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Post by kaialone » Tue Feb 22, 2011 11:48 am

Sun-Wukong wrote: Tell that to Bardock.
Bardock is a Saiyajin.Krillin is Krillin Dont be mad,I do like Krillin

Also,Am I the only one who thinks the blood looks weird?I mean at first I thought it was brown fur.
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Post by Piccolo Daimao » Tue Feb 22, 2011 11:49 am

Seriously, fuck this. Blood would not come out of Kuririn's mouth and ears if he suffocated in space. You're unnecessarily drawing out the characters' deaths with exaggerated methods. A Kienzan slicing Tenshinhan in half? Kuririn being dragged into fucking space and blood spurting out from his mouth and ears? Why, wh-why, why would you do this? :evil:
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Post by JulieYBM » Tue Feb 22, 2011 2:52 pm

Piccolo Daimao wrote:Seriously, fuck this. Blood would not come out of Kuririn's mouth and ears if he suffocated in space. You're unnecessarily drawing out the characters' deaths with exaggerated methods. A Kienzan slicing Tenshinhan in half? Kuririn being dragged into fucking space and blood spurting out from his mouth and ears? Why, wh-why, why would you do this? :evil:
Why would one not? Gohan had just finished strewing the guts of the Cell Juniors all over the place in the comic, so extreme violence isn't out of the question for the series.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Innagadadavida » Tue Feb 22, 2011 2:54 pm

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Post by Sun-Wukong » Tue Feb 22, 2011 6:46 pm

kaialone wrote:
Sun-Wukong wrote: Tell that to Bardock.
Bardock is a Saiyajin.Krillin is Krillin Dont be mad,I do like Krillin
And Goku needed a space ship to survive when Namek blew up.
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Post by AgitoZ » Tue Feb 22, 2011 6:59 pm

Sun-Wukong wrote: And Goku needed a space ship to survive when Namek blew up.
Well other than Bardock who else has survived....that isn't filler? The majority of the time characters have been troubled with surviving in space, so the point still stands. And Puto still has the best point of all, in space you'd choke to death, not bleed.
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Post by DNA » Tue Feb 22, 2011 7:03 pm

AgitoZ wrote:Well other than Bardock who else has survived....that isn't filler? The majority of the time characters have been troubled with surviving in space, so the point still stands. And Puto still has the best point of all, in space you'd choke to death, not bleed.
Unless you're Bardock. He is just that much of a badass.

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Post by Cipher » Wed Feb 23, 2011 3:29 am

So, I don't regularly follow this comic, but I check in every once in a while.

Yikes.

My main problem with this "special" (besides all the obvious ones) is how ludicrously out of character it is. Cell is evil, but he's not a sadist. He wants to prove his superiority, get some reactions and move onto greater challenges when he's done. I know he said he'd kill every human on Earth after winning the Cell Games, but he's all about business. He would not go around handing each character the most gruesome death he could think of.

The only Dragon Ball villains I can think of who are this creatively sadistic are Piccolo Daimao and Babidi. Maaaaaybe Freeza, but even then he doesn't seem to torture his opponents except when necessary, or in Vegeta and Kuririn's cases when he was absolutely furious.

And oh, what this comic could have been. Bored Cell having adventures would have been amazing.

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Post by Fox666 » Wed Feb 23, 2011 3:50 am

Cell was quite furious after he was beaten by Super Saiyan 2 Gohan... besides it wasn't Cell who started to attack them

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Post by DNA » Wed Feb 23, 2011 6:58 am

Fox666 wrote:Cell was quite furious after he was beaten by Super Saiyan 2 Gohan... besides it wasn't Cell who started to attack them
Still, he could just dispose of them quickly, or IGNORE THEM as he as done in the past.

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Post by Godo » Wed Feb 23, 2011 11:06 am

Second form Cell didn't attack Kuririn with the intent to kill, and when he became Perfect, even though Kuririn had caused him a lot of trouble, he squatted him away with a kick to test his new power. There was no torture at all.
What we have seen until now is totally out of character.

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Post by DNA » Wed Feb 23, 2011 11:27 am

Out of character seems to be a staple in Multiverse.
Examples:
Vegetto is not over-confident, he's cautious and calculating.
Bra's personality is just shit, they come up with a literal "Mary Sue" type of character when they have one themselves, talk about hypocritical.
And despite all the hate, I must bravely say that even Broly is completely out of character, if you watch the first movie and actually pay attention to it you realize is as much of a mindless moron as any other villain is. Baby towards the end acts more like a retard than Broly ever does. Broly knows full well what he's doing and he talks a lot during the first movie.
Uub is over-confident and cocky, that's quite a development from someone who's completely shy and scared at the beginning.
Neko Majin goes from silly and wacky to flat out retarded.

Honestly, they try to be funny but in my opinion they just fail. They also fail at actually knowing the personalities of characters.

Edit: Just want to add that Vegetto is confident, not over-confident.

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Post by rereboy » Wed Feb 23, 2011 12:53 pm

Well, I'm gonna disagree DNA. There is nothing wrong with your opinion of course, I just happen to disagree with you and you are welcome to disagree with me :mrgreen:. Here are my reasons:

Vegetto is not cautious in DBM. If anything he is as confident as we expect him to be.

