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Post by strawberry » Sun Dec 31, 2006 2:08 pm

That happens on the new pages:

When Gohan arrives to help his brother, the new enemy (Zaikô?) tells him he is his younger brother.
He claims to be the child of Goku and a god (the woman that ist with him).
He also want to rule the universe. Zaikô's mother tells him to kill the others. So, after blowing up half the planet in order to proof he is that powerful, he say he'll erase the earth (that his father loved too much?) als well as them (other Saiyans).

I hope, I got everything right. Some please correct me if I'm wrong.
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Post by fps_anth » Sun Dec 31, 2006 2:12 pm

Wow, those new pages pwn. Trunks and Vegeta arrive, only to see that enemy blow half the Earth up. OOOOH! WHAT HAPPENS NEXT? :lol:
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Post by Android18 » Sun Dec 31, 2006 2:20 pm

I'm guessing that i'm the only one that thinks DBAF is stupid?
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Post by peterx » Sun Dec 31, 2006 2:55 pm

strawberry wrote:That happens on the new pages:

When Gohan arrives to help his brother, the new enemy (Zaikô?) tells him he is his younger brother.
He claims to be the child of Goku and a god (the woman that ist with him).
He also want to rule the universe. Zaikô's mother tells him to kill the others. So, after blowing up half the planet in order to proof he is that powerful, he say he'll erase the earth (that his father loved too much?) als well as them (other Saiyans).

I hope, I got everything right. Some please correct me if I'm wrong.
Thanks! :D
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Post by aarondirebear » Sun Dec 31, 2006 2:55 pm

Goku cheated on Chichi?
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Post by Payne222 » Sun Dec 31, 2006 2:59 pm

aarondirebear wrote:Goku cheated on Chichi?
Haha, maybe she offered him a 5 star meal.
「あの地球人のように?・・・クリリンのことか・・・クリリンのことか————っ!!!!!!」

「オレは地球からきさまをたおすためにやってきたサイヤ人・・・おだやかな心をもちながらはげしい怒りによって目覚めた伝説の戦士・・・超サイヤ人孫悟空だ!!!!!」
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Toyble Fan Manga Translated

Post by Lord Moonstone » Sun Dec 31, 2006 2:59 pm

peterx wrote:
...(Anyway somebody working on to translate this REALLY NICE drawn AF manga (with the 10 new pages) into english? :)...
Done.

(Translations not by me)

Pages 1-8
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i208/ ... af11fa.jpg
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i208/ ... af20st.jpg
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i208/ ... af30vn.jpg
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i208/ ... af45zr.jpg
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i208/ ... af57va.jpg
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i208/ ... af67xp.jpg
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i208/ ... af75wx.jpg
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i208/ ... af85dq.jpg

Pages 57-59
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i208/ ... f578us.jpg
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i208/ ... f582jq.jpg
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i208/ ... f594wt.jpg
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Post by Duo » Sun Dec 31, 2006 3:03 pm

Android18 wrote:I'm guessing that i'm the only one that thinks DBAF is stupid?
Of course not! It's just that most of us don't bother declaring it anymore.
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Re: Toyble Fan Manga Translated

Post by Daizensushi-x » Sun Dec 31, 2006 3:04 pm

Lord Moonstone wrote:
peterx wrote:
...(Anyway somebody working on to translate this REALLY NICE drawn AF manga (with the 10 new pages) into english? :)...
Done.

(Translations not by me)

Pages 1-8
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i208/ ... af11fa.jpg
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i208/ ... af20st.jpg
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i208/ ... af30vn.jpg
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i208/ ... af45zr.jpg
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i208/ ... af57va.jpg
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i208/ ... af67xp.jpg
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i208/ ... af75wx.jpg
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i208/ ... af85dq.jpg

Pages 57-59
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i208/ ... f578us.jpg
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i208/ ... f582jq.jpg
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i208/ ... f594wt.jpg
Ok...these are interesting, but pointless. Anyways, how did Goku come back?
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Post by aarondirebear » Sun Dec 31, 2006 3:05 pm

HOLY CRAP not only did he shag a Goddess, its also Furiza's mom!

