Over the top Dragonball AF MANGA!!!

kuchi · Post by **kuchi** » Tue Aug 28, 2007 7:56 pm

Um...

"It was only by coming to this crazy time and living like an animal that I was able to achieve my full potential!!!"

Sadly, on my first go I didn't get even as far as Luffy and Naruto. I'm not trying to be overly critical when I say it looks like minimal effort went into the making of this comic; regardless of any attempt the artist may have made to imitate either Toriyama's, Oda's or Kishimoto's original style (I see none...), the art itself at times seems comparable to that of a, err, very young person. The panels are chaotic, at times overly dark and confusing; the artist has little to no grasp of anatomy, and while he claims to have taken "figure drawing classes", there seems to be plenty of evidence to the contrary. While this seems to have been a valiant attempt at an action-gag manga, it clearly lacks the amount of time and energy that would have made it... bearable.

Hironobu Timex · Post by **Hironobu Timex** » Tue Aug 28, 2007 8:16 pm

This guy is so the FRANK MILLER of Dragon Ball. DB RETURNS!

Edit: I feel really guilty about this post. Won't let it happen again, even if it means never posting. I have mental illness.

Jerseymilk · Post by **Jerseymilk** » Wed Aug 29, 2007 8:30 am

kuchi wrote:the art itself at times seems comparable to that of a, err, very young person.

You mean the comic wasn't done by a 5 year-old?!

caejones · Post by **caejones** » Wed Aug 29, 2007 8:35 am

From what the posters on the first page indicated, umm... it's supposed to look like that?

*has nothing non-self-oriented to contribut, so leaves it at that*

kyosuke koizumi · Post by **kyosuke koizumi** » Thu Aug 30, 2007 9:23 am

Thanks for the feedback! I love your shocked and disturbed reactions as well as your strange fasination with this ground breaking masterpiece.

Keep on posting! Because only by posting in this crazy time will you ever achieve your full potential!!!! Be on the look out for a You Tube post of this with music by TM Revolution and Bret "the Hitman" Hart!

SSJ 5 Goku says......

The S · Post by **The S** » Thu Aug 30, 2007 10:34 am

jjgp1112 wrote:Good God that was awful. I've never been so glad to delete a page in my life. (besides the time I was on IGN's the vesti and clicked on a URL that linked to a pic of a guy sprading his ass cheeks and revealing his asshole)

You didn't delete it dude. It still exists. -_-

Anyway... I thought it was an okay parody of little kid fanboys' visions of AF... I loved the idea of a D.O.N. Genki Dama... and Segata Sanshirou appearing as the world's stongest man? HILARIOUS!

I had a hard time telling what was going on art-wise most of the time, though.

gohanku · Post by **gohanku** » Fri Aug 31, 2007 3:25 am

The S, I think he meant, delete it from his History. And SSJ5 Goku creeps me out, the purple borders and aura with the weird eyes is making me feel nauseated.

kyosuke koizumi · Post by **kyosuke koizumi** » Fri Aug 31, 2007 8:56 pm

I hate dull colors!!!

kyosuke koizumi · Post by **kyosuke koizumi** » Sun Sep 02, 2007 6:03 pm

And if you really want to go for a wild ride check this out! Just completed... while toyble's site is calm and soothing mine will give you a shot of sugar in your eye!!!

http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm?fu ... =233724219

NeptuneKai · Post by **NeptuneKai** » Sun Sep 02, 2007 7:32 pm

His non-anime art isn’t half bad actually. Even some of his anime art isn't terrible. Although this is totally messing me up because some art looks super professional and some art looks like it’s drawn by a 13 year old in M.S paint.
He has some form of unique talent (and promotion skills) that's for sure.

bkev · Post by **bkev** » Sun Sep 02, 2007 7:57 pm

I kinda like this one:

kyosuke koizumi · Post by **kyosuke koizumi** » Thu Sep 06, 2007 12:45 pm

Now on you tube! With music by tm revolution!

http://youtube.com/watch?v=FFZE6yMyeh4

kyosuke koizumi · Post by **kyosuke koizumi** » Fri Sep 07, 2007 7:46 pm

Yes...Yes...and in conclusion the definative ending to the Dragonball legend....In the proud tradition of Street Fighter 2 turbo, and Fatal Fury Special, here it is.........

DRAGONBALL AF TURBO TYPE D REMIX....

BOLD NEW ART!!! SHOCKING NEW ENDING!!!!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R31NYU1u-ZU

Thank You "mina"....It's been so much fun.....

HAILED BY AKIRA TORIYAMA'S DENTIST AS THE DEFINITIVE CONCLUSION TO THE DRAGONBALL LEGEND! DRAGONBALL AF TURBO TYPE D IS A MASTERPIECE OF UNTOLD PROPORTIONS. THIS RETELLING OF THE DOUJINSHI CLASSIC CONTAINS DRAMA, ACTION, AND ROMANCE AGAINST THE BACKDROP OF HUMANITIES FINAL FATE! THIS TRULY IS THE FINAL FANTASY!!! STORY AND ART BY THE FAMED KYO KOIZUMI, MUSIC BY KIMERU FOR BEST EXPERIENCE.

kyosuke koizumi · Post by **kyosuke koizumi** » Fri Oct 05, 2007 7:57 pm

heres a new title page and a

better set up 2

http://viewmorepics.myspace.com/index.c ... mId=582289

JohnnyBoy_Z · Post by **JohnnyBoy_Z** » Fri Oct 05, 2007 10:34 pm

I lol'd......hard.

That shit is priceless.

ReiMehari · Post by **ReiMehari** » Sat Oct 06, 2007 1:24 am

Ugh....I felt dirty after the first few pages.

RockerJeri · Post by **RockerJeri** » Sat Oct 06, 2007 10:29 am

Its not that my sense of humor is high ...

its just that when I watch Southpark or Family Guy ...

I expect some maturity in it ...

This comic just isnt really funny....

kyosuke koizumi · Post by **kyosuke koizumi** » Sat Oct 06, 2007 9:57 pm

Family Guy and South Park are just glorified madison avenue, liberal multicultural propaganda! this is raw unadulterated power that sticks it to the man... MAN!!!!

Post by **Kaboom** » Sat Oct 06, 2007 10:13 pm

kyosuke koizumi wrote:Family Guy and South Park are just glorified madison avenue, liberal multicultural propaganda! this is raw unadulterated power that sticks it to the man... MAN!!!!

lol whut

Payne222 · Post by **Payne222** » Mon Oct 15, 2007 11:06 pm

...
That was...erm...interesting? XD
Though, I may go back and actually read it. First time was a glance. (^_^)
Also, no banners in avatars right? Or did Mike change the rules while I've been gone?

To Neptune - Ohhh another from the Land of Lincoln! (^_^)
May I ask where you live?

Kanzenshuu

Over the top Dragonball AF MANGA!!!

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