Dragonball Timestream (Group Writing Project)

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Re: Dragonball Timestream (Group Writing Project)

Post by FoolsGil » Wed Jan 13, 2016 11:04 pm

jcogginsa wrote:
FoolsGil wrote: Yeah that's fine
Cool. What if Bebi's Tech included a miniaturized version of the Hatchiyak computer?
I like that, good thinking.

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Re: Dragonball Timestream (Group Writing Project)

Post by jcogginsa » Wed Jan 13, 2016 11:08 pm

FoolsGil wrote:
jcogginsa wrote:
FoolsGil wrote: Yeah that's fine
Cool. What if Bebi's Tech included a miniaturized version of the Hatchiyak computer?
I like that, good thinking.
Cool, gives me an idea for a match that pits Cold against Bebi.
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jcogginsa wrote:
ShadowBardock89 wrote:How about a timeline where a mutant strain of Saibamen completely overtook the universe, planet by planet, and developed enough sentient intelligence to accept Beerus' offer?
Sounds very interesting, though we'd need to come up with 4 Saibaman OCs
The infamous Red Saibaman (the alternate costume for the Saibamen in a lot of games) could be the Legendary Super Saibaman that Captain Ginyu feared in Budokai 3 and the source of the mutant batch,
The cunning Orange Saibaman that specializes in ambush tactics (I picture it looking very devious than a normal Saibaman, if that is even possible), the Yellow Saibaman that specializes in long range attacks (make its head and limbs elongated), and the Saiba Brute as seen in DBZ Sagas:
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Sounds good. We just need names for them

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Re: Dragonball Timestream (Group Writing Project)

Post by ShadowBardock89 » Wed Jan 13, 2016 11:37 pm

jcogginsa wrote: Sounds good. We just need names for them
Red Saibaman = Tsukemono
Orange Saibaman = Uekuma
Yellow Saibaman = Kakuren
Saiba Brute = Nawamuto
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Re: Dragonball Timestream (Group Writing Project)

Post by Xeztin » Wed Jan 13, 2016 11:44 pm

I don't really want to tackle writing as of now but would a cell junior surviving in one of timelines be a decent idea and growing up? Different forms and all that, and if anyone of you want to use this idea feel free to though I am sure it's been told before.

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Post by jcogginsa » Wed Jan 13, 2016 11:46 pm

ShadowBardock89 wrote:
jcogginsa wrote: Sounds good. We just need names for them
Red Saibaman = Tsukemono
Orange Saibaman = Uekuma
Yellow Saibaman = Kakuren
Saiba Brute = Nawamuto
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What's the Naming scheme here anyway?
Xeztin wrote:I don't really want to tackle writing as of now but would a cell junior surviving in one of timelines be a decent idea and growing up? Different forms and all that, and if anyone of you want to use this idea feel free to though I am sure it's been told before.
I think it could work, we just need to put it in the proper place

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Post by ShadowBardock89 » Thu Jan 14, 2016 12:03 am

jcogginsa wrote:
ShadowBardock89 wrote:
jcogginsa wrote: Sounds good. We just need names for them
Red Saibaman = Tsukemono
Orange Saibaman = Uekuma
Yellow Saibaman = Kakuren
Saiba Brute = Nawamuto
OP is now edited.

What's the Naming scheme here anyway?
Kakuren is an amalgamation for the Japanese words for "hidden danger"
Nawamuto is "Sapling Warrior"
I was looking for the Japanese word for red cabbage and I saw Tsukemono. Meh, I'll take it.
Uekuma is amalgamation Ue akuma which means "planted fiend."
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Post by jcogginsa » Thu Jan 14, 2016 12:09 am

Sounds Cool.

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For the Cell Junior Idea, i was thinking of having him replace the Saibaman in my "Kami's Elite 4" Idea.

What do you think? Shadow? Xeztin?

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Post by Xeztin » Thu Jan 14, 2016 12:11 am

Speaking of saibamen/cabbage creatures, I wonder what a broccoli saibmenisk creature would look like? :think:
and yes that is okay with me :D

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Post by ShadowBardock89 » Thu Jan 14, 2016 12:12 am

jcogginsa wrote:Sounds Cool.

