DragonBall S fan-manga preview

Leotaku · Post by **Leotaku** » Sun Jan 08, 2006 11:01 am

The S wrote:Oh, darn. I thought this was going to be a fic about me

Nah. We still leave you out of everything ("Nail without The S").

The Mole · Post by **The Mole** » Sun Jan 08, 2006 10:03 pm

The next three pages:

http://photobucket.com/albums/c162/JetW ... Page11.jpg

http://photobucket.com/albums/c162/JetW ... Page12.jpg

http://photobucket.com/albums/c162/JetW ... Page13.jpg

my drawings are the worst in these three pages because I drew them in class. So I had to focus on the book and not getting the book taken up by the teacher.

Chaos Saiyajin · Post by **Chaos Saiyajin** » Sun Jan 08, 2006 10:09 pm

Great! I know what ya mean about getting your drawings taken up in class, I always have to be on the lookout.

Great Saiyaman · Post by **Great Saiyaman** » Sun Jan 08, 2006 11:50 pm

*claps* That story is great man. Props to you, to be honest I've always thought of making a Fanfic where a Cell Jr. was a villain. Nice job on the art work too.

The S · Post by **The S** » Sun Jan 08, 2006 11:57 pm

Nah. We still leave you out of everything ("Nail without The S").

You bastard.

If you weren't such a fucking awesome artist, I'd blow you up with a Dodonpa....

I really like the "grown-up" Cell Jr., Mole. He's just freakin' cool.

The Mole · Post by **The Mole** » Mon Jan 09, 2006 2:02 am

Here are the last 4 pages of the first chapter:

http://photobucket.com/albums/c162/JetW ... Page14.jpg

http://photobucket.com/albums/c162/JetW ... Page15.jpg

http://photobucket.com/albums/c162/JetW ... Page16.jpg

http://photobucket.com/albums/c162/JetW ... Page17.jpg

NOTE: Page 16 was drawn in class during a movie which means that the lights were out. Also I half-drew this page, my partner in crime drew on the page, too. And thus ends Chapter One! (Now I have to do my homework)

Socar15 · Post by **Socar15** » Mon Jan 09, 2006 2:11 am

Okay, at first I thought Gohan just got some of his teeth knocked out, but I guess those are clouds. Anyway, it's still interesting, so keep it up.

Bejiita · Post by **Bejiita** » Mon Jan 09, 2006 12:03 pm

It's a good to see you skipping school time.

I done it all the time, seems like only yesterday.

Nah, seriously, you shouldn't really draw in school time in case you start losing attention and falling behind.

Anyway, good job so far, keep it up, I'm staying tuned in.

Chaos Saiyajin · Post by **Chaos Saiyajin** » Mon Jan 09, 2006 6:20 pm

Great! I can't wait to see SSJ5!

The Mole · Post by **The Mole** » Mon Jan 09, 2006 6:34 pm

Chaos Saiyajin wrote: Great! I can't wait to see SSJ5!

I'm not really sure if you just misread it or what, but: NO SSJ5! And due to the massive power output (see, I still pay attention in class) of SSJ4, I won't even touch it. DragonBall S is basicly what Misutaa Toriyama (Mister Toriyama) would write if he continued the story. BUT, something might happen that would mean that Goku would have to go SSJ4. (Pray that it doesn't happen soon, because I can't draw SSJ4 Goku or Vegeta)

EDIT: I won't have a Super Saiyan 5, but I'll have a transformation unique to one particular character.

Chaos Saiyajin · Post by **Chaos Saiyajin** » Mon Jan 09, 2006 7:38 pm

Sorry, I thought'd it said SSJ5 but no SSJ4.

Leotaku · Post by **Leotaku** » Mon Jan 09, 2006 9:16 pm

The S: Hehe.

The Mole: That was a fun read. I'll look forward to more chapters if you get to 'em between school work.

Bejiita: I actually did all my drawing in school too (those DBZ requests I was doing some time ago). But, it was usually during breaks; some of my breaks were as long as 3 hours. Maybe more, if I decided to skip a class completely.