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by Menkyon DBAF » Wed Nov 28, 2012 9:37 pm

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by Insertclevername » Wed Nov 28, 2012 9:51 pm
I don't have a clue what the hell is going on..but the art is good!

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by TheDevilsCorpse » Wed Nov 28, 2012 10:10 pm
Seems Note gives Beet a letter of challenge and they spend the next few pages battling it out in the arcades, only to end up friends.
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by Makaioshin » Wed Nov 28, 2012 10:13 pm
That 10x Kamehameha looks really good. I really hope this artist sticks around and does some non-Hero related material.
Insertclevername wrote:I don't have a clue what the hell is going on..but the art is good!

Eh, I can get the gist of it. He wins a super secret card. A tournament winner challenges him to Duel Monsters. He uses the super secret card and wins. Best friends forever.
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by kei17 » Wed Nov 28, 2012 11:43 pm
Er, why is Goku treated like Pokemon?
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by TheDevilsCorpse » Wed Nov 28, 2012 11:49 pm
kei17 wrote:Er, why is Goku treated like Pokemon?
Because "Heroes". lol
That's the one reason I don't like this series, because it treats the characters I know and love as if they are fictional...within an already fictional world. It's degrading to the "hope of the universe".

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by Gyt Kaliba » Wed Nov 28, 2012 11:58 pm
kei17 wrote:Er, why is Goku treated like Pokemon?
Couldn't resist. 
The text comes from this other meme
here.
Yeah...as much as I want to try playing Heroes, I can't say this manga adaptation is looking too...appealing...the art's nice though.
Wait...that first page, the chubby kid that's pointing and saying something...anyone else noticing he looks a lot like the 'bully' from the GT special?
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by TRL » Thu Nov 29, 2012 9:44 am
The art is cool, but I agree with most of you that this just isn't an appealing story. Haha Goku the pokemon.
Btw where are you guys getting this that Toyble supposedly made this? I don't think it's him at all. His fighting scenes aren't this dynamic and all over the place at all.
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by macho_man » Thu Nov 29, 2012 10:14 am
TRL wrote:The art is cool, but I agree with most of you that this just isn't an appealing story. Haha Goku the pokemon.
Btw where are you guys getting this that Toyble supposedly made this? I don't think it's him at all. His fighting scenes aren't this dynamic and all over the place at all.
Just take a look at the details, especially for the hair:


It's him, I've no doubt about it.

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by Raykugen » Thu Nov 29, 2012 10:39 am
Why is this post in "Fan-created Works" when is official? ._.
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by TRL » Thu Nov 29, 2012 10:50 am
That way of drawing the ssj4 hair has been around for a while. It's not exclusive to Toyble.
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by kei17 » Thu Nov 29, 2012 11:44 am
I can clearly say that everything in this manga exactly looks like Toyble's style. FYI, those "dynamic" fight scenes still are copies of the original manga just like his AF doujinshi.

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by TRL » Thu Nov 29, 2012 12:38 pm
Maybe some more comparison pics will convince me.

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by VegettoEX » Thu Nov 29, 2012 12:40 pm
Very uncomfortable having the entire chapter posted from a magazine that's widely available and new. Removing majority of posted images.
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by Raykugen » Thu Nov 29, 2012 3:05 pm
Well, since years ago this is the first time I see that Toyble has copied a scene from the original
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by Menkyon DBAF » Thu Nov 29, 2012 3:12 pm
VegettoEX wrote:Very uncomfortable having the entire chapter posted from a magazine that's widely available and new. Removing majority of posted images.
Sorry!

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by Hellspawn28 » Fri Nov 30, 2012 12:08 am
kei17 wrote:I can clearly say that everything in this manga exactly looks like Toyble's style. FYI, those "dynamic" fight scenes still are copies of the original manga just like his AF doujinshi.

I doubt he copy it. It could have been a coincidence since not every fight scene is going to be totally new and original.
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by FortuneSSJ » Tue Jul 23, 2013 4:10 pm
theres english translation of this?! I would like to read it.
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