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For the Cell Junior Idea, i was thinking of having him replace the Saibaman in my "Kami's Elite 4" Idea.

What do you think? Shadow? Xeztin?
Not a bad idea. It kind of reminds of the axed Cell Jr. story in Budokai 3 where a Cell Jr. defeated Cell and become free to do what ever he wished.
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Re: Dragonball Timestream (Group Writing Project)

Post by Xeztin » Thu Jan 14, 2016 12:13 am

Found an image :lol: "Broccoloids" from Powerpuff Girls.
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Also just out of curiosity, will Xenoverse or any of the characters/villains be in any of the timelines? or DB Online and its races/story?

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Post by jcogginsa » Thu Jan 14, 2016 12:26 am

OP updated

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what does everyone think of this idea

Master Roshi never figures out how to perform the Mafuba, and thus tries to defeat King Piccolo on his own. He fails, but he's still alive when Piccolo makes his wish. Roshi manages to alter the wish to include himself. Now in the prime of his Youth, Roshi manages to defeat Piccolo, but in doing so Kills Kami. Goku, who'd been killed earlier by Piccolo, is unable to be revived. Roshi, Tien, Yamcha, and Chiaotzu dedicate themselves to defending the earth on their own.

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Post by ShadowBardock89 » Thu Jan 14, 2016 12:28 am

I was thinking of something about my Neo-Time Breakers. Let's scale Fuu back abit in that he has not achieved his main goal of releasing the Demon Realm (which was the original goal of the Time Breakers in Dragon Ball Online). How about Fuu is using this tournament to not only gauge the strength of other fighters from timelines, but also to test his top henchmen to see if they are ready for the war to come?
No one knows who really is, yet, as he has been working in the shadows and making moves to not catch the ire of the Supreme Kai of Time (which his parents failed at). So, as far as the Supreme Kai of Time knows at the moment, Fuu is filling the vacuum left by the collapse of Freeza's Empire in the future.
http://www.kanzenshuu.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=11&t=40715&start=20#p1439892
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Post by jcogginsa » Thu Jan 14, 2016 12:33 am

ShadowBardock89 wrote:I was thinking of something about my Neo-Time Breakers. Let's scale Fuu back abit in that he has not achieved his main goal of releasing the Demon Realm (which was the original goal of the Time Breakers in Dragon Ball Online). How about Fuu is using this tournament to not only gauge the strength of other fighters from timelines, but also to test his top henchmen to see if they are ready for the war to come?
No one knows who really is, yet, as he has been working in the shadows and making moves to not catch the ire of the Supreme Kai of Time (which his parents failed at). So, as far as the Supreme Kai of Time knows at the moment, Fuu is filling the vacuum left by the collapse of Freeza's Empire in the future.
Okay, that works. Who would his top men be?

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Post by ShadowBardock89 » Thu Jan 14, 2016 12:45 am

jcogginsa wrote:
ShadowBardock89 wrote:I was thinking of something about my Neo-Time Breakers. Let's scale Fuu back abit in that he has not achieved his main goal of releasing the Demon Realm (which was the original goal of the Time Breakers in Dragon Ball Online). How about Fuu is using this tournament to not only gauge the strength of other fighters from timelines, but also to test his top henchmen to see if they are ready for the war to come?
No one knows who really is, yet, as he has been working in the shadows and making moves to not catch the ire of the Supreme Kai of Time (which his parents failed at). So, as far as the Supreme Kai of Time knows at the moment, Fuu is filling the vacuum left by the collapse of Freeza's Empire in the future.
Okay, that works. Who would his top men be?
Fuu does not want to give away his best hand, so he'll throw in Janemba, Super Android 13, Hatchiyack, and Garlic Jr. to test the fruits of their training as they will be vanguard of his assault forces. Fuu also has sent Dr. Raichi to monitor them personally at the tournament to give an accurate assessment of their progress.
http://www.kanzenshuu.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=11&t=40715&start=20#p1439892
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Re: Dragonball Timestream (Group Writing Project)

Post by ShadowBardock89 » Thu Jan 14, 2016 12:47 am

jcogginsa wrote:OP updated

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what does everyone think of this idea

