General Fan Fiction Thread
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Actually, quick question. Is it alright to change some character's personalities if their boring, or are a near clone of another character? Just need to know for my Fan Fiction.
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With how the TIme Patrol works in Xenoverse, I took it to mean that at first changes are condensed into a small fracture, that if unattended to becomes a noticeable split. Otherwise small changes are not big enough to cause a split and thus doesn't affect all that much.ekrolo2 wrote:This makes a lot of sense to me. They talk a big game about alternate timeline's being bad for the universe but it makes sense to me that they'd be damaging to the actual fabric of reality if they started splitting more and more.Kanassa wrote:Does this sound stupid?[spoiler]For my fanfic I'm ignoring time travel rules established in Super, and only going off of Z's set, while adding my own. To add much more consequence to time travel, I have it that time itself cannot sustain too many excess timelines, so when people keep fucking around with time all willy-nilly and causing more splits, time itself has to find a way to adapt to it. It's natural contingency is to flat out start erasing timelines, starting with the original, so when other splits are caused so quickly between one another time itself is unable to deal with it and.... Well, everything goes pear shaped. Which is why people like the Supreme Kai of Time are needed, to maintain the flow of time and cut off loose ends before they expand into damaging splits.[/spoiler]
When Super apparently shoves Goku down our throats:
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Kanassa wrote:- FoolsGil, Out of Context, 2017FoolsGil wrote:I hope Mark is dead. But chances are the dragonballs will bring his stupid ass back.
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If you give a natural reason that they've changed in this way, it's fine. But if they're just a different personality for no reason, there's no point to including that character.Gog wrote:Actually, quick question. Is it alright to change some character's personalities if their boring, or are a near clone of another character? Just need to know for my Fan Fiction.
When Super apparently shoves Goku down our throats:
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Kanassa wrote:- FoolsGil, Out of Context, 2017FoolsGil wrote:I hope Mark is dead. But chances are the dragonballs will bring his stupid ass back.
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That seems to be how the games work. No one particularly cares if a random guy gets stolen by Ginyu as long as Goku's eventually does too and the main history goes as planned.Kanassa wrote:With how the TIme Patrol works in Xenoverse, I took it to mean that at first changes are condensed into a small fracture, that if unattended to becomes a noticeable split. Otherwise small changes are not big enough to cause a split and thus doesn't affect all that much.ekrolo2 wrote:This makes a lot of sense to me. They talk a big game about alternate timeline's being bad for the universe but it makes sense to me that they'd be damaging to the actual fabric of reality if they started splitting more and more.Kanassa wrote:Does this sound stupid?[spoiler]For my fanfic I'm ignoring time travel rules established in Super, and only going off of Z's set, while adding my own. To add much more consequence to time travel, I have it that time itself cannot sustain too many excess timelines, so when people keep fucking around with time all willy-nilly and causing more splits, time itself has to find a way to adapt to it. It's natural contingency is to flat out start erasing timelines, starting with the original, so when other splits are caused so quickly between one another time itself is unable to deal with it and.... Well, everything goes pear shaped. Which is why people like the Supreme Kai of Time are needed, to maintain the flow of time and cut off loose ends before they expand into damaging splits.[/spoiler]
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Also, my story ignores the possibility of multiple Zeno's existing in the timelines. For me, he lives outside of time itself, as does the Supreme Kai of Time.ekrolo2 wrote:That seems to be how the games work. No one particularly cares if a random guy gets stolen by Ginyu as long as Goku's eventually does too and the main history goes as planned.Kanassa wrote:With how the TIme Patrol works in Xenoverse, I took it to mean that at first changes are condensed into a small fracture, that if unattended to becomes a noticeable split. Otherwise small changes are not big enough to cause a split and thus doesn't affect all that much.ekrolo2 wrote: This makes a lot of sense to me. They talk a big game about alternate timeline's being bad for the universe but it makes sense to me that they'd be damaging to the actual fabric of reality if they started splitting more and more.
When Super apparently shoves Goku down our throats:
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Kanassa wrote:- FoolsGil, Out of Context, 2017FoolsGil wrote:I hope Mark is dead. But chances are the dragonballs will bring his stupid ass back.
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As am I, bringing in multiple Zeno's just makes an already problematic element that much worse if you realize there's 4 of them already there.Kanassa wrote:Also, my story ignores the possibility of multiple Zeno's existing in the timelines. For me, he lives outside of time itself, as does the Supreme Kai of Time.
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Does it make sense for Zeno and the SKOT to be connected liek th Gods and their Kais? Since it's the 'God of Space' and the 'God of Time'ekrolo2 wrote:As am I, bringing in multiple Zeno's just makes an already problematic element that much worse if you realize there's 4 of them already there.Kanassa wrote:Also, my story ignores the possibility of multiple Zeno's existing in the timelines. For me, he lives outside of time itself, as does the Supreme Kai of Time.
