother me it is just that your statements assisted me in clarifying some things that I have been pondering over for a while.
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Post by DNA » Wed Sep 03, 2008 5:17 pm

It's all right, it's just that Vegeta and his team are there and so are the Freeza Family, if Brolly existed in their universe that means that they managed to defeat them, so I though, why not Tullece as well?

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Post by Forgotten Hero » Wed Sep 03, 2008 10:03 pm

This new fight is kinda boring at first glance. Goku isn't going to have any trouble...
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Post by Saiyan-Professor » Thu Sep 11, 2008 3:33 pm

A new page is up on the Dragonball Multiverse site.

http://www.dragonball-multiverse.com/en/page-44.html
The Saiyans are very much like the Klingons and Jem'Hadar.

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Post by Forgotten Hero » Fri Sep 12, 2008 12:14 am

Just a shout-out, I hope to see Future Gohan in his own universe.
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Post by SSJ2bardock » Fri Sep 12, 2008 12:17 am

Who's the guy with the mask/visor on page 44, he looks really cool.
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Post by Forgotten Hero » Fri Sep 12, 2008 12:18 am

So random dude from Universe 19.
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Post by testing223 » Sun Sep 14, 2008 5:32 am

Liking this work, it takes all the fanfiction ideas everyone's ever had and throws them into a giant mess. :) KEep it up!

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Post by Forgotten Hero » Sun Sep 14, 2008 5:43 am

testing223 wrote:Liking this work, it takes all the fanfiction ideas everyone's ever had and throws them into a giant mess. :) KEep it up!
Well, I see no Future Gohan!!!
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Post by Snail » Sun Sep 14, 2008 6:07 am

Best fan manga I have ever had the pleasure of reading. Holy christ; I'm actually pumped for more!

I'm assuming we'll see a Super Saiyan 3 Vegeta somewhere along the line.

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Post by Forgotten Hero » Sun Sep 14, 2008 6:32 am

It's not a manga, but I just finished the first chapter or prologue of my Future Gohan fanfic.
The story is going to be from Goku's death to Future Gohan's death. So what happens between that time skip.
I'll probably make a few more chapters before releasing it.
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Post by Victator Supreme » Sun Sep 14, 2008 6:41 am

The Vegetto/Brolli fight was kinda dumb. ut for all we know Vegetto was laughing off everything. Brolli did look like he was struggling. At least it did not have two Super Saiyan 4's defeated in seconds.

Just read it. Really nice little project. I mean the person is not Toriyama. But it certainly respects the spirit of the manga than any of the others.
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