Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Rocketman · Post by **Rocketman** » Thu Oct 16, 2008 1:38 am

The Time Traveller wrote:Holy crap, I've never heard the Funi dub of Dragon Ball, the acting is even worse than Z...

But Blue does indeed sound really really gay.

That's not the FUNi dub. That's the Canadian one.

The Time Traveller · Post by **The Time Traveller** » Thu Oct 16, 2008 1:47 am

Rocketman wrote:
The Time Traveller wrote:Holy crap, I've never heard the Funi dub of Dragon Ball, the acting is even worse than Z...

But Blue does indeed sound really really gay.
That's not the FUNi dub. That's the Canadian one.

Ah, I've never really seen any of that either.

Victator Supreme · Post by **Victator Supreme** » Thu Oct 16, 2008 2:58 am

SSJ2bardock wrote:
Victator Supreme wrote:
JulieYBM wrote:I remember getting my butt handed to her as SSj4 Son Gokû, very damaging to one's pride, it is.
I decimated her with Cell. Her cheap attacks are nothing to Cell's multiple death beams.
So then, cheap attacks < cheaper attacks?

Yes very much. She left me little recourse. Though to be fair that would not of worked on anyone else.

SSj_Rambo · Post by **SSj_Rambo** » Sun Oct 19, 2008 2:14 am

OK, now I resume SSj_Rambo's Grammatical Review of Dragonball Multiverse (pages 48-54)!
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Page 49
-Panel 3~Varga: Change “we keep going” to “we’ll keep going”.
-Panel 5~Parent of I'K'L: Change “hu” to “huh (Note: In English “hu” is pronounced ‘who’).

Page 50
-Panel 3~ Varga #2: Change “No, plus this guy” to No, this guy” (remove “plus”).
-Panel 4~Announcer: Change “Next fight !” to “Next fight!” (remove the space between the “t” in fight and the exclamation point).

Page 51
-Panel 1~Burtta: Change “fastest being of the” to “fastest being in the”.
-Panel 5~South Kaioshin: Change “hu” to “huh.

Note: I tried to use a bit of color-coding to define my edits (red=the change and green=stuff to be removed and not replaced). I hope you can understand it, ask me if you can't.
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Here are the quotes that I feel could have been written a little better (note that there is nothing technically wrong with any of these (grammar wise), they just could have been written better).

Page 49
-Panel 4~Announcer: Change “Next turn, #17” to “Next up, #17”

**Disclaimer: I am not doing this to sound like a now-it-all or a snob or a pompous jerk. I would not have done all of this had Salagir2 (the author) not personally asked for grammar help…and if I hadn’t felt like re-re-reading this amazing fan-manga.**
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<::If you have any questions on why I choose any of these edits please ask::>

Can I call myself the official grammar checker for the English version of Multiverse?

Forgotten Hero · Post by **Forgotten Hero** » Sun Oct 19, 2008 2:40 am

Yeah new page in a few hours!
Go Buu!

SSj_Rambo · Post by **SSj_Rambo** » Sun Oct 19, 2008 2:45 am

I love Buu's attack "PSHIT" (page 53).

Great job with the series Gogeta Jr and Salagir! Can't wait for the next page.

Saiyan-Professor · Post by **Saiyan-Professor** » Sun Oct 19, 2008 6:25 pm

Page 55 is up: http://www.dragonball-multiverse.com/en/page-55.html

JulieYBM · Post by **JulieYBM** » Sun Oct 19, 2008 8:05 pm

Saiyan-Professor wrote:Page 55 is up: http://www.dragonball-multiverse.com/en/page-55.html

Hilarious, and yet...so frank!

NeptuneKai · Post by **NeptuneKai** » Sun Oct 19, 2008 10:12 pm

Saiyan-Professor wrote:Page 55 is up: http://www.dragonball-multiverse.com/en/page-55.html

Ha Ha, I was like Oh Shi- totally forgetting Buu can regenerate.

Rocketman · Post by **Rocketman** » Mon Oct 20, 2008 3:06 pm

Bussani wrote:
Super Ghost Kamikaze wrote:Vegetto could catch the Road Runner, though.
Pics or it didn't happen.

inb4 Rocketman mouse-art.

Y'all thought I forgot, didn't you?

DNA · Post by **DNA** » Mon Oct 20, 2008 8:20 pm

If I'm not wrong, only 4 universes haven't been revealed yet.
I've said these before, but I will say them again especially because I've just realized that would make the exact 4 universes.

