You may want to consider renaming that because TheDevilsCorpse is doing a rewrite of the series named the same exact thing for like a couple years now.Sailor Haumea wrote:I've been working on a rewrite of the series, titled Dragon Ball Redux.
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Why I use "Geran" instead of "Jiren"
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Crap...Off to new name ideas...
What do you think of the idea, though?
What do you think of the idea, though?
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The opening, by the way, is the destruction of Planet Vegeta.
However, Frieza doesn't start off with the Supernova attack. He uses a different attack on Bardock, after saying "say hi to Chilled for me." I think you know what happens to Bardock after that. Then Frieza destroys Planet Vegeta.
However, Frieza doesn't start off with the Supernova attack. He uses a different attack on Bardock, after saying "say hi to Chilled for me." I think you know what happens to Bardock after that. Then Frieza destroys Planet Vegeta.
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Why would he send an enemy back in time intentionally instead of just killing him?Sailor Haumea wrote:The opening, by the way, is the destruction of Planet Vegeta.
However, Frieza doesn't start off with the Supernova attack. He uses a different attack on Bardock, after saying "say hi to Chilled for me." I think you know what happens to Bardock after that. Then Frieza destroys Planet Vegeta.
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He does it to mess with Bardock. Instead of mercifully killing him, he lets him live...but ensures he's powerless to save his people.FoolsGil wrote:Why would he send an enemy back in time intentionally instead of just killing him?Sailor Haumea wrote:The opening, by the way, is the destruction of Planet Vegeta.
However, Frieza doesn't start off with the Supernova attack. He uses a different attack on Bardock, after saying "say hi to Chilled for me." I think you know what happens to Bardock after that. Then Frieza destroys Planet Vegeta.
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There's no copyright on fanfic names, only competition.Sailor Haumea wrote:Crap...Off to new name ideas...
What do you think of the idea, though?
As for the idea, making the movies fit with canon is a pretty cool concept, though many have been where you're going. But there's no copyright on fanfic concepts, only competition.
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I haven't seen the second and third Dragon Ball movies (Sleeping Princess in Devil's Castle and Mystical Adventure). What's different between the anime and those two movies?
I know the movies have Emperor Chiaotzu as a thing, but that's it.
I know the movies have Emperor Chiaotzu as a thing, but that's it.
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If you're adamant about changing the name, what about Dragonball Revival?
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You are absolutely true, I only suggest so because it's going to be very hard to find Sailor's fic regularly unless TDC just removes everything about his DBRedux on the internet or Sailor vastly eclipses TDC in popularity,quality,and quantity of content.Alruneia wrote:There's no copyright on fanfic names, only competition.Sailor Haumea wrote:Crap...Off to new name ideas...
What do you think of the idea, though?
As for the idea, making the movies fit with canon is a pretty cool concept, though many have been where you're going. But there's no copyright on fanfic concepts, only competition.
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I like this name too.FoolsGil wrote:If you're adamant about changing the name, what about Dragonball Revival?
Why I use "Geran" instead of "Jiren"
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That works!FoolsGil wrote:If you're adamant about changing the name, what about Dragonball Revival?
Thanks.
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Another thing is that Kuriza is present at the genocide of the Saiyans, but is quite clearly uncomfortable. He's with Cooler.
He's strongly against the actions by his elders, crying as he watches Frieza destroy the planet. The others regard him as the black sheep of the family. He only battles to show off, and avoids trying to hurt others. He adores the Saiyans.
He's strongly against the actions by his elders, crying as he watches Frieza destroy the planet. The others regard him as the black sheep of the family. He only battles to show off, and avoids trying to hurt others. He adores the Saiyans.
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Somehow, I managed to forget to finish making #12 of my fic.
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Deadlines are a big part of why I've chosen to wait until I'm done writing my fanfic before I start releasing it.Anime Kitten wrote:Somehow, I managed to forget to finish making #12 of my fic.
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Yeah, but I'm not aiming towards "finishing" it. It's just an ongoing thing.Alruneia wrote:Deadlines are a big part of why I've chosen to wait until I'm done writing my fanfic before I start releasing it.
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Anyone?Sailor Haumea wrote:I haven't seen the second and third Dragon Ball movies (Sleeping Princess in Devil's Castle and Mystical Adventure). What's different between the anime and those two movies?
I know the movies have Emperor Chiaotzu as a thing, but that's it.
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I don't remember much from the movies, all I know is that they're simply retellings from the anime arcs. I recommend checking out MistareFusion's DB dissection:Sailor Haumea wrote:Anyone?Sailor Haumea wrote:I haven't seen the second and third Dragon Ball movies (Sleeping Princess in Devil's Castle and Mystical Adventure). What's different between the anime and those two movies?
I know the movies have Emperor Chiaotzu as a thing, but that's it.
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Anyone know of any good fanfics where Nappa or Frieza turn good?
Honor Trip fills the redemption what-if for Cell quite nicely.
The main series fills it for Buu already.
There's a good number of good Raditz redemption fics.
But are there any good ones for Nappa and Frieza?
Honor Trip fills the redemption what-if for Cell quite nicely.
The main series fills it for Buu already.
There's a good number of good Raditz redemption fics.
But are there any good ones for Nappa and Frieza?
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for Frieza, Savior of Demons is excellentSailor Haumea wrote:Anyone know of any good fanfics where Nappa or Frieza turn good?
Honor Trip fills the redemption what-if for Cell quite nicely.
The main series fills it for Buu already.
There's a good number of good Raditz redemption fics.
But are there any good ones for Nappa and Frieza?
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I'm gonna do it whether you disapprove or not (
), but just curiously, what do you guys think about this idea?
Currently have some ideas for a GT fic about Goku being in school, and it's going to essentially be a joke rewrite of the series. Baby and the other villains will still show up eventually... but that's not the point. My point is I'm going to have Omega Shenron say "Omega" every time he would say "end". When he formally introduces himself, he'll accidentally say "End Shenron" and scramble to correct himself.
Sound like it'd be humorous to you?
Currently have some ideas for a GT fic about Goku being in school, and it's going to essentially be a joke rewrite of the series. Baby and the other villains will still show up eventually... but that's not the point. My point is I'm going to have Omega Shenron say "Omega" every time he would say "end". When he formally introduces himself, he'll accidentally say "End Shenron" and scramble to correct himself.
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And what about Nappa?jcogginsa wrote:for Frieza, Savior of Demons is excellentSailor Haumea wrote:Anyone know of any good fanfics where Nappa or Frieza turn good?
Honor Trip fills the redemption what-if for Cell quite nicely.
The main series fills it for Buu already.
There's a good number of good Raditz redemption fics.
But are there any good ones for Nappa and Frieza?
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