Dragon Ball Deliverance Ep 03

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Dragon Ball Deliverance Ep 03

Post by goku1234 » Mon Sep 14, 2020 1:00 am

check this fan animation video and if u are like the the video please subscribe https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCezCSn ... dlFEmjxLQQ
So now enjoy the amazing fan animation
https://youtu.be/cM3iF32reeE

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Re: Dragon Ball Deliverance Ep 03

Post by Skar » Mon Sep 14, 2020 7:49 am

goku1234 wrote: Mon Sep 14, 2020 1:00 am check this fan animation video and if u are like the the video please subscribe https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCezCSn ... dlFEmjxLQQ
So now enjoy the amazing fan animation
https://youtu.be/cM3iF32reeE
Wow that's pretty good for fan animation! I wonder how long it takes to make each episode? I also liked the idea of Kid Buu being a symbiote for Uub.

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Re: Dragon Ball Deliverance Ep 03

Post by JulieYBM » Mon Sep 14, 2020 12:16 pm

There's some nice animation and storyboarding. I find the sound work to be the weakest aspect, though. Really bad acting and music and it kind of drags the whole thing down. Very much.

The dialogue is also really bad. It's too grandiose and trying to sound deep.
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Re: Dragon Ball Deliverance Ep 03

Post by goku1234 » Tue Sep 15, 2020 12:44 am

Skar wrote: Mon Sep 14, 2020 7:49 am
goku1234 wrote: Mon Sep 14, 2020 1:00 am check this fan animation video and if u are like the the video please subscribe https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCezCSn ... dlFEmjxLQQ
So now enjoy the amazing fan animation
https://youtu.be/cM3iF32reeE
Wow that's pretty good for fan animation! I wonder how long it takes to make each episode? I also liked the idea of Kid Buu being a symbiote for Uub.
i think it more than a year....

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Re: Dragon Ball Deliverance Ep 03

Post by dario03 » Tue Sep 15, 2020 1:19 am

Surprised they made the episode so long, its longer than an episode from the actual shows. And could easily be 3 web episodes without any abrupt cuts. Some of the dialogue like the commander monologuing to himself was odd, and the quality in animation and especially the acting isn't very consistent but for a fan animation its pretty good.

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Re: Dragon Ball Deliverance Ep 03

Post by Thani » Fri Oct 02, 2020 9:40 pm

I've gotta admit, episode 2 and 3 improved A LOT from the pilot. Great, great work.

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Re: Dragon Ball Deliverance Ep 03

Post by Koitsukai » Fri Oct 02, 2020 9:59 pm

It's a good thing youtube recommended me episode 3 and not episode 1 because the quality of the latter would've made me skip this fan production immediately, and I would've missed something awesome. Vegeta vs Broly looks just fantastic, the Royal Spear left me speechless, I can't go back to SDBH after this.

Too bad it's a whole year until episode 4.

Also, Uub's characterization is unbelievable, what an awesome way to add something new and creative to a character.

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