Dragonball Timestream (Group Writing Project)

jcogginsa · Post by **jcogginsa** » Thu Jan 07, 2016 1:37 am

This is a group writing Project inspired by the fancomic Dragonball Multiverse

For this project, the set up will be this

The God of Destruction Beerus is holding a tournament to recruit fighters for his upcoming tournament with Champa. To ensure he has the strongest fighters possible, Beerus has coerced the Supreme Kai of Time into letting him draw in fighters from across all the various alternate Timelines.

He's declared the timeline where he fought Goku to be Timeline 1, because it's the one where he lives. Additionally, since Beerus has already decided Goku will be on the team, Goku does not get to join the tournament.

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To begin this Project, we will start by creating the timelines which will feature in this story.

For the record, Timeline 1 is the only universe which contains Beerus and Whis and the only one to possess super Dragonballs.

There will be 16 timelines, each with 4 total fighters for a total of 64 combatants

The list of Timelines will be kept here.

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Outline for First chapter is at the bottom of page 8

First round Brackets

Bracket One

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Bracket Two

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Bracket Three

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Bracket Four

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DBZ_323 · Post by **DBZ_323** » Tue Jan 12, 2016 10:08 pm

I don't quite get what you mean? Timelines, as in like where Future Trunks is from? There is no way there's 16 of those, and those unlike universes don't have different characters. I assume you want something like DBM where each timeline is where something different happened? No offense meant but DBM's already been doing that forever and even DBS is basically doing a similar thing rn, so I don't think this is that original. Either way though, good luck and I might as well toss in a few ideas since I'm here.

Timeline 2: Bardock went SSJ and killed Frieza. Saiyans then basically took over the universe. Goku was killed for being a traitor. Conbatants: Bardock, Prince Vegeta, Raditz, Nappa

Timeline 3: Gohan kept training after Cell Games, became SSJ3 and one-shotted Buu when he was revived. Because of that Goku never came back to life. Combatants: Gohan, Vegeta, Trunks, Goten

Timeline 4: Goku accepted Vegeta's offer during their first fight and became his right-hand man on the condition Earth was spared and Gohan came along too, Vegeta went SSJ and killed Frieza on Namek and now rules the galaxy. Combatants: Vegeta, Goku, Gohan, ??? (Maybe some OC female saiyan)

Timeline 5: King Vegeta spared Broly and used him to destroy Frieza. Saiyans rule the galaxy (like in Timeline 2 but Broly's around as some sort of superweapon and Bardock's insignificant) Goku still gets killed for being a traitor Combatants: Broly, King Vegeta, Prince Vegeta, ??? (Nappa or Raditz maybe?)

Timeline 6: Future Trunks' timeline but instead of making a time machine, Bulma and Gohan go to New Namek and wish all the Z-Fighters back, Goku uses King Kai to tell them to use the Hyperbolic Time Chamber, they power-up and kill the androids. Combatants: Gohan, Trunks, Vegeta, Piccolo

jcogginsa · Post by **jcogginsa** » Tue Jan 12, 2016 10:15 pm

DBZ_323 wrote:I don't quite get what you mean? Timelines, as in like where Future Trunks is from? There is no way there's 16 of those, and those unlike universes don't have different characters. I assume you want something like DBM where each timeline is where something different happened? No offense meant but DBM's already been doing that forever and even DBS is basically doing a similar thing rn, so I don't think this is that original. Either way though, good luck and I might as well toss in a few ideas since I'm here.

