Dragon Ball Untold (Sprite Comic) [1-110]

[RockJohnAxe]

What a whirl wind! Hope you're having fun! Enjoy! [81-84]

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[RockJohnAxe]

Gotenks is by far my favorite character so I had to share this one! Sort of a teaser for things about to come!

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[RockJohnAxe]

w00t! Over 1000 Thread Views! Let's keep the gravy train rolling! [86-90]

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[Xeogran]

This is so fun to read, keep them coming!

[Dr. Machismo]

I like sprite comics, and it's good to see one again, but the story isn't very good. It's just the Androids saga all over again.

[RockJohnAxe]

This is so fun to read, keep them coming!

Thanks man, I'm glad you are enjoying it. Much more to come!

I like sprite comics, and it's good to see one again, but the story isn't very good. It's just the Androids saga all over again.

Thanks for your feedback. I don't feel it's that close to android saga but I guess there are some similarities at this point. I got some twists coming that might change your mind though

Also, No comments about Roshi? I'm surprised haha.

Any feedback, comments, criticisms or what ever is very much welcome!


Enjoy the next little batch! Is Multi-Cell in trouble? [91-94]

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[Dr. Machismo]

Glad to see you're taking my criticism in a mature manner. The comic's still fun to read, but it's not without its problems.

Also, I dislike how Gohan has gone back became to being slacker. His experience in the Buu saga should have taught him to keep up with his training as much as possible. He should still definitely be a total bookworm, but he should still be focused on training too.

[RockJohnAxe]

Glad to see you're taking my criticism in a mature manner. The comic's still fun to read, but it's not without its problems.

Also, I dislike how Gohan has gone back became to being slacker. His experience in the Buu saga should have taught him to keep up with his training as much as possible. He should still definitely be a total bookworm, but he should still be focused on training too.

O i got some tasty treats for Gohan in the future. Don't you worry

To touch a bit further on Gohan. Once Buu was defeated the universe was assumed to finally be at peace, so Gohan has been taking it a bit easy since. But keep in mind, this story is supposed to take place shortly after the Buu Saga, so not enough time has really passed for Gohan to lose any power.

[RockJohnAxe]

MMMmmmm, so close to 100 strips!

Hmmm, things might not be looking so hot for our heroes! [95-99]

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[Dr. Machismo]

Wow, so Vegeta's still the same arrogant d-bag who screws up everything? Whatever happened to that character development in the Buu saga? And why does Vegeta thinks he's a Super Saiyan 3 when he hasn't even transformed into one? And shouldn't Gotenks be stronger than Goku?

This is worse than I thought.

[RockJohnAxe]

I like to try and throw in some humor when I can. An on going joke you will find the entire series is Vegeta contantly trying to become a SS3 and never being able too. Gotenks also hasn't really done a ton of fighting yet and has lots of energy to spare.

Their might be some inconsistency's through out as this isn't 100% canon and my DBZ knowledge is large, but does not know all. I also like to try new and radical ideas! I am also slightly limited using the Sprite set medium and what I can do with it with limited art assets.

It will be a wild ride soon though, so get ready!

[Dr. Machismo]

I like to try and throw in some humor when I can. An on going joke you will find the entire series is Vegeta contantly trying to become a SS3 and never being able too. Gotenks also hasn't really done a ton of fighting yet and has lots of energy to spare.

Their might be some inconsistency's through out as this isn't 100% canon and my DBZ knowledge is large, but does not know all. I also like to try new and radical ideas! I am also slightly limited using the Sprite set medium and what I can do with it with limited art assets.

It will be a wild ride soon though, so get ready!

You're just making Vegeta unnecessarily stupid, then. And if this takes place not long after the Buu saga ended, Gotenks shouldn't have fallen so far behind in strength and Goku shouldn't have already caught up to him.

[RockJohnAxe]

I love your passion dude, gets me all excited! Keep it coming!

Gotenks shouldn't have fallen so far behind in strength and Goku shouldn't have already caught up to him.

Gotenks is above Goku. Gotenks only said "Even Goku is struggling against him" because Goku has always been viewed as the top even if he actually isn't. So when Goku starts to struggle it has a larger morale impact on Gotenks and the other fighters because they are essentially watching the "top dog" struggle. (even if he's not actually the strongest)

You're just making Vegeta unnecessarily stupid.

Exactly!



Might as well throw up 100 and make it a round number!!

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[Dr. Machismo]

Exactly!

k then

Well, at the very least, this comic's funner than most fanworks I would consider to be bad. Good work, dude.

[RockJohnAxe]

18 fulfills a dream. [101-102]

This comic's funner than most fanworks, Good work, dude.

Thanks dude!

[Dr. Machismo]

Editing my post isn't all that clever. I thought you welcomed all feedback, comments and criticisms.

[RockJohnAxe]

If you must know why...

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Editing my post isn't all that clever. I thought you welcomed all feedback, comments and criticisms.

I just edited out the under-lying tones. (Sounded a bit douchey.)

I dislike how Gohan has gone back became to being slacker. His experience in the Buu saga should have taught him to keep up with his training as much as possible.

This is feedback that is constructive and something that promotes a discussion.

This is worse than I thought.

Well, at the very least, this comic's funner than most fanworks I would consider to be bad. Good work, dude.

These comments are not really constructive and feel a bit condescending. If you want to say your opinion that is fine, but we heard your opinion the first time, no need to reiterate it every post. We realize that this comic isn't your cup of tea.

I greatly appreciate feedback and love to discuss the events in the comic or the what ifs. I know a few who are enjoying the comic and I appreciate your passion for dragon ball but I would also appreciate if your comments were more constructive and less "THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST PEICES OF SHIT EVAR!".

This comic is made for FUN for fans of Dragon ball to have FUN with. Don't sap the fun dude.

[Dr. Machismo]

There was no reason to edit the third post you quoted or use it in the context of your post. The original post was more detailed than your revision of it.

I only once said that your comic was funner than fanworks I would consider to be bad.

[RockJohnAxe]

Fair enough. I won't edit your quotes, again. I will keep it all raw and real.

I have posted enough stuff on the internet to know that some people are very straight forward with their opinions and have no reservations in telling you your stuff is shit. (not saying you did, just speaking generally.) A moment of weakness for me.

Honestly I think it's that Justin Beiber avatar that just bothers the crap out of me, making me extra sensitive to your comments.

I do appreciate your honest opinions though and hope you continue to bring your comments and opinions forth in any way that suits you.

-RJA

[Dr. Machismo]

It's all good. Glad to see you're handling this in a positive manner.