Akira Toriyama's New Work (Kochikame Anniversary)

Jerseymilk · Post by **Jerseymilk** » Sun Sep 24, 2006 7:06 am

Great Saiyaman wrote:Not to be a complete dickhead, but has anyone else noticed that Vegeta's armor is wrong...he's wearing the armor from after Freeza leaves the ship?

Hey just be glad Toriyama remembered to put Vegeta in there at all. >>

Conan the SSJ · Post by **Conan the SSJ** » Sun Sep 24, 2006 7:54 am

fps_anth wrote:Those are some nice color pages. Also, where can I buy this manga? It's part of an anniversary set right? Anywhere I can buy that?

Japan?

Anywho, I'm loving this manga just like everyone else! It's awesome to see Neko Majin wasn't Toriyama's true farewell to the DragonBall legacy, he always does kick-ass parodies. Loving the first few pages, my imagination will have to do with what's being said in the remainder till Julian gets a full translation in gear. Also everyone, let us not stress Julian too much, getting gray hairs at 21 isn't natural.

rael1983 · Post by **rael1983** » Tue Sep 26, 2006 10:19 am

Hi from Spain! I'm new at the forum.

This story seems great, but It's difficult to understand in japanese

Please could anybody translate the full ten pages?

Chuquita · Post by **Chuquita** » Tue Sep 26, 2006 1:55 pm

Hi and welcome!

If you're new you should try out the introductions subforum. They're very helpful.

I'm hoping Julian--who translated chapters of neko majin z--will translate this on paper as well. I think there's a brief translation in the latest podcast.

Mr. Announcer · Post by **Mr. Announcer** » Tue Sep 26, 2006 4:31 pm

Oh man, it took me a while to realize that all 10 pages were up. Overall hilarious and charming. Oh those gag characters.....you just can't kill them..... I find it amusing that Vegeta (and Freeza) is usually Toriyama's first choice for gag appearances, leads me to believe he never really took him that seriously. =self satisfied laughter=

tlsmith1963 · Post by **tlsmith1963** » Thu Oct 05, 2006 8:36 pm

Vegeta & Freeza are in it! Hooray! Thanks for sharing this, Pekingduck. Can't wait until the full translation.

Tammy

Bejiita · Post by **Bejiita** » Mon Oct 09, 2006 12:34 pm

Thanks for the scans, this looks really awsome, I'm glad Toriyama has drawn another gag manga, his old art style is brilliant.

Now I wish he would re-draw the whole thing at his own pace.

I know he wants to... he said so himself!!!

pekinduck · Post by **pekinduck** » Mon Oct 23, 2006 3:51 am

(P4-1)
Who is that....?
(P4-2)
It is unavoidable if having come from other stars.
You must pay the penalty in cash as compensation that I miss the demerit mark.
(P4-3)
......
(P4-4)
Ouch!!
(P4-5)
haha,He is such a dope.....
I cannot even kill time by him.
(P4-6)
It hurts....!
Son of a bitch. What did you?

(P5-1)
O?
(P5-2)
Pay the penalty quickly!!
I will move it with Reccar!!
If you do not hope for it.......
(P5-3)
gosh?
(P5-4)
Guwaaaaaa!!(Yell. I do not understand the apt expression.)
(P5-5)
GGGGG....
(P5-6)
pah!

(P6-1)
D.... Damn it!
This is extraordinary violence.
(P6-2)
................
(P6-3)
The current act is complete crime of obstructing the performance of official duty!
The penalty is tripled!
(P6-4)
Why...?
His damage recovers momentarily even if Freeza is attacked.
Moreover, even tearing clothes and wound become former...!
(P6-5)
yipes... Though his combat power is very low....
Nonsense......! He is .......!
(P6-6)
Pay the penalty quickly!!
The rocket launcher is fired when acting this time!!

pekinduck · Post by **pekinduck** » Mon Oct 23, 2006 5:06 am

(P7-1)
oops! Arms that did not have it a little while ago appeared suddenly!!
No doubt about it!
(P7-2)
Its GAG!
He is man of the GAG manga......!
(P7-3)
...GAG...!?
...What's GAG manga ...?
M Moreover, that atmosphere is an equivalent old-timer!! Freeza!!
(P7-4)
What's it...
Okay... I am the strongest Freeza in space..... most in space.....
(P7-5)
Ho HoHoHo-----!!!!
(P8-2)
Huh Huh Huh Huh......
(P8-3)
humph... I have put out seriousness a little too much.
I have done it shameful to the coward.
(P8-4)
You fuckin' fool!! Will you kill me!!?
I have not permitted you any longer!!
Go to the jug!! Give it up!!!