Timeline 2: Bardock went SSJ and killed Freeza. Saiyans then basically took over the universe. Goku was killed for being a traitor. Conbatants: Bardock, Prince Vegeta, Raditz, Nappa

Timeline 3: Gohan kept training after Cell Games, became SSJ3 and one-shotted Buu when he was revived. Because of that Goku never came back to life. Combatants: Gohan, Vegeta, Trunks, Goten

Timeline 4: Goku accepted Vegeta's offer during their first and became his right-hand man on the condition Earth was spared and Gohan came along too, Vegeta went SSJ and killed Freeza on Namek and now rules the galaxy. Combatants: Vegeta, Goku, Gohan, ??? (Maybe some OC female saiyan)

Timeline 5: King Vegeta spared Broly and used him to destroy Freeza. Saiyans rule the galaxy (like in Timeline 2 but Broly's around as some sort of superweapon and Bardock's insignificant) Goku still gets killed for being a traitor Combatants: Broly, King Vegeta, Prince Vegeta, ??? (Nappa or Raditz maybe?)

Timeline 6: Future Trunks' timeline but instead of making a time machine, Bulma and Gohan go to New Namek and wish all the Z-Fighters back, Goku uses King Kai to tell them to use the Hyperbolic Time Chamber, they power-up and kill the androids. Combatants: Gohan, Trunks, Vegeta, Piccolo

It is what DBM is doing, I'm just calling them timelines instead of universes to avoid conflict with the canon 12 universes

And you're right that this isn't original. It's not trying to be

As to your ideas, they all seem somewhat Shallow. I think it'd be best to focus on one and expand it.

I already have an idea in mind for a Super Saiyan Bardock Time line, so i think the Best option would be the "Gohan keeps training" Timeline. Let's work on that one

FoolsGil · Post by **FoolsGil** » Wed Jan 13, 2016 3:19 am

Can I get in on this?

Timeline: Whichever
Description: Magic became the rule not the exception in this timeline. Pure Ki users are rarity.
1) Tapion, wielding a sword that will cut through anything and anyone no matter how powerful. (still has to connect) Swordsman.
2) Hoi, tortured soul who houses Hildegarn within him. Summoner.
3) Minotia, Likes to play riddle games. Refusal to play, outright attacking, or losing, causes instant death. Him losing causes his death. Bard.
4) Female member of Tapion's Race. Nothing exotic, just a battlemage.

jcogginsa · Post by **jcogginsa** » Wed Jan 13, 2016 3:42 am

FoolsGil wrote:Can I get in on this?

Timeline: Whichever
Description: Magic became the rule not the exception in this timeline. Pure Ki users are rarity.
1) Tapion, wielding a sword that will cut through anything and anyone no matter how powerful. (still has to connect) Swordsman.
2) Hoi, tortured soul who houses Hildegarn within him. Summoner.
3) Minotia, Likes to play riddle games. Refusal to play, outright attacking, or losing, causes instant death. Him losing causes his death. Bard.
4) Female member of Tapion's Race. Nothing exotic, just a battlemage.

Very Interesting. I'll add it to the OP

jcogginsa · Post by **jcogginsa** » Wed Jan 13, 2016 3:44 am

However, how about instead of a female member of Tapion's race it's Uranai Baba or A namekian?

FoolsGil · Post by **FoolsGil** » Wed Jan 13, 2016 3:46 am

jcogginsa wrote:However, how about instead of a female member of Tapion's race it's Uranai Baba or A namekian?

A young, lithe, Uranai Baba sure.

jcogginsa · Post by **jcogginsa** » Wed Jan 13, 2016 4:03 am

FoolsGil wrote:
jcogginsa wrote:However, how about instead of a female member of Tapion's race it's Uranai Baba or A namekian?
A young, lithe, Uranai Baba sure.

Cool.

How's about these as Timeline Concepts

Timeline: 3
Description: faced with the power of the saiyan Broly, Goku called for the aid of an unlikely ally: The android Cell. After a fierce battle Broly defeated Cell thanks to a stroke of good fortune, but was subsequently knocked out by the saiyan Son Gohan, who had unlocked a new level of power by witnessing Broly Torture his father Son Goku. Both Broly and Cell survive that day and came away from it with new outlooks on life. With neither of them having anyone in the universe to turn to, they banded together and tried to find a new life in the cosmos. They were recruited by a mercenary known as Ledgic. Eventually, they are hired to hunt down the Wizard Babidi, who is trying to awaken the best Majin Buu. They succeed in their efforts and, freed of Babidi's control, are handsomely reworded by Dabura
Combatants: Boly, Cell, Ledgic Dabura,