Master Roshi never figures out how to perform the Mafuba, and thus tries to defeat King Piccolo on his own. He fails, but he's still alive when Piccolo makes his wish. Roshi manages to alter the wish to include himself. Now in the prime of his Youth, Roshi manages to defeat Piccolo, but in doing so Kills Kami. Goku, who'd been killed earlier by Piccolo, is unable to be revived. Roshi, Tenshinhan, Yamcha, and Chiaotzu dedicate themselves to defending the earth on their own.
Go for it!
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Re: Dragonball Timestream (Group Writing Project)

Post by jcogginsa » Thu Jan 14, 2016 12:48 am

ShadowBardock89 wrote:
jcogginsa wrote:
ShadowBardock89 wrote:I was thinking of something about my Neo-Time Breakers. Let's scale Fuu back abit in that he has not achieved his main goal of releasing the Demon Realm (which was the original goal of the Time Breakers in Dragon Ball Online). How about Fuu is using this tournament to not only gauge the strength of other fighters from timelines, but also to test his top henchmen to see if they are ready for the war to come?
No one knows who really is, yet, as he has been working in the shadows and making moves to not catch the ire of the Supreme Kai of Time (which his parents failed at). So, as far as the Supreme Kai of Time knows at the moment, Fuu is filling the vacuum left by the collapse of Freeza's Empire in the future.
Okay, that works. Who would his top men be?
Fuu does not want to give away his best hand, so he'll throw in Janemba, Super Android 13, Hatchiyack, and Garlic Jr. to test the fruits of their training as they will be vanguard of his assault forces. Fuu also has sent Dr. Raichi to monitor them personally at the tournament to give an accurate assessment of their progress.
How would he get Janemba under his control?

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Post by ShadowBardock89 » Thu Jan 14, 2016 1:08 am

jcogginsa wrote: How would he get Janemba under his control?
It was not easy. Unlike Broly or Hirudegarn, who have Paragus and Hoi to keep them contained, Janemba was untamed and ax-crazed. Fuu took it upon himself to "teach civility" to his demonic kin after transporting Janemba from his own time into Fuu's future version of the hyperbolic time chamber. It took a while and to say it was not easy is an understatement as Fuu nearly died several times during this time, but eventually he managed to get Janemba to the equivalent Super Buu's intelligence (without Piccolo's absorption).
http://www.kanzenshuu.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=11&t=40715&start=20#p1439892
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Re: Dragonball Timestream (Group Writing Project)

Post by jcogginsa » Thu Jan 14, 2016 1:21 am

ShadowBardock89 wrote:
jcogginsa wrote: How would he get Janemba under his control?
It was not easy. Unlike Broly or Hirudegarn, who have Paragus and Hoi to keep them contained, Janemba was untamed and ax-crazed. Fuu took it upon himself to "teach civility" to his demonic kin after transporting Janemba from his own time into Fuu's future version of the hyperbolic time chamber. It took a while and to say it was not easy is an understatement as Fuu nearly died several times during this time, but eventually he managed to get Janemba to the equivalent Super Buu's intelligence (without Piccolo's absorption).
I think Fuu would hold back Janemba at first. His reality warping abilities are pretty potent

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Post by ShadowBardock89 » Thu Jan 14, 2016 1:26 am

jcogginsa wrote:
ShadowBardock89 wrote:
jcogginsa wrote: How would he get Janemba under his control?
It was not easy. Unlike Broly or Hirudegarn, who have Paragus and Hoi to keep them contained, Janemba was untamed and ax-crazed. Fuu took it upon himself to "teach civility" to his demonic kin after transporting Janemba from his own time into Fuu's future version of the hyperbolic time chamber. It took a while and to say it was not easy is an understatement as Fuu nearly died several times during this time, but eventually he managed to get Janemba to the equivalent Super Buu's intelligence (without Piccolo's absorption).
I think Fuu would hold back Janemba at first. His reality warping abilities are pretty potent
Good point. I had completely forgot about Bojack, so replace Janemba with him instead.
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Re: Dragonball Timestream (Group Writing Project)

Post by jcogginsa » Thu Jan 14, 2016 2:06 am

OP has been edited

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