(P9-1)
oops... after all....
He doesn't die through all eternity....
(P9-2)
......!!!
(P9-3)
If you do not want to go to the jug....
Treat me to highest class SUSHI for the time being.
(P9-4)
............
(P9-5)
God damn it!
Ran away!

(P10-1)
I am not looking at anything.....
I do not meet anyone.....
It is escapism.....
(P10-2)
hum?
(P10-3)
Hey, Sharpened head!
You wear clothes like to the guy who ran away now. Companion?
Do you know guy's address?
(P10-4)
uh-oh, I'm....
(P10-5)
Um?
(P10-7)
hey, Vegeta!
Where is the strongest Freeza in space?
(P10-8)
Hey! prickly head guy!!
The illegal parking there. Illegal parking!!
There was the world that should not step into.....
[END]

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Please change appropriateness to the nuance.

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pekinduck · Post by **pekinduck** » Mon Oct 23, 2006 5:18 am

Why is he(Ryotu) in Planet Namek?

He performed the final times in the manga before.
Characters excluding him in the manga also believed the thing that was the final times.
However, it was a lie.
He drove the antipathy from characters. He was bundled off to other manga.

This episode is collected to vol.69 of kochikame.

Chuquita · Post by **Chuquita** » Mon Oct 23, 2006 2:30 pm

Awesome translation! Thanks so much!

Taku128 · Post by **Taku128** » Mon Oct 23, 2006 2:42 pm

Thanks for the translation, I'll edit the rest of the pages and add the text in when I get home later today.

Taku128 · Post by **Taku128** » Mon Oct 23, 2006 9:40 pm

Sorry to double post, but I thought this was noteworthy enough, I finished the scanlation. I cleaned up the translation, and for what I didn't understand I tried my best to put what I thought it meant. Thanks for scanning and translating these pekinduck.

The Tori-bot · Post by **The Tori-bot** » Tue Oct 24, 2006 10:51 am

Taku128 wrote:Sorry to double post, but I thought this was noteworthy enough, I finished the scanlation. I cleaned up the translation, and for what I didn't understand I tried my best to put what I thought it meant. Thanks for scanning and translating these pekinduck.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v281/ ... ame_01.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v281/ ... ame_02.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v281/ ... ame_03.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v281/ ... ame_04.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v281/ ... ame_05.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v281/ ... ame_06.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v281/ ... ame_07.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v281/ ... ame_08.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v281/ ... ame_09.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v281/ ... ame_10.jpg

Really nice scanlation, Taku. Be careful, or you'll put Julian out of a job.

At last! Now I can understand it!

And I think I haven't laughed so much in a long time.

Cui realising that Ryo-san was a gag manga character was pure gold.

The end was pretty funny too, and it was nice seeing Goku again.

In conclusion: Toriyama-sensei has stiiil got it!

mysteriousdbzgt · Post by **mysteriousdbzgt** » Sun Mar 11, 2007 11:58 am

Hah, that is really funny.

Post by **Kaboom** » Sun Mar 11, 2007 12:13 pm

mysteriousdbzgt wrote:Hah, that is really funny.

When the previous post was wrote:Tue Oct 24, 2006

When your post there was wrote:Sun Mar 11, 2007

Something seems wrong here...

BrollysKin · Post by **BrollysKin** » Sun Mar 11, 2007 1:53 pm

You would have thought he would have noticed when he was digging three pages back in the archive.

Black Mist · Post by **Black Mist** » Sun Mar 11, 2007 2:03 pm

Yes very mysterious Yeah so newbie know necroposting you agreeded to the rules here:http://www.daizex.com/interaction/board/ so you should follow them.Oh and welcome!

TriforceCaptre · Post by **TriforceCaptre** » Sun Mar 11, 2007 2:36 pm

Necroposting may be bad but I'm glad you did it or I would probably have never seen this. Very funny stuff.

Magica · Post by **Magica** » Sun Mar 11, 2007 3:57 pm

Black Mist wrote:Yes very mysterious Yeah so newbie know necroposting you agreeded to the rules here:http://www.daizex.com/interaction/board/ so you should follow them.Oh and welcome!

Hm yeah. There was something on there about back-seat modding as well?

Whatever did happen to PekinDuck? I know Youtube suspended his profile. Haven't seen him since sometime last year. Hope he's doing okay.

Kanzenshuu

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