Fan Manga

*PINHEAD* · Post by ***PINHEAD*** » Fri Aug 19, 2005 3:52 pm

Well, if you go back a few pages (I think around page 4 or 5), I posted a few pages of my manga, which is about Trunks's timeline where Son Goku beats Freeza on Earth. I didn't really continue it, but what I posted there shows a little bit of what happened after Namek exploded. Maybe later, when I have a lot of time on my hands, I'll continue it.

Metrite · Post by **Metrite** » Thu Aug 25, 2005 1:51 am

Isn't it 'bout time a few more pages were translayed? It to 22, only 15 more to go, then it'll probably be just one every month or so when a new page is added.

Gamingdevil · Post by **Gamingdevil** » Thu Aug 25, 2005 6:26 am

On popular request:

p 23:

Tien: Look out Krillin!
Krillin: Asshole!
Krillin: Get a load of this!
Gohan: I'm coming dad.

p 24

Gohan: Dad!
Alien: Wha...?! Guards!
Gohan: Are you alright dad?
Alien: Hey, you!
Goku: Look out, he'll paralize us!
Alien: Pitiful creature.
Gohan: Shut up!
Alien: Wha...what?!
Goku: Nice going Gohan. Seeing you are half-Earthling it had less effect on you.

Sorry I only did two pages, I don't have a lot of time right now.

Holken · Post by **Holken** » Thu Aug 25, 2005 7:06 am

Thank you Gamingdevil

I will add them.

Gamingdevil · Post by **Gamingdevil** » Thu Aug 25, 2005 2:58 pm

You're welcome, someone has to do it

Metrite · Post by **Metrite** » Thu Sep 01, 2005 1:47 am

Alright, vacation time's over!

Time for the next few pages(only 13 more before it'll only be like one a month when a new one is made).

Holken · Post by **Holken** » Sun Sep 25, 2005 8:59 am

I need assistance for the translation of the page 25 please.

Gamingdevil · Post by **Gamingdevil** » Mon Sep 26, 2005 1:42 am

I'll see what I can do this afternoon.

Rocketman · Post by **Rocketman** » Mon Sep 26, 2005 2:33 am

Is the comic on the front page still being updated?

Gamingdevil · Post by **Gamingdevil** » Mon Sep 26, 2005 1:03 pm

Hey Holken, what happened to page 38?

I could've sworn I've seen it up somewhere last week

and here are some new pages:

p 25:

Vegeta: Those cursed Protoss will die! They will pay dearly for insulting the last of the Saiyans! Stay there Kakarot, I will take care of them!
Protoss: Damn those Saiyans...what bad luck!
Protoss: I have to take them down.
Protoss: Shit! My shield is down. That failure is going to kill me!
Protoss: Ha! Ha! Ha! This time you don't have any chance! I will release the clones we've made of you.
Goku: A...aah! B...But?!

p 26:

Vegeta: Ho...how dare they copy me? I'm unique!
Goku: Incredible! There are three of me.
Vegeta: I will destroy those copies!
Trunks: Hey, you there!
Trunks: What the...! What the hell is that?
Vegeta: Don't waste any time! Eliminate those clones immediatly!
Piccolo: They're persistent.
Protoss: Kill them!

p 27:

Trunks: Hey, they're not so tough after all!
Protoss: This can't be happening! I'm surounded by nothing but incompetents!
Those clones haven't received proper combat modification.
Protoss: They don't know how to fight! This is a disaster!

Holken · Post by **Holken** » Mon Sep 26, 2005 1:41 pm

Gamingdevil wrote:Hey Holken, what happened to page 38? I could've sworn I've seen it up somewhere last week

I will add it^^

and here are some new pages:

Thank Gamingdevil

But for "échec" in page 25, it is not "failure" in english?

Damn those Saiyans...what failure!

and for "taré" it is "crazy", I think.

Shit! My shield is down. That crazy is going to kill me!

No?

thank again gamingdevil, I will put the text.

Gamingdevil · Post by **Gamingdevil** » Mon Sep 26, 2005 3:50 pm

Gamingdevil wrote:Hey Holken, what happened to page 38? I could've sworn I've seen it up somewhere last week
I will add it^^
and here are some new pages:
Thank Gamingdevil

But for "échec" in page 25, it is not "failure" in english?
Damn those Saiyans...what failure!

That's what I thought, but it sounded so weird, then again "what bad luck" sounds weird too

and for "taré" it is "crazy", I think.
Shit! My shield is down. That crazy is going to kill me!
No?

Then make it "lunatic"

thank again gamingdevil, I will put the text.

You're welcome

Tenka-Ichi · Post by **Tenka-Ichi** » Mon Sep 26, 2005 10:26 pm

Here Holken, here's my take on page 28...

Krillin: Abandon, You guys are rotten!! (I'm not exactly sure what you meant by abandonnez, but that's a direct translation)
Protoss: D... Don't come any closer or I'll release the ultimate creation!! A superpowerful and uncontrollable saiyan, it will be the end for us all!!
Krillin: You're bluffing!
Krillin: Damn! He pressed the button... Bah! he was lying anyway I hope!
Krillin: Wha?!
Goku: What's that?!
Krillin: Oops!
Chapter 4 Ultimate combat
Vegeta: What's going on? What's that power??
Trunks: they're fleeing!!
Krillin: We better do enough!!

