Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Zephyr » Fri Jul 02, 2010 9:00 pm

TonyTheTiger wrote:
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The Tori-bot wrote:I demand to be PM'd the uncensored version.

:P
Now why did I not think of this? :lol:

I second Tori-bot's demand! :twisted:
Third. :lol:

But only because Bra is there.
Fourth'd.

But really, "The Legendary Saiyan"? That's just bad. Good art though.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Piccolo Daimaoh » Sat Jul 03, 2010 12:02 am

Oh, what? There's a new page? I was too busy looking at Scarz's hentacular special. :P

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by verto » Sat Jul 03, 2010 12:42 am

If you're actually PMing that page to people, send me one as well :P. So have you been confirmed for doing a special chapter later?

I'm liking this special the most of all of them so far, the arts actually pretty damn good.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Scarz » Sat Jul 03, 2010 1:09 am

:lol: I'm not surprised that some of you guys want to see the uncensored version. To be honest it's nothing that hardcore, I didn't even go into that much detail but if you want it I'll send it along your way.
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Oh snap, a new page! Man, Gohan and Vegeta are so screwed at this point. I'm starting to wonder if this special is going to end badly or will it end like Movie 10 did. Speaking of which I like this chapter way better than Movie 10 simply because Vegeta is in it and he's not acting like a wuss.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by TonyTheTiger » Sat Jul 03, 2010 2:47 am

I hope it doesn't end like Movie 10. Sure, there's something nice about the Son boys working together with Goku spiritually there guiding them, but I feel like they can embellish it a bit given that more of the cast is involved here. They can still end it the same way but I don't want Vegeta, Krillin, and 18 to be cannon fodder. They should do something.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Ussj Future Trunks » Sat Jul 03, 2010 7:07 am

Scarz's special would be the best ever..because Bra is in it. :D
As for the page, apparently Salagir said Lssj Broly = Buu saga SSJ3 Goku in this special. So everyone will get their asses kicked. Krillin and Piccolo will probably show up next page. Krillin might try a sneak Kienzan but miss. I hope Vegeta defeats Broly (with help). He deserves to beat someone. Who better than his childhood bogeyman/legend? I don't think Salagir will just copy and paste the movie 10 ending with Goku appearing out of nowhere. Hopefully it will be a gigantic ssj2 final flash/kamehameha from vegeta, gohan and the boys.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by rereboy » Sat Jul 03, 2010 7:33 am

Ussj Future Trunks wrote:Scarz's special would be the best ever..because Bra is in it. :D
As for the page, apparently Salagir said Lssj Broly = Buu saga SSJ3 Goku in this special. So everyone will get their asses kicked. Krillin and Piccolo will probably show up next page. Krillin might try a sneak Kienzan but miss. I hope Vegeta defeats Broly (with help). He deserves to beat someone. Who better than his childhood bogeyman/legend? I don't think Salagir will just copy and paste the movie 10 ending with Goku appearing out of nowhere. Hopefully it will be a gigantic ssj2 final flash/kamehameha from vegeta, gohan and the boys.
I don`t think he ever said that.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Ussj Future Trunks » Sat Jul 03, 2010 7:48 am

It's just what i heard from the comments on the DBM pages.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by rereboy » Sat Jul 03, 2010 8:12 am

Well, unless it was actually said by Salagir on the comments section, and I don`t seem to find any comment like that made by him, I wouldn`t pay attention to it.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Senzu_Bean » Sat Jul 03, 2010 10:03 am

Yeah, Salagir said on the comments Broly on the first special was SSJ2-tier and on the second coming he is SSJ3-tier.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Scarz » Sat Jul 03, 2010 11:32 am

TonyTheTiger wrote:I hope it doesn't end like Movie 10. Sure, there's something nice about the Son boys working together with Goku spiritually there guiding them, but I feel like they can embellish it a bit given that more of the cast is involved here. They can still end it the same way but I don't want Vegeta, Krillin, and 18 to be cannon fodder. They should do something.
I had no problem with the way movie 10 ended but you're absolutely right about Vegeta and the others. It would be great if they did something that had an impact on the story. It's just that right now they're all far to weak to actually inflict any type of damage to Broly (except for maybe Vegeta).

