Fan Works Explosion

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Re: Fan Works Explosion

Post by Silver Sinspawn » Fri Apr 23, 2010 5:34 am

Okay, so i dropped the Pretty Fly Krillin song.
I'll do it later.
But i just wrote a song parody.
It's done in the point of view of Yamcha, and I call it "Gohan's Mom"

Gohan's mom has got it goin' on
Gohan's mom has got it goin' on
Gohan's mom has got it goin' on
Gohan's mom has got it goin' on

Gohan, can I come over because, cat loves food (Cat loves food)
We can hang while Vegeta kills Apool (Kills Apool)
Did your mom get back from the World tournament? (World tournament)
Is she there, or is she trying to give me the slip? (give me the slip)

You know, I'm not the little bitch that I used to be
I got blown up now, Chi Chi can't you see

Gohan's mom has got it goin' on
She's I want and i've waited for so long
Gohan, can't you see Bulma's not the girl for me
I know it might be wrong but I'm in love with Gohan's mom

Gohan's mom has got it goin' on
Gohan's mom has got it goin' on

Gohan, do you remember when I got impaled? (got impaled)
Your mom came out and told me, that i faaaaaail (that i fail)
I could tell she liked me from the way she stared (the way she stared)
And the way she said, "You karate bum, get the hell out of here" (get the hell out of here)

And I know that you think I'm pathetic, see?
But since your dad's gonna die, your mom could use a guy like me

Gohan's mom has got it goin' on
She's I want, and he's waited so long
Gohan, can't you see Bulma's not the girl for me
I know it might be wrong,
but I'm in love with Gohan's mom

Gohan's mom has got it goin' on
She's all I want and I've waited for so long,
Gohan can't you see Bulma's not the girl for me,
I know it might be wrong but oh oh
(I know it might be wrong)
I'm in love with (Gohan's mom oh oh)
(Gohans mom oh oh)
I'm in love with Gohan's mom


a lot of it is based on the Yamcha Densetsu
Oh, you think the Grand Tour is your ally, you merely stepped into the Grand Tour. I was born in it, moulded by it. I didn’t see the Super until I was already a man; by then, it was nothing to me but blinding!

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Re: Fan Works Explosion

Post by Godo » Fri Apr 23, 2010 6:19 am

Silver Sinspawn wrote:Song
That's awesome. You seem to have potential.
I once made a thread about remaking songs into Dragonball songs: http://daizex.fanboyreview.net/viewtopi ... =6&t=12485
If you are interested in writing some there, I will make some too.

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Post by Silver Sinspawn » Sat Apr 24, 2010 2:03 am

I'm all for that!
Oh, you think the Grand Tour is your ally, you merely stepped into the Grand Tour. I was born in it, moulded by it. I didn’t see the Super until I was already a man; by then, it was nothing to me but blinding!

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Post by Silver Sinspawn » Sat Apr 24, 2010 8:22 am

SSJ2bardock wrote:Decided to put my own spin on a "demotivational poster" so tell me which one you think is better.

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Re: Fan Works Explosion

Post by El Diabeetus » Sun Apr 25, 2010 4:29 pm

Last night, I went and made a cover of Dragon Soul in Japanese, hopefully it sounds okay:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uglDRIluuT8

I made "Lucky, Dragon Soul, etc." pronounced like in English since they're technically English within the song.

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Re: Fan Works Explosion

Post by Piccolo Daimaoh » Sun Apr 25, 2010 11:18 pm

As long as we're on the subject of motivational posters, I fucking loled when I saw this:


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Who the hell does these subtitles?

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Re: Fan Works Explosion

Post by Silver Sinspawn » Mon Apr 26, 2010 12:09 am

I made a lot of motivational posters for the forum I posted the URL to, should I reupload them to here, or just leave them?
Oh, you think the Grand Tour is your ally, you merely stepped into the Grand Tour. I was born in it, moulded by it. I didn’t see the Super until I was already a man; by then, it was nothing to me but blinding!