...29...
Protoss: Caugh...! Caugh!
That... That saiyan is the result of a DNA mixture from two pure saiyans...! You cannot beat him!
Tenshin: From Goku and Vegeta?!
Piccolo: This isn't going to go very well! Stay behind me Gohan!!
Goku: Krillin! Tenshin! He's too strong for you!!
Krillin: O...O.K.!!

...and 30
well... I was gonna do 30, but there's nothing to translate

Hope it's helpfull.

Gamingdevil · Post by **Gamingdevil** » Tue Sep 27, 2005 1:29 am

Tenka-Ichi wrote:Here Holken, here's my take on page 28...

Krillin: Get out of here! You guys are rotten!! *
Protoss: D... Don't come any closer or I'll release the ultimate creation!! A superpowerful, but uncontrollable saiyan, it will be the end for us all!!
Krillin: You're bluffing!
Krillin: Damn! He pressed the button... Bah! he was lying anyway... I hope!
Krillin: Wha...?!
Goku: What's that?!
Krillin: Oops!
Chapter 4: Ultimate combat
Vegeta: What's going on? What's that power??
Trunks: They're fleeing!!
Krillin: We better do the same!! **

...29...
Protoss: Caugh...! Caugh!
That... That saiyan is the result of a DNA mixture from two pure saiyans...! You cannot beat him!
Tenshin: From Goku and Vegeta?!
Piccolo: This is going to be bad! *** Stay behind me Gohan!!
Goku: Krillin! Tien****! He's too strong for you!!
Krillin: O...O.K.!!

...and 30
well... I was gonna do 30, but there's nothing to translate

Hope it's helpfull.

*Sometimes you don't have to translater litteraly

**That sounded weird

***I just refrased that a bit, because it didn't sound too good
****Either Tien or Tenshinhan

Don't take this as meddling, I only wanted to help, you did a good job for the rest

askani son · Post by **askani son** » Tue Sep 27, 2005 5:15 am

Is Bejita still updating the first page? I wanna see more Trunks...

SaiyamanMS · Post by **SaiyamanMS** » Tue Sep 27, 2005 5:31 am

Gamingdevil wrote:****Either Tenshinhan or Tenshinhan

Tenshinhan or Tenshinhan? Did you get caught out by the censor trying to say "Tien"? O.o

Gamingdevil · Post by **Gamingdevil** » Tue Sep 27, 2005 10:55 am

SaiyamanMS wrote:
Gamingdevil wrote:****Either Tenshinhan or Tenshinhan
Tenshinhan or Tenshinhan? Did you get caught out by the censor trying to say "Tien"? O.o

yep

Holken · Post by **Holken** » Tue Sep 27, 2005 2:34 pm

ok, thank^^ those pages are correct?

page25
http://img48.imageshack.us/img48/9516/page25f8qc.jpg

Page26:
http://img48.imageshack.us/img48/7864/page26f5bk.jpg

Page27:
http://img238.imageshack.us/img238/6382/page27f3yz.jpg

askani son wrote:Is Bejita still updating the first page? I wanna see more Trunks...

Oh me too!

Gamingdevil · Post by **Gamingdevil** » Tue Sep 27, 2005 3:40 pm

Holken wrote:ok, thank^^ those pages are correct?

page25
http://img48.imageshack.us/img48/9516/page25f8qc.jpg

here make it "What a failure" in the second picture and "That lunatic is going to kill me" in the eleventh

Page26:
http://img48.imageshack.us/img48/7864/page26f5bk.jpg

Page27:
http://img238.imageshack.us/img238/6382/page27f3yz.jpg

askani son wrote:Is Bejita still updating the first page? I wanna see more Trunks...
Oh me too!

the rest is okay

and I was bored so:

p 31:

Trunks: Goku!
Trunks: Damn it! What can we do against that monster?
Gohan: Dad!

p 32: nothing to translate

p 33:

Trunks: Leave Gohan alone!
Trunks: Burning Attack!
Trunks: That move will destroy the whole town!

p 34:

Trunks: Damn!
Gohan: Aah! He's still alive!

p 35:

Vegeta: Bastard!

too much text in the others

EDIT: Oh hell with it:

p 36:

Krillin: We have to do something...
...or he will kill us all!
Krillin: I have an idea.
Tenshinhan: What is it?
Krillin: Tenshinhan, you will have to help them for a minute.
Tenshinhan: What? But that's suicide!
Tenshinhan: Oh well... ok, I'll do it! Do something smart in the mean time.
Krillin: You can count on me!
Tenshinhan: Hey, leave them alone!

p 37: nothing to translate

p 38:

Trunks: Did he notice us leave?
Goku: I think so! Here he comes!
Goku: Krillin!
Krillin: I found something! Those Protoss told us they were very intelligent, so I figured they would have made something to controle their Saiyans.
Goku: Good thinking! That's it! That can paralize the Saiyans!
Vegeta: Didn't Gohan destroy that remote control?
Krillin: I don't know. I found this a little higher in some sort of laboratory.
Goku: Okay, listen to me! This is what we're going to do...

and that's it

Tenka-Ichi · Post by **Tenka-Ichi** » Tue Sep 27, 2005 8:27 pm

I wrote:Krillin: We better do enough!!

Gamingdevil wrote:**That sounded weird

That did sound weird. I don't know what I was thinking.

Gamingdevil wrote:****Either Tenshinhan or Tenshinhan

I put Tenshin because that's what Holken put for the french version and I didn't really feel like changing any names... but yeah, Tenshinhan is better as it's the correct original Japanese name, and what I was going to put originally. Anyway, thanks for the help.

Oh and Holken, I can't wait to read the rest of that manga, please finish, it's awesome!