Timeline: 4
Description: After leading his band in a futile revolt against Frieza, Bardock witnesses them die one by one. When his closest Friend Toma is killed, Bardock ascends to become a Super Saiyan. After a grueling struggle he defeats Frieza, but the experience inexplicably alters his world view, causing him to reject the Saiyan culture. Soon afterwords the enigmatic Cooler seeks him out, and recruits him for use in his machinations to usurp the throne from his father King Cold
Combatants: Bardock, Celipa, Cooler, Salza

ShadowBardock89 · Post by **ShadowBardock89** » Wed Jan 13, 2016 9:55 am

Timeline: Neo-Time Breakers led by an adult Fuu, the son of Towa and Mira. He learned from the mistakes of his parents and succeeded in releasing the seal off the Demon Realm by tricking Beerus into destroying the seal. He now rules the Demon Realm after usurping his cousin, Beelzebub, the son of Dabura. His master plot included improvements on his parents': instead of Bardock, he used Raditz and Nappa, who willingly joined him after being taken/revived from the point of their deaths instead of brainwashing them and then trained them to keep Goku & Vegeta in check. He borrowed an idea from Babidi and recruited the Kings of Destruction into his ranks and roles for each of them, such as Tullece and his men supplying the Time Breaker Army with the Shinseijuu Fruit, Lord Slug learning to create Dragon Balls so they have their own set, Garlic Jr. being trained to take on Beerus since Garlic Jr. can't die, etc.
Combatants: whoever Fuu chooses, honestly. It could be his top lieutenants, Raditz and Nappa, or some of the Kings of Destruction, like Garlic Jr., Janemba, Hatchiyack, Bojack, and/or Android 13.
Or Fuu could decide that this whole thing is folly and unleash Broly and Hirudegarn, his secret weapons.

jcogginsa · Post by **jcogginsa** » Wed Jan 13, 2016 12:26 pm

ShadowBardock89 wrote:Timeline: Neo-Time Breakers led by an adult Fuu, the son of Towa and Mira. He learned from the mistakes of his parents and succeeded in releasing the seal off the Demon Realm by tricking Beerus into destroying the seal. He now rules the Demon Realm after usurping his cousin, Beelzebub, the son of Dabura. His master plot included improvements on his parents': instead of Bardock, he used Raditz and Nappa, who willingly joined him after being taken/revived from the point of their deaths instead of brainwashing them and then trained them to keep Goku & Vegeta in check. He borrowed an idea from Babidi and recruited the Kings of Destruction into his ranks and roles for each of them, such as Tullece and his men supplying the Time Breaker Army with the Shinseijuu Fruit, Lord Slug learning to create Dragon Balls so they have their own set, Garlic Jr. being trained to take on Beerus since Garlic Jr. can't die, etc.
Combatants: whoever Fuu chooses, honestly. It could be his top lieutenants, Raditz and Nappa, or some of the Kings of Destruction, like Garlic Jr., Janemba, Hatchiyack, Bojack, and/or Android 13.
Or Fuu could decide that this whole thing is folly and unleash Broly and Hirudegarn, his secret weapons.

Why would they be invited to a tournement?

