Kanzenshuu

ShaggyBlanco wrote: ↑

Mon Jun 22, 2020 10:14 am

What if they kept the beards?

That would have been ballsy.

Ah, the wall of text was very effective!

Babidi takes advantage of inner divisions already present in one's soul, amplifying them and shattering the soul. It's a divide and conquer tactic from within. Then, he locks certain fragments away, so that the one being possessed no longer is aware of those parts and is 'freed' from influences like...

That's the beginning of the end for her... Finally.

Long, in depth analysis of Dragon Ball on Youtube. To me this seems incredibly pointless, as it was never meant to conform to anyone's logic, rules or any school of writing. But these Youtubers say really smart things, referring to the science of literature, so they become popular and known as Drago...

Whis told Beerus about the surviving Saiyans when he started seeking the Super Saiyan God. Whis searched for them and found Earth with 4 Saiyans on it, saying the most of the remaining ones live there. So it's unlikely that others than Tarble, Paragus and Broly existed back then in Universe 7? Or m...

Its a fact that "primitive tribes" are far more violent than "advanced" peoples on average. The "noble savage" is a myth. The key word is 'warmonger' here. Being able to use violence when needed and owning this doesn't make you a warmonger. Warmongering tribes get their energy from plundering and r...

He was absolutely a virgin, because he has a one-track mind. The guy was obsessed with disposing of Freeza, becoming immortal and surpassing Goku. He had no power fantasy about raping and pillaging; he just wanted no one to be superior to him. A more 'legit' way to dominate so to speak, instead of j...

The fight in this chapter was very good, I could feel how much was at stake. Each character had an essential part to play. It also flowed really well.

One thing to watch out for is the placement of sfx; at times it was too distracting from the art while it should be incorporated in the art instead.

http://www.dragonball-multiverse.com/en/pages/final/1577.png Bra is about to go Majin Vegeta on the stadium. I like the panel of Babidi and Bra, Babidi is being his cowardly self, grinning but still behind his minion. Bra will probably have an inner conflict like Vegeta had while being controlled.

Now it's the heroes' turn to get chopped up I guess.

DBM is now so brutal it's funny

[spoiler] http://www.dragonball-multiverse.com/en/pages/final/1468.png [/spoiler] Saiyan society must be absolutely unstable. Ever since Bardock became king, there are all these other fools 'IMMA BE KING TOO DURRR' for no particular reason. I imagine Saiyans probably had a respect for King Vegeta a...

Saiyan society must be absolutely unstable. Ever since Bardock became king, there are all these other fools 'IMMA BE KING TOO DURRR' for no particular reason.

Not only where Goku and Vegeta much weaker those attacks were much more devastating. One theory that could work is that you can stop bleeding with ki, even more so when you have a lot of it. Still, that would make fights boring, with visible injuries never having any effect, only exhaustion of ki.

The original Funi dub is cheesy and always tries hard to be awesome, but the SSJ3 transformation is one of the instances where it actually works. Because the transformation is awesome, Schemmel's screaming is awesome, so the theme can be awesome as well. It also can be heroic and over the top, becau...

Pfft, what injuries? They just grunted a bit for a few seconds then powered up full again in no time. There haven't been injuries at all on Super, just "oh look at me I'm struggling" During the Zamasu arc, Goku and Vegeta were stabbed multiple times and just walked it off. https://pm1.narvii.com/63...

Poor Videl gets brutalized by a bald guy again. I like how injuries affect the story in DBM, unlike in DBS.

Cell arc Gohan was a bad character because he suddenly refused to kill evil monsters and could only let go when some android he never knew persuaded him. His sense of justice was nowhere to be seen. But it's the plot that lead to this, so it was more a matter of bad writing. Buu saga Gohan is the t...

Only Cell arc Gohan was a bad character. Gohan is an interesting character because he has a conflict between his peaceful nature and his desire of justice, along with his power. He has responsibility that comes with his power but he also really wants to become a scholar. The Great Saiyaman is the so...