Does it irritate you when people say DB was poorly written?

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Re: Does it irritate you when people say DB was poorly writt

Post by Michsi » Mon Feb 06, 2012 5:53 pm

I can't help but feel the exact same thing is happening now but with the series reversed, bringing up what one considers to be bad series in order to make the other one look good by comparison.

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Re: Does it irritate you when people say DB was poorly writt

Post by dbboxkaifan » Mon Feb 06, 2012 5:56 pm

If they're talking about Dragon Ball Z then I somewhat agree with them, but it's not horrible or poorly written.
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Re: Does it irritate you when people say DB was poorly writt

Post by SparkyPantsMcGee » Mon Feb 06, 2012 6:19 pm

Michsi wrote:I can't help but feel the exact same thing is happening now but with the series reversed, bringing up what one considers to be bad series in order to make the other one look good by comparison.
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Re: Does it irritate you when people say DB was poorly writt

Post by BlazingFiddlesticks » Mon Feb 06, 2012 6:20 pm

AgitoZ wrote:It doesn't really irritate me when people say DB is poorly written, since I would agree (to a certain degree). But, I always saw that the "well" written parts out weighed the "poorly" written.

Not to mention, for a man writing by the seat of his pants it could've been MUCH worse. I'm surprised it turned out as well as it did.
Pretty much this. I don't see how a fan can really say otherwise, since by definition they know the series strengths and faults better than an outside observer.
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Re: Does it irritate you when people say DB was poorly writt

Post by TheGreatness25 » Mon Feb 06, 2012 6:39 pm

The problem is that a lot of people who get irritated with comments like that are using their sentimental and emotional connections to the show. Why? Would you say it was well-written? It's riddled with plot holes, and everyone admits that Akira Toriyama was like, "Ehh, I'm lazy. Ehh, I don't remember some characters' names. Ehh, I'll just write this cop-out." The entire Boo arc does not make sense. Raditz saying that planet Vegeta was destroyed three years prior, etc.

Was it a great STORY? Yes. It was freaking epic. What other story deals with the entire universe, heavens, hell, and the battle to save it all? No other story does. But to say that it was well-written is not really accurate.

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Re: Does it irritate you when people say DB was poorly writt

Post by Piccolo Daimao » Mon Feb 06, 2012 6:42 pm

TheGreatness25 wrote:Raditz saying that planet Vegeta was destroyed three years prior
Dub-only line.
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Re: Does it irritate you when people say DB was poorly writt

Post by Gaffer Tape » Mon Feb 06, 2012 6:43 pm

Totally agree. Fans do tend to be super loyal, which can lead to this mentality that what they love is above criticism, which simply is not an objective mindset to have.

However, Raditz saying that Vegeta blew up three years prior is a FUNimationism, not a Toriyamaism. Throw the man under a bus, but at least don't give him the blame for other people's crappy writing skills. :lol:
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Re: Does it irritate you when people say DB was poorly writt

Post by Piccolo Daimao » Mon Feb 06, 2012 6:46 pm

Yeah, I don't want to beat a dead horse, but those anime/dub-isms really don't help the matter when the original manga has enough plotholes and inconsistencies.
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Re: Does it irritate you when people say DB was poorly writt

Post by AgitoZ » Mon Feb 06, 2012 6:57 pm

Piccolo Daimao wrote:Yeah, I don't want to beat a dead horse, but those anime/dub-isms really don't help the matter when the original manga has enough plotholes and inconsistencies.
A lot of misinformation and arguments would disappear if more people read the original comic.
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Re: Does it irritate you when people say DB was poorly writt

Post by Piccolo Daimao » Mon Feb 06, 2012 7:18 pm

AgitoZ wrote:
Piccolo Daimao wrote:Yeah, I don't want to beat a dead horse, but those anime/dub-isms really don't help the matter when the original manga has enough plotholes and inconsistencies.
A lot of misinformation and arguments would disappear if more people read the original comic.
Would I be wrong in presuming that the anime is more known and accessible than the manga? Since I didn't even realize DB had a manga until my sister bought it for my 8th birthday or something.
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Re: Does it irritate you when people say DB was poorly writt

Post by SparkyPantsMcGee » Mon Feb 06, 2012 8:29 pm

In the US, no it's not wrong to presume that at all. It's true. A majority of the people that know of Dragonball know it though the anime when it was on Toonami(and maybe these days Kai and the Video Games). I'm sure there are people who know of a manga but I doubt they wanted to read it. If they did, they are most likely here or on some other "hardcore" Dragonball site.
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Re: Does it irritate you when people say DB was poorly writt

Post by Master Blaster » Mon Feb 06, 2012 9:34 pm

Hellspawn28 wrote:Dragon Ball is a shonen series, you are not going to find something like Watchmen or anything from George Orwell when reading Dragon Ball. I'm pretty sure Toriyama's goal with Dragon Ball was to make a fun series for people to enjoy, not make some deep arthouse series.
This. Dragon Ball did exactly what it tried to accomplish, nothing more. I think one of the reasons for Dragon Ball's great success is, that it never tried to be more than it is.

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Re: Does it irritate you when people say DB was poorly writt

Post by JulieYBM » Mon Feb 06, 2012 10:30 pm

SparkyPantsMcGee wrote:Next time it happens, say this "Dragonball's writing has nothing to do with Bleaches inability to produce a plot." then smile and walk away. He will be sad and never bring up the subject again.
Uh...Bleach does have a plot. It stay as still as the general plot for Naruto does (a kid sets out to earn respect and change the world he lives in) and tends to stick to story arcs like Dragon Ball, but a plot and continuing plot threads are there.


Anyhow, general statements like "Dragon Ball is poorly written" don't bother me. Maybe a specific example would and I'd discuss why, but otherwise I try not to care.
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Re: Does it irritate you when people say DB was poorly writt

Post by MCDaveG » Tue Feb 07, 2012 8:11 am

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SHINOBI-03 wrote:
SparkyPantsMcGee wrote:Next time it happens, say this "Dragonball's writing has nothing to do with Bleaches inability to produce a plot." then smile and walk away. He will be sad and never bring up the subject again.
I wish it was that simple to convince them!
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Re: Does it irritate you when people say DB was poorly writt

Post by Saiga » Tue Feb 07, 2012 8:16 am

Bleach's plot really isn't difficult to understand (unless you watch the filler for some unfathomable reason).

It doesn't bother me at all when people say that DB was poorly written (or my other favorites Bleach, One Piece and Naruto), because that's just their own opinion and it's fine for them to feel that way. I don't share their sentiments, but I don't let it get to me or affect my enjoyment of the series at all.
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