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Dayspring » Sat Jul 03, 2010 11:59 am

Scarz wrote::lol: I'm not surprised that some of you guys want to see the uncensored version. To be honest it's nothing that hardcore, I didn't even go into that much detail but if you want it I'll send it along your way.
Blue wrote:I don't know if you'll find this as an insult or not but you should REALLY become a ero mangaka. You absolutely RULE.
I take that as a complement! An ero mangaka sounds awesome it's to bad I have my heart set on becoming a professional animator.
Dayspring wrote:@Scarz: That is fucking amazing (pun intended)! You really draw well, too! Do you do hentai as well, or only in gag-manga context like this?
I draw erotic artwork ever now and then, I love doing the adult gag work the most.

Oh snap, a new page! Man, Gohan and Vegeta are so screwed at this point. I'm starting to wonder if this special is going to end badly or will it end like Movie 10 did. Speaking of which I like this chapter way better than Movie 10 simply because Vegeta is in it and he's not acting like a wuss.
You should do both. If you enjoy being an ero mangaka and prefer adult gag to hard hentai, then you should do adult gag-erotics on the side in your spare time and focus on animation for you profession. Do you have webpage where we can see your other works, both erotic and adult-gag? I'd love to take a look at them.

I'm also curious about the uncensored version of this page. Have you submitted it to DBM yet? Did they say it needed to be edited, because this is in line with Toriyama's adult-gag style, provided you don't see erections or vaginas. Ever read Hetappi? Toribot starts playing the wrong tape by mistake; it's of a busty blonde riding cowgirl (while she's on her way down, so it looks like belly on belly instead of hardcore intercourse). After freaking out and shutting it off, he tells the readers they should send any such inapropriate tapes to a certain mailing address so they can be disposed of properly. The address, of course, is his fanmail address. :P

As for the current page of DBM, the translation is perfect. I'd only swap "must" for "have," but that's because I personally feel Gohan wouldn't use high level of diction as "must." In other words, anything from "we gotta" to "it is imperative that we" is a valid translation, I'm just mentioning personal preferrences. And "Legendary Saiyan" is also 100% valid, it's the original that dropped "Super."

If LSSJ Broly is on par with SSJ3 Goku and climbing, I wonder how they'll beat him. Probably "shock" him out of LSSJ in our reality. Maybe Trunks pees on him again?
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by JulieYBM » Sat Jul 03, 2010 1:11 pm

I think this chapter is going to have two endings, one with the gang winning and one with Broli winning, so as to lead into Universe-20's continuity.


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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by rereboy » Sat Jul 03, 2010 7:02 pm

Senzu_Bean wrote:Yeah, Salagir said on the comments Broly on the first special was SSJ2-tier and on the second coming he is SSJ3-tier.
Hmm, I didn`t remember that.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Zephyr » Sat Jul 03, 2010 9:13 pm

JulieYBM wrote:I think this chapter is going to have two endings, one with the gang winning and one with Broli winning, so as to lead into Universe-20's continuity.
Wait, I thought this was the backstory to Universe 20. Not paying much attention to this chapter....

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Ussj Future Trunks » Sun Jul 04, 2010 12:45 am

Wait, I thought this was the backstory to Universe 20. Not paying much attention to this chapter....
It said on the chapter cover it was for U18, 16, 4 and 20. Strange how Babidi's universe never had Broly return to earth.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by JulieYBM » Sun Jul 04, 2010 2:34 pm

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Post by SHINOBI-03 » Sun Jul 04, 2010 3:00 pm

Legendary fail indeed!

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by ShadowDude112 » Sun Jul 04, 2010 4:28 pm

Zephyr wrote:
TonyTheTiger wrote:
Xyex wrote: Now why did I not think of this? :lol:

I second Tori-bot's demand! :twisted:
Third. :lol:

But only because Bra is there.
Fourth'd.

But really, "The Legendary Saiyan"? That's just bad. Good art though.
Fifth'd! This would be a hilarious chapter also.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Ussj Future Trunks » Sun Jul 04, 2010 11:04 pm

Ah Vegeta always being an hothead. Everyone will get fucked up in the next pages even if Vegeta goes ssj2.
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