When asked who was going to win the tournament, Vegetto replied, without a doubt, that it was going to be him.

He could have finished Broly right away when Broly started to act crazy and attack everyone... Instead he extended the fight as long as he could just to enjoy himself, allowing Broly to power up several times, putting everyone in further and needless danger, just because he wanted to enjoy himself and because he was confident that he could stop Broly afterwards. Not very cautious... But very understandable for someone like Vegetto who never had a real fight since he was "formed".

When he noticed that Buu was up to something, he simply teleported without taking a senzu bean even though he told the others to follow him. Again, not very cautious... Reckless even and too confident, considering that he was the strongest and most experienced fighter of his universe, considering that he was really exausted at that moment and also considering that Buu seems to be much stronger than he imagined. That situation really backfired on him due to his lack of cautiousness and over confidence in himself and the others.

As for Vegetto being calculating, I don't see him being any more calculating than Vegetto in the original manga and than a mix between Goku and Vegeta's intelligence in the original manga and in DBM. There's hardly anything that he noticed that Goku and Vegeta didn't noticed in the tournament. He seemed to be able to detect Buu's actions earlier than the others but I believe that has more to do with the fact that his powers of detections are better simply because he is more powerful than the others.


As for Bra's personality in the main story (not in the special, I don't care about the specials at all), it seems fine. She seems to be a somewhat unexperienced teen with a hot head and lots of power in her hands (which she sometimes has trouble controlling, probably due to her inexperience).
That description is what I would imagine the offspring of Vegetto to be, especially since she never faced any REAL enemies like the gang did.
And because of those flaws she doesn't feel perfect to me at all like a Mary Sue usually feels. Gohan had to set her straight when Pan died so that they weren't disqualified and she really messed up in the Buu situation. In fact, so far, she hasn't done anything "right" or displayed superior qualities besides being very powerful.


Uub suffers from the same thing that Bra suffers: he is inexperienced. He also never had to face REAL enemies so he seems to have grown confident in his abilities but always respectful and very inexperienced in real battle. That's why he lost an arm in his fight.
This description is also what I would imagine Uub would be like if GT never happened.

As for Neko Majin, from his single line of dialog, I don't see him being any more retarted or more stupid than the original.

As for Broly, I totally agree with you DNA :mrgreen:.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by DNA » Wed Feb 23, 2011 12:59 pm

You got it the other way around. DBM's Vegetto is NOT cautious or calculating. The original his. He calculated his whole attack on Buu, the cockyness to get him furious, the barrier not to be absorb, etc. This one seems to be an overconfident asshole. He hasn't even realized that Hyper Buu is far stronger than him.

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Post by rereboy » Wed Feb 23, 2011 1:09 pm

DNA wrote:You got it the other way around. DBM's Vegetto is NOT cautious or calculating. The original his. He calculated his whole attack on Buu, the cockyness to get him furious, the barrier not to be absorb, etc. This one seems to be an overconfident asshole. He hasn't even realized that Hyper Buu is far stronger than him.
Ah, sorry about that. Misread you :lol:.

Yes, he truly was over confident in the Buu situation. That is true.

In the Broly situation he had it all planned even though he could have been much more cautious. But, truth be told, Vegetto in the manga could also have been much more cautious with Buu. He risked it all to try and save Gohan and the others when he could just have simply killed Buu and revived them afterwards with the Dragon Balls. So, Vegetto in the Broly situation is not off-character especially since he is supposed to be bored out of his mind without any worthy opponent in his universe.

But in the (DBM) Buu situation, yeah, he is a little off character, there is no point in denying it. He really had no plan and he was way too over confident. He should have known better :mrgreen: .

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by DNA » Wed Feb 23, 2011 1:22 pm

I suspect that he's gonna be defeated at some point during the tournament.

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Post by rereboy » Wed Feb 23, 2011 1:42 pm

DNA wrote:I suspect that he's gonna be defeated at some point during the tournament.
Ah, most certainly. Probably by XXI to set up the "true" main villain.

But hey, if they do things right, that's not necessarily a bad thing.

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Post by DNA » Wed Feb 23, 2011 2:03 pm

I'm actually hoping he does, that way we do away with his cocky attitude and add unpredictability to the whole tournament. If you slowly take away the big players, you end up having a more interesting tournament. Broly's gone already, next one's gotta be Vegetto, they're the only 2 ones which are basically the same as they were before, well and Cell, but he's already falling a bit short. Top tier seems to be Zen Buu, Vegetto, Hyper Namek and XIII. Everyone else seems to be middle or low tier.

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Post by Scarz » Wed Feb 23, 2011 3:53 pm

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Hopefully Salagir will spare us the nasty details in the up coming pages. Oh who am I kidding, let the mass murder of humans begin!

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Post by Kaboom » Wed Feb 23, 2011 4:19 pm

The detail level and layout of that middle panel reminds me of that old Spider-Man Cartoon Maker PC game I used to have.
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