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Post by Piccolo Daimaoh » Mon Apr 26, 2010 12:11 am

Silver Sinspawn wrote:I made a lot of motivational posters for the forum I posted the URL to, should I reupload them to here, or just leave them?
I say re-upload them here, they are fan works after all.

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Post by Silver Sinspawn » Mon Apr 26, 2010 12:26 am

I'll have to find them, so it may take a while.
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Post by Big Momma » Mon Apr 26, 2010 5:09 pm

Piccolo Daimaoh wrote:As long as we're on the subject of motivational posters, I fucking loled when I saw this:

Who the hell does these subtitles?
That would be Mister Steve Simmons from FUNimation. He goes by the name of Daimao here. He does fine work.
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Post by UristtheGreat » Mon Apr 26, 2010 10:28 pm

Piccolo Daimaoh wrote:As long as we're on the subject of motivational posters, I fucking loled when I saw this:


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It's an obvious typo, it's actually "Bonk". :lol:
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Re: Fan Works Explosion

Post by bkev » Mon Apr 26, 2010 10:30 pm

That font doesn't look like FUNi's to me.... am I imagining things, or did they used to use a different less-fugly one?
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Post by Silver Sinspawn » Sun May 02, 2010 5:05 am

Oh, you think the Grand Tour is your ally, you merely stepped into the Grand Tour. I was born in it, moulded by it. I didn’t see the Super until I was already a man; by then, it was nothing to me but blinding!

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Re: Fan Works Explosion

Post by Piccolo Daimaoh » Sun May 02, 2010 5:33 am

Big Momma wrote:
Piccolo Daimaoh wrote:As long as we're on the subject of motivational posters, I fucking loled when I saw this:

Who the hell does these subtitles?
That would be Mister Steve Simmons from FUNimation. He goes by the name of Daimao here. He does fine work.
I don't doubt the quality of this work, I just found that image hilarious especially because the Katakana reads "gann".

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Re: Fan Works Explosion

Post by Kaboom » Mon May 03, 2010 1:45 am

So, I tried to come up with some English lyrics for one of my favorite new DragonBall songs, Saiyan Blood. The text is intended to be as close in meaning as possible to the straight-up Japanese translation, while sounding more lyrical and natural in English. Try singing along with it, and lemme know what you think.

SAIYAN BLOOD
SONG
TRANSLATION

I don't care what you do or who you may be,
You will never be a match for me,
I am the Prince of Saiyans,
My name will carry on.

No matter how many times I may fall,
My warrior's pride is standing tall,
I am the Prince of Saiyans,
And I am number one!

With every battle, with every wound, I will climb higher.
My power will increase.
The blood of fighters is rushing through my veins!

Saiyan blood!
Get you down! Get you down!
I have been born and bred to battle to the end!
Saiyan blood!
Beat you down! Beat you down!
It is my destiny to become the legend!

I have but one sole lifelong desire,
To eternally fuel my raging fire,
I am the Prince of Saiyans,
The universe will bow.

Don't get too full of yourself, Kakarrot.
I'm every bit the elite that you're not!
I am the Prince of Saiyans,
I'm a league of my own!

All the power, all the speed,
Rises within me,
I will get stronger still.
I will rise to any height, I will ascend beyond the stars!

Saiyan blood!
Get you down! Get you down!
The heart's an enemy that I will overthrow!
Saiyan blood!
Beat you down! Beat you down!
To rise beyond the rest I'll let my evil grow!

(Guitar Solo)

I can only be bested by myself.
That destiny is mine!
Even if I become a lonely star,
I still know I will shine!

Saiyan blood!
Get you down! Get you down!
If you think you can stand before me and win,
Saiyan blood!
Beat you down! Beat you down!
You've got to have the guts to cast off everything!