- Universe ?: Tullece rules the universe

Fighters: Tullece
Viewers: Tullece's Team

-Universe ?: Neko Majin Universe

Fighters: Z
Viewers: Little kid

-Universe ?: Follows GT

Fighters: Vegeta, Goku, Majuub
Viewers: Everyone else

-Universe ?: Baby rules the universe

Fighters: Baby-Vegeta
Viewers: Bulma, Trunks, Bra

I don't see much more possibilities without being far-fetched.

Eison · Post by **Eison** » Tue Oct 21, 2008 12:28 pm

I don't think there is much change on a Tullece or a GT universe, but maybe a little change for a Neko Majin universe.

Janemba can be in one universe and Hatchiyack in an other but a don't know if they can control their self. Or Hirudegarn, he wouldn't lose control.

And maybe some of the Kais' students like Olibu or Pikkon can fight to, I mean we never got to know their causes of death.

Also one were Dr. Gero survived with #19 and fixed #16, #17 and #18 so he can control them and maybe an other android were he defeated Buu with.
But Salagir doesn't like the idea of to much new characters and transformations he also didn't like my idea of letting #13, #14 and #15 enter the tournament, than #14 and #15 can be defeated and #13 will absorb them and than Cell can absorb Super #13 and form The Ultimate Cell.

DNA · Post by **DNA** » Tue Oct 21, 2008 5:30 pm

Cell was created to absorb #17 and #18. It's impossible for him to absorb anyone else, even if he did, nothing would happen. Also Dr. Gero had already started on Cell, I don't think he would create yet another android to defeat Buu, he would have thought Cell would be enough, and when things actually would get wrong it would be too late.

As for the others, Janemba and Hildegarn are too uncontrollable, Janemba would probably distort his whole universe and Hildegarn would destroy everything.

Lastly, the universes I said are not meant to had something different or a twist, they are just possible universes, GT universe would be just that, the characters we saw in GT. How can you not see much change in a Tullece universe? A universe were Tullece got so strong that he defeated everyone else?

SSj_Rambo · Post by **SSj_Rambo** » Tue Oct 21, 2008 5:57 pm

DNA wrote:Cell was created to absorb #17 and #18. It's impossible for him to absorb anyone else, even if he did, nothing would happen. Also Dr. Gero had already started on Cell, I don't think he would create yet another android to defeat Buu, he would have thought Cell would be enough, and when things actually would get wrong it would be too late.

Actually, Cell did display the ability to absorb many human beings and Piccolo did mention that it did increase his power level.

Of course we don't know if Cell is capable of absorbing any other life forms (except for Namekians which he did also do...partially) so you can justifiably assume that he is incapable of absorbing any (if not most depending on who he fights) of his opponents in this tournament.

DNA wrote:As for the others, Janemba and Hildegarn are too uncontrollable, Janemba would probably distort his whole universe and Hildegarn would destroy everything.

Broly?

DNA · Post by **DNA** » Tue Oct 21, 2008 6:19 pm

Yeah well... Brolly is encased in ice, and they already stated that he is too dangerous and shouldn't have been brought in. Can you seriously see Hildegarn in the tournament?

On the first topic, what I meant was, even if he did absorb United #13 his appearance wouldn't change, it would be the same has absorbing any other strong character.

Rocketman · Post by **Rocketman** » Tue Oct 21, 2008 8:42 pm

Isn't #13 purely mechanical? Cell can't absorb pure robots.

DNA · Post by **DNA** » Tue Oct 21, 2008 9:00 pm

I thought the 3 or them were mechanical, but if they were, how could #13 absorb the others and mutate? At least #13 has got to be biological somehow.

BlueSky · Post by **Kaboom** » Tue Oct 21, 2008 9:17 pm

DNA wrote:I thought the 3 or them were mechanical, but if they were, how could #13 absorb the others and mutate? At least #13 has got to be biological somehow.

They showed it right in the movie. Various computer chips and other components flew over and joined with 13. Perhaps "absorb" isn't so appropriate a term as "integrate."

SSj_Rambo · Post by **SSj_Rambo** » Wed Oct 22, 2008 12:09 am

I found this cool videoby Google searching "Dragonball Multiverse". It's pretty cool, and I've seen the same thing done with other fan mangas such as DBAF and DBZ: Elsewhere, so it's nice to know that this relatively new project is already getting similar treatment as others that have a wider target audience and have been around for much longer.

DNA · Post by **DNA** » Wed Oct 22, 2008 3:01 pm

http://www.dragonball-multiverse.com/en/page-56.html

Torankusu-kun! *squee* <3