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Post by Maphisto86 » Sun Sep 12, 2010 11:52 pm

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Post by JulieYBM » Mon Sep 13, 2010 1:36 am

Oh God, anyone else here Mr. Nakao?

Great, great stuff.
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Post by Piccolo Daimaoh » Mon Sep 13, 2010 6:04 am

Damn, the art on this page is spot-on. :P
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Post by Big Momma » Tue Sep 21, 2010 2:08 am

New page, looks good!

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Re: DeadlyChestnut's "Universe F" fan comic

Post by Shiyonasan » Tue Sep 21, 2010 1:32 pm

Man, she's really pumping these out as opposed to a few weeks ago.

Anyway, it's a nice looking page as usual. I'm wondering if that voice off-panel from Kuriza is Freeza in that last panel...
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Post by JulieYBM » Tue Sep 21, 2010 1:38 pm

Yeah, I'm sure it's Freeza.

Man, I love this story.
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Post by Shiyonasan » Sun Sep 26, 2010 8:00 pm

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The art is really good on this page.

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It looks like was right about the off-panel voice. Kuriza is in serious trouble now....

EDIT: She also posted a wallpaper for Universe F in celebration of the end of Chapter 1:

http://deadlychestnut.deviantart.com/#/d2zjv05
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Post by JulieYBM » Sun Sep 26, 2010 8:04 pm

Bodacious way to end the chapter. I love DeadlyChestnut's style and cinematic timing.
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Post by Scarz » Sun Sep 26, 2010 8:28 pm

JulieYBM wrote:Bodacious way to end the chapter. I love DeadlyChestnut's style and cinematic timing.
I agree. Her pacing and timing is excellent. Better than most amateur comic book artists I know. But why...

Does everything...

Have to be...

SO FREAKING RED!
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Re: DeadlyChestnut's "Universe F" fan comic

Post by JulieYBM » Sun Sep 26, 2010 8:35 pm

Scarz wrote:
JulieYBM wrote:Bodacious way to end the chapter. I love DeadlyChestnut's style and cinematic timing.
I agree. Her pacing and timing is excellent. Better than most amateur comic book artists I know. But why...

Does everything...

Have to be...

SO FREAKING RED!
I dunno, I like the look. It's as if it's an atmospheric affect based on the sun and whatnot. That or it's an artistic representation of the bloodlust of those in the story.
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Post by batistabus » Sun Sep 26, 2010 8:51 pm

I love this. There is such attention to detail...Dodoria is watching with a smug look while Zarbon just looks into the distance...as it should be.
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Post by Piccolo Daimaoh » Mon Sep 27, 2010 3:56 am

Scarz wrote:
JulieYBM wrote:Bodacious way to end the chapter. I love DeadlyChestnut's style and cinematic timing.
I agree. Her pacing and timing is excellent. Better than most amateur comic book artists I know. But why...

Does everything...

Have to be...

SO FREAKING RED!
Agreed. What? Is it like red fog, or something? :?
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Post by rereboy » Mon Sep 27, 2010 8:06 am

JulieYBM wrote:I love DeadlyChestnut's style and cinematic timing.
Agreed. Very good cinematic perception.
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Post by Godo » Mon Sep 27, 2010 8:21 am

Isn't planet Vegeta red? Maybe she has used it as an inspiration.
Some planets have a blue atmosphere, some have a green one, and others have red ones.
At least in Dragonball. :P
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Re: DeadlyChestnut's "Universe F" fan comic

Post by SSJSteve » Mon Oct 04, 2010 11:25 am

Cover for Chapter 2:

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Cooler! :D
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Post by Scarz » Mon Oct 04, 2010 5:03 pm

"Shadow Puppetry," eh? This might be a very intriguing chapter. Looking forward to it.
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Post by Piccolo Daimaoh » Tue Oct 05, 2010 12:46 am

Looks like Coola's coming into the mix. Maybe some sibling rivalry? :P
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Post by ShiningMoon » Tue Oct 05, 2010 12:59 am

I liked the persistence of the red; served well to tie each page together as its own art piece (and then even forward and backward to other pages), and set the mood. (Also I kind of assumed it was supposed to remind us of Planet Vegeta, at least on a subconscious level...)

Excited for the next chapter~
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Post by Piccolo Daimao » Tue Oct 05, 2010 5:22 pm

Wow, DeadlyChestnut's artwork in this fan comic is just brilliant, especially how it's unique, different to Toriyama's art style and features gorgeous, vibrant colours. The story and characters are great too (I like how Prince Vegeta has his own gang of Saiyans). I can't wait for the next chapter.
SSJSteve wrote:This shot of Freeza at the bottom is fantastic.

http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/ ... estnut.jpg
Yeah, I love that cinematic shot, especially how the red wine splashing on the floor looks like blood. Probably one of my favourite panels in that chapter.

And this wallpaper just looks...awesome.

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That's going as my desktop background as soon as I next get on my laptop.
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Re: DeadlyChestnut's "Universe F" fan comic

Post by SSJSteve » Tue Oct 12, 2010 7:06 am

Chapter 2 - Page 1:

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