FoolsGil · Post by **FoolsGil** » Wed Jan 13, 2016 12:34 pm

jcogginsa wrote:
ShadowBardock89 wrote:Timeline: Neo-Time Breakers led by an adult Fuu, the son of Towa and Mira. He learned from the mistakes of his parents and succeeded in releasing the seal off the Demon Realm by tricking Beerus into destroying the seal. He now rules the Demon Realm after usurping his cousin, Beelzebub, the son of Dabura. His master plot included improvements on his parents': instead of Bardock, he used Raditz and Nappa, who willingly joined him after being taken/revived from the point of their deaths instead of brainwashing them and then trained them to keep Goku & Vegeta in check. He borrowed an idea from Babidi and recruited the Kings of Destruction into his ranks and roles for each of them, such as Tullece and his men supplying the Time Breaker Army with the Shinseijuu Fruit, Lord Slug learning to create Dragon Balls so they have their own set, Garlic Jr. being trained to take on Beerus since Garlic Jr. can't die, etc.
Combatants: whoever Fuu chooses, honestly. It could be his top lieutenants, Raditz and Nappa, or some of the Kings of Destruction, like Garlic Jr., Janemba, Hatchiyack, Bojack, and/or Android 13.
Or Fuu could decide that this whole thing is folly and unleash Broly and Hirudegarn, his secret weapons.
Why would they be invited to a tournement?

Beers wouldn't care about good or evil, he only wants a strong fighters for the remaining 4 slot right? It sounds like members of Fuu's army would fit that bill.

jcogginsa · Post by **jcogginsa** » Wed Jan 13, 2016 12:48 pm

FoolsGil wrote:
jcogginsa wrote:
ShadowBardock89 wrote:Timeline: Neo-Time Breakers led by an adult Fuu, the son of Towa and Mira. He learned from the mistakes of his parents and succeeded in releasing the seal off the Demon Realm by tricking Beerus into destroying the seal. He now rules the Demon Realm after usurping his cousin, Beelzebub, the son of Dabura. His master plot included improvements on his parents': instead of Bardock, he used Raditz and Nappa, who willingly joined him after being taken/revived from the point of their deaths instead of brainwashing them and then trained them to keep Goku & Vegeta in check. He borrowed an idea from Babidi and recruited the Kings of Destruction into his ranks and roles for each of them, such as Tullece and his men supplying the Time Breaker Army with the Shinseijuu Fruit, Lord Slug learning to create Dragon Balls so they have their own set, Garlic Jr. being trained to take on Beerus since Garlic Jr. can't die, etc.
Combatants: whoever Fuu chooses, honestly. It could be his top lieutenants, Raditz and Nappa, or some of the Kings of Destruction, like Garlic Jr., Janemba, Hatchiyack, Bojack, and/or Android 13.
Or Fuu could decide that this whole thing is folly and unleash Broly and Hirudegarn, his secret weapons.
Why would they be invited to a tournement?
Beers wouldn't care about good or evil, he only wants a strong fighters for the remaining 4 slot right? It sounds like members of Fuu's army would fit that bill.

Well, What is the Time Breakers goal? Because remember, the Supreme Kai of Time is still around. She's the one gathering the contestants for him

FoolsGil · Post by **FoolsGil** » Wed Jan 13, 2016 1:08 pm

jcogginsa wrote: Well, What is the Time Breakers goal? Because remember, the Supreme Kai of Time is still around. She's the one gathering the contestants for him

Well the Time Breaker's goals are to control Time and Supreme Kai of TIme is supposed to stop that. But Beers could go up to the Supreme Kai of Time and to Fuu and force a temporary truce because he's the God of Destruction and would kill them all just for looking at him funny. So both sides agree to truce, knowing that after he gets what he wants, he'll stay out of their way and the war for time can recommence.

jcogginsa · Post by **jcogginsa** » Wed Jan 13, 2016 1:24 pm

FoolsGil wrote:
jcogginsa wrote: Well, What is the Time Breakers goal? Because remember, the Supreme Kai of Time is still around. She's the one gathering the contestants for him
Well the Time Breaker's goals are to control Time and Supreme Kai of TIme is supposed to stop that. But Beers could go up to the Supreme Kai of Time and to Fuu and force a temporary truce because he's the God of Destruction and would kill them all just for looking at him funny. So both sides agree to truce, knowing that after he gets what he wants, he'll stay out of their way and the war for time can recommence.

