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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by rereboy » Sun Mar 27, 2011 3:50 pm

bkev wrote:God, the English is killing me. Someone please offer to correct the grammar for them...
The original english version of this page was worse. So, its already corrected.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Rocketman » Sun Mar 27, 2011 4:22 pm

Vegetto gets to the point.

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If he wasn't worried about disqualification, he'd just use Gogeta's Shirt Destroyer technique.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by TonyTheTiger » Sun Mar 27, 2011 4:47 pm

I really don't understand why they don't have a native English speaker to just glance over the English and clean it up.

And is it just me or does the art on this page look worse than Gogeta Jr.'s usual?

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Scarz » Sun Mar 27, 2011 5:37 pm

TonyTheTiger wrote:And is it just me or does the art on this page look worse than Gogeta Jr.'s usual?
Hmm.... not really. I mean there are some parts that are just a little bit off but they're small and hardly noticeable in my opinion.

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Post by rereboy » Sun Mar 27, 2011 6:23 pm

Plus, its only natural for him to do some pages better than other and some worse than others. He is human after all :lol:

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Post by CatouttaHell » Sun Mar 27, 2011 6:24 pm

Ussj Future Trunks wrote:And I hope U18 Vegeta wins FOR ONCE.
Goku vs. Vegeta Fight 1: Vegeta defeats Goku, who gets saved by Gohan and Kuririn.
Goku vs. Vegeta Fight 2: A long, even fight that ends when Vegeta tricks Goku and knocks him out.
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Post by Zionist » Sun Mar 27, 2011 9:15 pm

CAT FIGHT!!!!!!!!! :lol:
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Post by Jaruka » Sun Mar 27, 2011 9:25 pm

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Ussj Future Trunks » Sun Mar 27, 2011 10:35 pm

Goku vs. Vegeta Fight 1: Vegeta defeats Goku, who gets saved by Gohan and Kuririn.
Goku vs. Vegeta Fight 2: A long, even fight that ends when Vegeta tricks Goku and knocks him out.
I meant a fight that actually settles the rivalry in an exciting even fight of two ssj3s. the first one had Oozaru which is kinda cheating.
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It would also be a waste of Bra's buildup.
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Post by Kingdom Heartless » Sun Mar 27, 2011 10:50 pm

Ussj Future Trunks wrote:I meant a fight that actually settles the rivalry in an exciting even fight of two ssj3s. the first one had Oozaru which is kinda cheating.
Well, the irony is, he would have likely won had he not transformed.
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Post by Ussj Future Trunks » Mon Mar 28, 2011 12:06 am

I know. That's what i want to see. Vegeta winning fair and square.
Simian upstart...none surpass me. No one even comes close! BURN THIS INTO YOUR MIND! I am emperor of the universe. The likes of you are only fit to grovel at my feet. Or better still...to be crushed...LIKE AN INSECT AT THE WHIM OF YOUR MASTER!

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Post by TrunksTrevelyan0064 » Mon Mar 28, 2011 5:04 am

TrunksTrevelyan0064 wrote:Now I predict something like this:

Bra: All right, then, fine. Finish her in one hit ...
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Bra: YOU @#%#*!
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Post by Kingdom Heartless » Mon Mar 28, 2011 10:19 am

I love Vegetto basically being like "well, so much for that idea."
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Post by Godo » Mon Mar 28, 2011 1:50 pm

EDIT: Made a boo-boo.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Scarz » Wed Mar 30, 2011 2:02 pm

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"...She stronger than us too?"
I'm sorry, but I'm calling BULLSHIT!

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by dbgtFO » Wed Mar 30, 2011 2:08 pm

I lol'ed at Zangya's Fugly face.
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Meh, I kinda expected her to be that strong, being the daughter of Vegetto and all.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Zionist » Wed Mar 30, 2011 2:16 pm

oh shit, and the fun begins......and then it shall slowly end when Zangya falls out of the ring from the sheer force of Bra's energy
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by rereboy » Wed Mar 30, 2011 2:23 pm

Scarz wrote:
"...She stronger than us too?"
I'm sorry, but I'm calling BULLSHIT!
She is the daughter of Vegetto and she has already proven when she fought in space agaisnt Buu that her SSJ is pretty much as strong as Mystic Gohan. And her SSJ2 completely surpasses Mystic Gohan (since her blast completely beat Mystic Gohan, who was in perfect shape before her blast, unlike Vegetto).

So... Unless 18 Goku was able to completely surpass Mystic Gohan, why wouldn't she be stronger than 18 Goku and 18 Vegeta?

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by TonyTheTiger » Wed Mar 30, 2011 2:41 pm

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Godo » Wed Mar 30, 2011 2:50 pm

This page looks sloppy for some kind of reason. Check Bra's arms out in the last panel. Urgh.

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