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Re: DeadlyChestnut's "Universe F" fan comic

Post by JulieYBM » Tue Oct 12, 2010 12:53 pm

Dang, I love that cinematic set-up. It's...so gorgeous. :cry:
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Post by Big Momma » Tue Oct 12, 2010 1:18 pm

He does a great job wording what Freeza says, too! I hear everything in Ayres' voice :D
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Post by dbgtFO » Tue Oct 12, 2010 1:24 pm

Big Momma wrote:He does a great job wording what Freeza says, too! I hear everything in Ayres' voice :D
AFAIK the author is female 8)
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Post by ShiningMoon » Tue Oct 12, 2010 1:25 pm

Big Momma wrote:He does a great job wording what Freeza says, too! I hear everything in Ayres' voice :D
She. :)
(Oops, beaten to it.)

But I totally agree. I love how well she writes Freeza's dialogue... I love this page in general. I think that Appule-looking character is one of her OCs from this.
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Post by Scarz » Tue Oct 12, 2010 2:43 pm

The background and dialogue is superb! If the story gets better from here I may have a new favorite fancomic.
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Post by Big Momma » Tue Oct 12, 2010 4:44 pm

Sorry, I knew it was a girl, too....I dunno why I wrote that :?
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Re: DeadlyChestnut's "Universe F" fan comic

Post by Saimaroimaru » Thu Oct 14, 2010 4:47 am

I feel sorry for Nappa losing his kids. Perhaps this Nappa isn't as sadistic as the canon one? Nah. This one just got laid thats all.
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Post by Piccolo Daimao » Thu Oct 14, 2010 3:25 pm

Saimaroimaru wrote:I feel sorry for Nappa losing his kids. Perhaps this Nappa isn't as sadistic as the canon one? Nah. This one just got laid thats all.
Who said Nappa didn't get laid in the canon story? He's in his 50s in the Saiyan arc, and between 25 and 34 in the Bardock special.
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Re: DeadlyChestnut's "Universe F" fan comic

Post by Saimaroimaru » Thu Oct 14, 2010 9:54 pm

Piccolo Daimao wrote:
Saimaroimaru wrote:I feel sorry for Nappa losing his kids. Perhaps this Nappa isn't as sadistic as the canon one? Nah. This one just got laid thats all.
Who says Nappa didn't get laid in the canon story? He's in his 50s in the Saiyan arc, and between 25 and 34 in the Bardock special.
Eh, but it was mentioned on panel. Nevermind you don't get it.
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Post by dbgtFO » Sun Oct 17, 2010 4:55 am

Saimaroimaru wrote:
Piccolo Daimao wrote:
Saimaroimaru wrote:I feel sorry for Nappa losing his kids. Perhaps this Nappa isn't as sadistic as the canon one? Nah. This one just got laid thats all.
Who says Nappa didn't get laid in the canon story? He's in his 50s in the Saiyan arc, and between 25 and 34 in the Bardock special.
Eh, but it was mentioned on panel. Nevermind you don't get it.
Lol, what do you know about how much Piccolo Daimao can get? Explain, where it was mentioned on panel, that Nappa didn't get laid, I want to know.
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Post by dbgtFO » Mon Oct 18, 2010 8:10 am

Finally some interaction between those two, even though, they are on the "same" side there is still a lot of tension, presumably because of them being very close in power!
I'm excited about what we will see next.
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Re: DeadlyChestnut's "Universe F" fan comic

Post by Shiyonasan » Sun Oct 24, 2010 11:36 pm

Chapter 2 - Page 3:

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Cooler's coming...

Also, more politics!
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Post by JulieYBM » Sun Oct 24, 2010 11:48 pm

Oh, how I love where this is going. Surely there is a sibling rivalry going on here...
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Post by StarRot » Mon Oct 25, 2010 7:36 am

God damn, I love her art. Those backrounds are fantastic.
Story is getting interesting now ...
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Post by JJ94 » Mon Oct 25, 2010 8:46 pm

JulieYBM wrote:Oh, how I love where this is going. Surely there is a sibling rivalry going on here...
Yeah, it would be awesome if they fought each other.
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Re: DeadlyChestnut's "Universe F" fan comic

Post by Piccolo Daimaoh » Tue Oct 26, 2010 4:37 am

The art is absolutely stunning. Also, I love the way Freeza talks down to Vegeta.
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Re: DeadlyChestnut's "Universe F" fan comic

Post by batistabus » Wed Oct 27, 2010 11:17 pm

I wish Freeza had said "And you think it's more important than the matter at hand?" instead of "the issue we got here", but that's just nit-picking. Other than that, I love EVERYTHING about this comic.
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Re: DeadlyChestnut's "Universe F" fan comic

Post by Shiyonasan » Mon Nov 15, 2010 1:53 am

First update after three weeks.

Chapter 2 - Page 4:

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Introduction of Sauza!
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Post by StarRot » Mon Nov 15, 2010 4:04 am

Yay, new update!
Freeza wrote:Stay. Over there.
Haha, I just love that.
So if Sauza is here, I guess that means Cooler will appear soon hopefully.
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