How about we have Fuu's Time Breakers not be part of the tournement but instead be an outside force that seeks to subvert it for their own benefit

FoolsGil · Post by **FoolsGil** » Wed Jan 13, 2016 2:07 pm

jcogginsa wrote:
FoolsGil wrote:
jcogginsa wrote: Well, What is the Time Breakers goal? Because remember, the Supreme Kai of Time is still around. She's the one gathering the contestants for him
Well the Time Breaker's goals are to control Time and Supreme Kai of TIme is supposed to stop that. But Beers could go up to the Supreme Kai of Time and to Fuu and force a temporary truce because he's the God of Destruction and would kill them all just for looking at him funny. So both sides agree to truce, knowing that after he gets what he wants, he'll stay out of their way and the war for time can recommence.
How about we have Fuu's Time Breakers not be part of the tournement but instead be an outside force that seeks to subvert it for their own benefit

I'd ask ShadowBroker89 about that, I was just arguing for them to be in instead of out.

jcogginsa · Post by **jcogginsa** » Wed Jan 13, 2016 2:18 pm

Okay, i'll wait for Shadow to get back before making a final decision

What did you think of my Concepts for Universe 3 and 4?

FoolsGil · Post by **FoolsGil** » Wed Jan 13, 2016 3:05 pm

jcogginsa wrote:Okay, i'll wait for Shadow to get back before making a final decision

What did you think of my Concepts for Universe 3 and 4?

Both are good, I really like U4.

jcogginsa · Post by **jcogginsa** » Wed Jan 13, 2016 3:19 pm

FoolsGil wrote:
jcogginsa wrote:Okay, i'll wait for Shadow to get back before making a final decision

What did you think of my Concepts for Universe 3 and 4?
Both are good, I really like U4.

Thanks. Gonna go ahead and edit them into the OP

Now how about these two?

Timeline 5
Description: The Guardian of Earth adopted the son of his old rival Garlic after he sealed Garlic Away. He raised Garlic Junior into a force for good. Then years later he adopted a second son, the lost Saiyan child Kakarot. Then when the demon King Piccolo arrived Garlic and Kakarot defeated him. Piccolo left behind a son, and Kami again raised him into a force for good. Later, the Saiyans arrived on the arrived on the planet earth, and Kami's sons defeated them. However, at the end of the battle a single Saibaman survived. Kami's sons showed it mercy, and took it back to their father. As before Kami adopted the Saibaman and began training it. Thus, Kami's sons became his Elite 4, The four greatest warriors on earth
Combatants: Garlic Junior, Piccolo Jr., Kakarot, and Sai (The Saibaman)

Timeline 6
Description: Rather than creating a new android to be his lab assistent, Doctor Gero activated 16 to fill that role. 16's influence on Gero softened the mad doctor, and eventually Gero decided to turn his androids into a force for good rather than Evil.
Combatants: Androids 16, 17, and 18, plus Dr. Gero

ShadowBardock89 · Post by **ShadowBardock89** » Wed Jan 13, 2016 4:24 pm

jcogginsa wrote:
FoolsGil wrote:
jcogginsa wrote: Why would they be invited to a tournement?
Beers wouldn't care about good or evil, he only wants a strong fighters for the remaining 4 slot right? It sounds like members of Fuu's army would fit that bill.
Well, What is the Time Breakers goal? Because remember, the Supreme Kai of Time is still around. She's the one gathering the contestants for him

The Time Breakers' goal? Isn't it obvious? With all of these strong fighters in one place, Fuu could eliminate any potential threat to his rule as well as make the other timelines vulnerable for conquest. But, of course he'll play along like the Sound-Sand alliance during the Chuunin Exams in Naruto until he sees the ripe opportunity to unleash Hell.

jcogginsa · Post by **jcogginsa** » Wed Jan 13, 2016 4:27 pm

ShadowBardock89 wrote:
The Time Breakers' goal? Isn't it obvious? With all of these strong fighters in one place, Fuu could eliminate any potential threat to his rule as well as make the other timelines vulnerable for conquest. But, of course he'll play along like the Sound-Sand alliance during the Chuunin Exams in Naruto until he sees the ripe opportunity to unleash Hell.

No, what was his goal prior to learning about the tournament?

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