Dragonball Timestream (Group Writing Project)

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Post by FoolsGil » Wed Feb 03, 2016 12:52 am

jcogginsa wrote:
Both. Platinum is a grayish-white metallic tint.

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Post by ShadowBardock89 » Wed Feb 03, 2016 12:55 am

http://www.kanzenshuu.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=11&t=40715&start=20#p1439892
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Post by jcogginsa » Wed Feb 03, 2016 1:02 am

FoolsGil, are you okay with Platinum Cooler?

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Post by FoolsGil » Wed Feb 03, 2016 1:15 am

jcogginsa wrote:FoolsGil, are you okay with Platinum Cooler?
No problem.

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Post by jcogginsa » Wed Feb 03, 2016 1:23 am

okay then. Any preference between blue or purple skin?

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Post by FoolsGil » Wed Feb 03, 2016 1:33 am

jcogginsa wrote:okay then. Any preference between blue or purple skin?
Is there a reason he turns blue if that's chosen?

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Post by jcogginsa » Wed Feb 03, 2016 1:41 am

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jcogginsa wrote:okay then. Any preference between blue or purple skin?
Is there a reason he turns blue if that's chosen?
If Blue is chosen then it will be an intentional diversion from Canon. In order words, he's blue here for out of universe reasoning, not in universe reasoning. So he'd have always had blue skin here, and never had purple.

The other two options are

1. His skin is majority white like Frieza's, outside of his Platinum form

2. His base form looks the same as canon

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Post by FoolsGil » Wed Feb 03, 2016 1:45 am

jcogginsa wrote:
FoolsGil wrote:
jcogginsa wrote:okay then. Any preference between blue or purple skin?
Is there a reason he turns blue if that's chosen?
If Blue is chosen then it will be an intentional diversion from Canon. In order words, he's blue here for out of universe reasoning, not in universe reasoning. So he'd have always had blue skin here, and never had purple.

The other two options are

1. His skin is majority white like Freeza's, outside of his Platinum form

2. His base form looks the same as canon
keep him purple

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Post by jcogginsa » Wed Feb 03, 2016 1:47 am

Okay then.

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Post by jcogginsa » Sun Feb 07, 2016 3:30 am

Been doing some thinking about T5 Tagoma

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Post by FoolsGil » Sun Feb 07, 2016 4:07 pm

jcogginsa wrote:Been doing some thinking about T5 Tagoma

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Post by FoolsGil » Sun Feb 07, 2016 8:20 pm

Scene 8

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Post by jcogginsa » Sun Feb 07, 2016 8:38 pm

Scene 8 looks good
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Post by jcogginsa » Mon Feb 08, 2016 1:54 am

-Timeline 3 Cell notices his friend looking tense, and asks him what's wrong. Broly doesn't answer, but glances at a Goku with inhuman looking eyes, wearing a number 15 headband. Cell notices and says he thought he'd moved past that. Broly says he did, but Kakarot still puts him in a bad mood

- Dabura and Ledgic, also wearing Timeline 3 Headbands, walk up with bowls of food. Broly asks wear they got it, sounding excited at the prospect of food. Dabura points to a food stand being run by another alternate Kakarot. Broly curses, prompting Cell to laugh.
Scene 9


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Post by FoolsGil » Mon Feb 08, 2016 7:24 am

jcogginsa wrote:
I guess I'll start on scene 12.

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Post by jcogginsa » Mon Feb 08, 2016 11:03 am

kay. I'll do scene one

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Post by jcogginsa » Tue Feb 09, 2016 6:05 pm

Random thoughts

Who's in the stands for each universe.

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Post by jcogginsa » Sun Feb 14, 2016 8:34 pm

Scene One
- We began just after Champa has left. Beerus is thinking about Champa's challenge and thinking of who he'll put on his team. He says Goku is a given, as he gave Beerus "His Greatest Challenge Yet"

-Goku pipes in with a suggestion that Beerus hold a tournament. Whis thinks it's a good idea and Beerus comes around to it. Goku gets excited, but Beerus bluntly tells him he can't compete, since he's already been picked for the team.

-Vegeta gets annoyed that he isn't also already on the team. Beerus says he's actually had a serious fight with Goku, and that's why he gets an automatic in. Beerus then glares at Vegeta and asks him if he wants to "Have a try out." Vegeta nonchalantly says "A tournament could be interesting"

-Goku asks who else would be in the tournament. Beerus says he have the Supreme Kai of Time gather Fighters from across the alternate timelines. Goku is confused, and says "I thought you had to make a team from this universe?"

- Whis explains the difference between a Timeline and a Universe. Each Universe has multiple timelines, managed by the Supreme Kai of Time, and that the Primary Timeline is whichever one the Hakaishin lives on. There's only one Beerus in all the time stream. Any object he destroys here is destroyed in all other Timelines as well

-Goku still doesn't get it. The others face palm
Scene One

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