When Super apparently shoves Goku down our throats:
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Kanassa wrote:- FoolsGil, Out of Context, 2017FoolsGil wrote:I hope Mark is dead. But chances are the dragonballs will bring his stupid ass back.
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That would be fitting if they're the only constants across the multiverse.Kanassa wrote:Does it make sense for Zeno and the SKOT to be connected liek th Gods and their Kais? Since it's the 'God of Space' and the 'God of Time'ekrolo2 wrote:As am I, bringing in multiple Zeno's just makes an already problematic element that much worse if you realize there's 4 of them already there.Kanassa wrote:Also, my story ignores the possibility of multiple Zeno's existing in the timelines. For me, he lives outside of time itself, as does the Supreme Kai of Time.
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How come the Future Zeno isn't dead, then?ekrolo2 wrote:That would be fitting if they're the only constants across the multiverse.Kanassa wrote:Does it make sense for Zeno and the SKOT to be connected liek th Gods and their Kais? Since it's the 'God of Space' and the 'God of Time'ekrolo2 wrote: As am I, bringing in multiple Zeno's just makes an already problematic element that much worse if you realize there's 4 of them already there.
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How do you mean?TheUltimateNinja wrote:How come the Future Zeno isn't dead, then?ekrolo2 wrote:That would be fitting if they're the only constants across the multiverse.Kanassa wrote: Does it make sense for Zeno and the SKOT to be connected liek th Gods and their Kais? Since it's the 'God of Space' and the 'God of Time'
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Zeno isn't really the "God" of anything though. He's a King.
Though I also like the idea of him being immune to time fuckery.
Though I also like the idea of him being immune to time fuckery.
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That does bring up the question: can he create just as he can destroy? I imagine he's responsible for the Angels existing and Kai's and planets so he probably does have the ability to make anything he wants.Doctor. wrote:Zeno isn't really the "God" of anything though. He's a King.
Though I also like the idea of him being immune to time fuckery.
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If he's connected to Chronoa, her death should kill him as well.ekrolo2 wrote:How do you mean?TheUltimateNinja wrote:How come the Future Zeno isn't dead, then?ekrolo2 wrote: That would be fitting if they're the only constants across the multiverse.
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When did she die?TheUltimateNinja wrote:If he's connected to Chronoa, her death should kill him as well.ekrolo2 wrote:How do you mean?TheUltimateNinja wrote: How come the Future Zeno isn't dead, then?
When Super apparently shoves Goku down our throats:
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Kanassa wrote:- FoolsGil, Out of Context, 2017FoolsGil wrote:I hope Mark is dead. But chances are the dragonballs will bring his stupid ass back.
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One more question: to Rose or not to Rose? I got rid of Blue and just kept SS but I could always explain Black's different hair color as his ki filtered through Goku's body resulting in a "corrupted" SS similar to Baby.
It would yeah, but since Chronoa is even more divorced from everything, it should be nigh impossible for anybody to get to her. Anybody with the balls to actually do her harm.TheUltimateNinja wrote:If he's connected to Chronoa, her death should kill him as well.
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Is Black still a flamboyant asshole? If so, then yes, it fits his personality.ekrolo2 wrote:One more question: to Rose or not to Rose? I got rid of Blue and just kept SS but I could always explain Black's different hair color as his ki filtered through Goku's body resulting in a "corrupted" SS similar to Baby.
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Flamboyant as fuck, even more obsessed with Goku tooDoctor. wrote:Is Black still a flamboyant asshole? If so, then yes, it fits his personality.ekrolo2 wrote:One more question: to Rose or not to Rose? I got rid of Blue and just kept SS but I could always explain Black's different hair color as his ki filtered through Goku's body resulting in a "corrupted" SS similar to Baby.
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Just explain it as Kaioshin/God Ki mixed with mortal Ki SS then, it works out.ekrolo2 wrote:Flamboyant as fuck, even more obsessed with Goku tooDoctor. wrote:Is Black still a flamboyant asshole? If so, then yes, it fits his personality.ekrolo2 wrote:One more question: to Rose or not to Rose? I got rid of Blue and just kept SS but I could always explain Black's different hair color as his ki filtered through Goku's body resulting in a "corrupted" SS similar to Baby.
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Why do I feel like you're thinking of Frost while posing this questionGog wrote:Actually, quick question. Is it alright to change some character's personalities if their boring, or are a near clone of another character? Just need to know for my Fan Fiction.
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Your close, but the one I'm redoing is Coolerekrolo2 wrote:Why do I feel like you're thinking of Frost while posing this questionGog wrote:Actually, quick question. Is it alright to change some character's personalities if their boring, or are a near clone of another character? Just need to know for my Fan Fiction.