Saiyan blood!
Get you down! Get you down!
I have been born and bred to battle to the end!
Saiyan blood!
Beat you down! Beat you down!
It is my destiny to become the legend!
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Re: Fan Works Explosion

Post by El Diabeetus » Mon May 03, 2010 6:20 pm

Kaboom wrote:Wall-o'-text
That's actually really good and it does fit with the rhythm of the song. You should try Super Dragon Soul or Only a Chilling Elegy.

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This is gonna sound weird but can someone "hick/redneck"-up these lines for Goku I'm about to do in a transform to SSJ Fandub. I wanna see how this turns out in English using the incorrect way to speak for Goku.

You're gonna regret that...
How dare you... How dare you?!

Gohan, go back to earth...
Take Piccolo with you too, he's alive. But just barely...

I said, you better go home now...
Before I lose all my reasoning!

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Post by Kiyza » Mon May 03, 2010 8:59 pm

SSJ4 Furanki wrote:This is gonna sound weird but can someone "hick/redneck"-up these lines for Goku I'm about to do in a transform to SSJ Fandub. I wanna see how this turns out in English using the incorrect way to speak for Goku.

You're gonna regret that...
How dare you... How dare you?!

Gohan, go back to earth...
Take Piccolo with you too, he's alive. But just barely...

I said, you better go home now...
Before I lose all my reasoning!
I've been writing characters with hick accents for quite some time now, and I'd say I'd do it something like this:

You... 'm gonna make ya regret that.
(Not sure for how dare you, it just doesn't sound quite right, leave it as is or make a different line)
Gohan, go on back t' Earth
Ya better take Piccolo with ya too. He's still alive... but jus' barely.
I said, ya better go home now.
Before I lose m'self!

I changed the lines a bit. How does it sound?

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Re: Fan Works Explosion

Post by El Diabeetus » Mon May 03, 2010 9:01 pm

Kiyza wrote:
SSJ4 Furanki wrote:This is gonna sound weird but can someone "hick/redneck"-up these lines for Goku I'm about to do in a transform to SSJ Fandub. I wanna see how this turns out in English using the incorrect way to speak for Goku.

You're gonna regret that...
How dare you... How dare you?!

Gohan, go back to earth...
Take Piccolo with you too, he's alive. But just barely...

I said, you better go home now...
Before I lose all my reasoning!
I've been writing characters with hick accents for quite some time now, and I'd say I'd do it something like this:

You... 'm gonna make ya regret that.
(Not sure for how dare you, it just doesn't sound quite right, leave it as is or make a different line)
Gohan, go on back t' Earth
Ya better take Piccolo with ya too. He's still alive... but jus' barely.
I said, ya better go home now.
Before I lose m'self!

I changed the lines a bit. How does it sound?
Seems to work, thank you. I never really pay attention to the intricacies of where to place emphasis on. So, thank you.

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The clean-up I did of Dragon Soul's end of the 3rd animation, the image of Goku, same one as the one I put in the avatar thread, only this is full-size:

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Post by jjgp1112 » Mon May 03, 2010 10:45 pm

Here's a drawing I did a year ago that was copied (not traced) from a manga panel:

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Re: Fan Works Explosion

Post by Rocketman » Tue May 04, 2010 7:25 am

SSJ4 Furanki wrote:You're gonna regret that...
How dare you... How dare you?!

Gohan, go back to earth...
Take Piccolo with you too, he's alive. But just barely...

I said, you better go home now...
Before I lose all my reasoning!
As an actual hick/redneck,

You gone wish yain't done that...
How cuja...how could you!

Son, get on back t' Earth.
Take 'I'm witcha, e's still breathin'.

Ah said git gone, boy,
'fore ah lose it!

"Gohan" and "Piccolo" were cut out cause it's real difficut t' switch from speakin' like ona mah kinfolks to a word of Japanese/Italian origin 'n back agin 'n keep th' drawl.

Course, t' mah eer yain't nevuh gone sound rite. We'uns kin tell when itsa damnyankee thinkin' him be soundin' laik on'us.

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