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Post by Kingdom Heartless » Mon Dec 28, 2009 3:06 am

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Kingdom Heartless wrote:and they clearly wanted to have Vegetto strut his stuff before they brought out the big guns.
And this worries me. Vegetto is the big gun. You can't get a bigger gun. What fucking chance does anyone else have if Vegetto can't fight the Real Bad Guy?
I guess we cross that bridge when we come to it.
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Post by JulieYBM » Sun Jan 03, 2010 9:50 pm

ImageAlrighty, we've had three new pages since the forum hit its down time for the new server. We seem Vegetto's agility is certainly a big strength of his in this battle, espicially with Broli swinging fast and swinging hard. The big lug obviously cannot register pain (whether because he isn't playing Yu-Gi-Oh! will all 40 minimum cards or the aura of his Legendary Super Saiyan form litterally makes him invincible). This is sure to be a match that allows us to see the full spectrum of Vegetto's abilities, at least within the first Super Saiyan form. Image

It seems Gogeta Jr. spent his time off refining his art work for these past few pages have had some very detailed art. The Super Saiyan hair, specifically is quite beautiful. At the pace--not to mention the hype--surrounding this fight, I assume it'll continue on to being throughout not just the rest of this chapter, but for the next as well. This fight--if the comic becomes popular enough--could wind up being something big in fandom. No doubt 'Vegetto v. Broli' is looking to become the next 'Gokû v. Superman', whether that is a good thing or not one will have to decide for themselves...

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Post by Innagadadavida » Sun Jan 03, 2010 10:35 pm

I would like to see a Super Saiyan 3 Vegetto. Even if it's against Broly.

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Post by Freeza Heika » Sun Jan 03, 2010 11:25 pm

I refuse to tolerate that last page. I would like to give an eloquent, well though-out reason why, but the only thing that comes to mind is "FAN RAGE!". :twisted:
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Post by Kingdom Heartless » Mon Jan 04, 2010 12:35 am

The art on these pages are fantastic. It really gives a sense of power behind the blows.

Boo on the haters. This is looking fantastic... and I don't even like Broly a great deal.
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Post by Maphisto86 » Mon Jan 04, 2010 12:38 am

Despite some of the last panel it still seems Vegetto will have the upper hand in this battle. Gogeta Jr's artwork has definitely improved, though by how much it is hard to tell yet. The lines look a little cleaner than before and proportions are pretty spot on.

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Post by JulieYBM » Mon Jan 04, 2010 12:48 am

I love the blur affect with Vegetto's legs on the top panel of 184 as it reminds me of what was used during the Namek arc with Vegeta speeding around.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Rocketman » Mon Jan 04, 2010 3:25 am

The entirety of the last page posted is shit. Broly cannot stop Vegetto.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by verto » Mon Jan 04, 2010 3:36 am

Really? Thats all Rocketman? While I'd be lying if I said I wasn't somewhat happy without a wall of text.... I also can't help but feel... disappointed. While I don't agree with everything you say, I do like your rants somewhat.
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Post by Innagadadavida » Mon Jan 04, 2010 3:52 am

A Rocketman sized freakout, despite my previous objections, would be absolutely called for right now.

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Post by Rocketman » Mon Jan 04, 2010 4:01 am

verto wrote:Really? Thats all Rocketman? While I'd be lying if I said I wasn't somewhat happy without a wall of text.... I also can't help but feel... disappointed. While I don't agree with everything you say, I do like your rants somewhat.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Godo » Mon Jan 04, 2010 5:48 am

That last panel doesn't look proportionally right. Broly's arms are way too small.

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Post by Xyex » Mon Jan 04, 2010 9:53 am

I really don't see what the problem is with Vegetto vs. Brolly since this series is A) Non-cannon and B) Powering up other people too. I mean, Krillin beat the crap out of Salsa earlier, we know Cell's improved a lot, Pan from the one universe could go SSJ, etc.

Of course, I have plans to use Brolly in two fanfictions where he beats the snot out of SSJ3s so....
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Post by Maphisto86 » Mon Jan 04, 2010 11:09 am

Godo wrote:That last panel doesn't look proportionally right. Broly's arms are way too small.
I don't see a problem in the last panel though the perception could just be forshortening of his arms since they are bent at the elbow. The panel where he grabs Vegetto's other arm does make it seem like they are too small. :|

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by jackrs113 » Mon Jan 04, 2010 11:49 am

The art looks great once again, its hard to believe this is done by fans and not Toriyama himself. As for the last page I'm hoping that Vegetto will just brush off Broly's attack and then laugh.

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Post by jjgp1112 » Mon Jan 04, 2010 12:41 pm

I'm just gonna hold my breath for now. However, if Broly's kick really hurts Vegetto that much, I'll have to kill a bitch.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Ultimate_DB_Fan » Mon Jan 04, 2010 12:56 pm

Good artwork and I can't wait to see where this goes. 8)
Of course, since this is non-canon, I'm indifferent as to who will beat who.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Hellspawn28 » Mon Jan 04, 2010 2:43 pm

It's nice to see Vegeito fighting Broly now, something tells me that Vegito will lose and the manga will end with Goku being the strongest in the Multiverse.
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Post by rereboy » Mon Jan 04, 2010 3:56 pm

Hellspawn28 wrote:It's nice to see Vegeito fighting Broly now, something tells me that Vegito will lose and the manga will end with Goku being the strongest in the Multiverse.
Not likely. Right now he`s not even the strongest of his own universe since Gohan is still in his mystic form.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Scarz » Mon Jan 04, 2010 4:24 pm

The fangirl in me wants to really hate the last page but... It's just too cool and I'm looking forward to more Vegetto beat downs. I'm sorry everyone. I'm sure you feel betrayed sine I am the beaming light of reason and logic around here.

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