Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Rocketman » Tue Mar 23, 2010 6:38 am

verto wrote:In one of those universes Kuririn beat Freeza, thats way worse than this....
Kienzan.
JulieYBM wrote:Let's learn why Vegetto's sword is so powerful!!
Swords.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Scarz » Tue Mar 23, 2010 11:35 am

Rocketman wrote:
JulieYBM wrote:Let's learn why Vegetto's sword is so powerful!!
Swords.
Why would Vegetto have two swords...

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Dayspring » Tue Mar 23, 2010 6:28 pm

verto wrote:
Godo wrote:Guys, I made my own ending of the Broly vs. Vegetto fight!

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All hail the mighty booger who is the one of Vegetto's!
These were entertaining at first, now theres just WAAAAY too many...
I understand you guys don't like Broly, but c'mon, its a god damn fan manga about ALTERNATE UNIVERSES. In one of those universes Kuririn beat Freeza, thats way worse than this....
Worse? Broly sucks because they're not using the same rules for their alternate universes (ie: cause and effect) to explain why this Broly is different. This one is INVULNERABLE. Just because.

Meanwhile there's plenty of ways to explain how Krillin defeated Freeza. This is a different Krillin because of those rules, so the fact that the backstory is missing makes it very plausible. Especially when you consider Namek-era Krillin almost DID kill second form Freeza.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Scarz » Wed Mar 24, 2010 10:47 am

Scarz wrote: I'm curious how a guest artists is chosen to draw part of a "side story" for DBM?
Salagir wrote:They show me their work, we see if we can do work together. If it's good then we give a try.
Ah, it's like showing off a portfolio of work. But instead of a portfolio of regular work its filled with DB characters and stuff. Maybe when my schedule is bit more open I love to give it a shot.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Scarz » Wed Mar 24, 2010 3:41 pm

Image

I see noone bothers to put up the new pages here anymore. Com'on guys! There not that bad.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Big Momma » Wed Mar 24, 2010 3:52 pm

The only things that bother me are the thick lines and lack of detail.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by SSJSteve » Wed Mar 24, 2010 4:17 pm

What's up with Android 16 in the second panel?

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Dayspring » Wed Mar 24, 2010 7:48 pm

SSJSteve wrote:What's up with Android 16 in the second panel?
He's damaged. Seems most of the right arm is missing.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Captain-Sora » Wed Mar 24, 2010 8:10 pm

The one thing that's really bothering me about this special is that nothing happens on each page. It's just giant panels wasting space with barely any of the story making progress. You could easily make all the panels on the latest update that don't have dialogue much smaller as there's really nothing much to emphasis using these large shots, they're just preventing anything happening on the page.

Hopefully this problem is just during the introduction and it'll get more interesting during the following pages where hopefully there will be more than just one or two speech bubble of dialogue in them.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Snail » Wed Mar 24, 2010 11:13 pm

In terms of artwork, yes. The final product of this side story is lackluster. However, I think DBM readers should realize that it's Salagir and co. offering the fans of DBM to contribute to the entirety of the series. So..kudos to that! I believe the series deserves continuing support.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Piccolo Daimaoh » Thu Mar 25, 2010 3:32 am

Still lacking on the detail, but Bulma looks alright.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Rocketman » Thu Mar 25, 2010 5:28 am

Snail wrote:In terms of artwork, yes. The final product of this side story is lackluster. However, I think DBM readers should realize that it's Salagir and co. offering the fans of DBM to contribute to the entirety of the series. So..kudos to that! I believe the series deserves continuing support.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by DNA » Thu Mar 25, 2010 6:26 am

Trust me, nothing good or interesting is going to come out of this special. And the pages after that are still more Vegetto vs Broly fanwankery. I wish we had more AF, I'm more curious and interested in the advance of that comic than this... Especially when I know that the next 10 pages are gonna be more Broly fanwankery (I don't know that 100%, but I'm pretty much sure because the fight doesn't seem to advance at all.)

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Senzu_Bean » Thu Mar 25, 2010 10:24 am

DNA wrote:Trust me, nothing good or interesting is going to come out of this special. And the pages after that are still more Vegetto vs Broly fanwankery. I wish we had more AF, I'm more curious and interested in the advance of that comic than this... Especially when I know that the next 10 pages are gonna be more Broly fanwankery (I don't know that 100%, but I'm pretty much sure because the fight doesn't seem to advance at all.)
Dude... no! :?

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by SSJSteve » Thu Mar 25, 2010 12:26 pm

Dayspring wrote:
SSJSteve wrote:What's up with Android 16 in the second panel?
He's damaged. Seems most of the right arm is missing.
I meant what's up with his hair and face, it looks really bad. :lol:

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Metalwario64 » Thu Mar 25, 2010 12:46 pm

He looks constipated... :lol:
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by DBZ MAN » Thu Mar 25, 2010 3:42 pm

All Dragonball Z characters look constipated. That's how they're supposed to look. :)
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Rocketman » Fri Mar 26, 2010 5:16 am

So would just kissing Broly be enough to shock him out of LSS or would Vegetto have to slip him the tongue too.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Kaboom » Fri Mar 26, 2010 12:24 pm

Rocketman wrote:So would just kissing Broly be enough to shock him out of LSS or would Vegetto have to slip him the tongue too.
Simple math is the much easier path to take. Just ask the big chunkhead what 2+2 is, and the mental trauma will leave him foaming at the mouth.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Freeza Heika » Fri Mar 26, 2010 12:59 pm

Is it just me, or is the perspective on Bulma's eyes way off? It caught my attention as soon as I looked at the page.
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