Dum Dee Dum

Furiza's mom has got it goin on
Furiza's mom has got it goin on

But since this takes GT as canon it aint going to end well...."a hundred years later, only pan remains."
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Post by Payne222 » Sun Dec 31, 2006 3:06 pm

It would've been better if it had the newer pages too. ( I can't read most kanji without furigana...('^^)> ) But, it's still quite good.
「あの地球人のように?・・・クリリンのことか・・・クリリンのことか————っ!!!!!!」

「オレは地球からきさまをたおすためにやってきたサイヤ人・・・おだやかな心をもちながらはげしい怒りによって目覚めた伝説の戦士・・・超サイヤ人孫悟空だ!!!!!」
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Post by aarondirebear » Sun Dec 31, 2006 3:09 pm

Furigana?
Isnt that where they put little Hiragana next to the Kanji to tell you which meaning it has?
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Post by Payne222 » Sun Dec 31, 2006 3:11 pm

aarondirebear wrote:Furigana?
Isnt that where they put little Hiragana next to the Kanji to tell you which meaning it has?
Yes, I don't have anyone to teach me the Kanji, so I either use a dictionary or furigana. (By the way, furigana is much easier then searching in the kanji dictionary!
「あの地球人のように?・・・クリリンのことか・・・クリリンのことか————っ!!!!!!」

「オレは地球からきさまをたおすためにやってきたサイヤ人・・・おだやかな心をもちながらはげしい怒りによって目覚めた伝説の戦士・・・超サイヤ人孫悟空だ!!!!!」
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Re: Toyble Fan Manga Translated

Post by peterx » Sun Dec 31, 2006 7:54 pm

Lord Moonstone wrote:
peterx wrote:
...(Anyway somebody working on to translate this REALLY NICE drawn AF manga (with the 10 new pages) into english? :)...
Done.

(Translations not by me)

Pages 1-8
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i208/ ... af11fa.jpg
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i208/ ... af20st.jpg
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i208/ ... af30vn.jpg
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i208/ ... af45zr.jpg
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i208/ ... af57va.jpg
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i208/ ... af67xp.jpg
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i208/ ... af75wx.jpg
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i208/ ... af85dq.jpg

Pages 57-59
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i208/ ... f578us.jpg
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i208/ ... f582jq.jpg
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i208/ ... f594wt.jpg
THX! :) Do You know who translated these? Can we ask that guy to translate the other pages? :P
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Post by DBZ MAN » Sun Dec 31, 2006 9:02 pm

Looks like Broli teams up with the Z-euh GT- euh AF...Fighters
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Post by caejones » Sun Dec 31, 2006 9:25 pm

*dies* *wants a transcript* *doesn't ask for one though*

I sense that the depth has only just begun to be dug... umm... ... ... what is to come is so deep that what has happened so far is a mere pothole...
... I'm done with metaphors for today.

Yay for gifts of the people and the awesome of stuff that we are discussing!

... I should end this post before it gets stupider.

Seriously though... wow. The plot twists seem rather awesome!
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Post by aarondirebear » Mon Jan 01, 2007 5:45 am

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i208/ ... af45zr.jpg

Look at the second panel from the bottom on the right...
Is that KURIZA????
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Post by Last Son of Krypton » Mon Jan 01, 2007 10:26 am

Yes, that is Kuriza.
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Re: Toyble Fan Manga Translated

Post by sangofe » Mon Jan 01, 2007 12:37 pm

peterx wrote:
Lord Moonstone wrote:
peterx wrote:
...(Anyway somebody working on to translate this REALLY NICE drawn AF manga (with the 10 new pages) into english? :)...
Done.

(Translations not by me)

Pages 1-8
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i208/ ... af11fa.jpg
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i208/ ... af20st.jpg
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i208/ ... af30vn.jpg
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i208/ ... af45zr.jpg
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i208/ ... af57va.jpg
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i208/ ... af67xp.jpg
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i208/ ... af75wx.jpg
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i208/ ... af85dq.jpg

Pages 57-59
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i208/ ... f578us.jpg
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i208/ ... f582jq.jpg
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i208/ ... f594wt.jpg
THX! :) Do You know who translated these? Can we ask that guy to translate the other pages? :P
OMG! I want to read more!
Please, someone...
pages 9-56 :P
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Post by Olivier Hague » Mon Jan 01, 2007 4:55 pm

strawberry wrote:the new enemy (Zaikô?)
That would most probably be the author's kana spelling of "Xicor". His story appears to be based on the BS one that surfaced a while ago, what with "zaiko-"/Xicor being the son of Gokû and a goddess named "raira"/"Lila".
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