Dragonball Timestream (Group Writing Project)

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Re: Dragonball Timestream (Group Writing Project)

Post by FoolsGil » Sat Mar 05, 2016 2:54 pm

My only query is about Slug.

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Post by jcogginsa » Sat Mar 05, 2016 3:21 pm

Basically, They needed the dragonballs to fix a major problem, and Slug took the youth wish after doing so. The creator killed himself before a third wish was made

And With Slug in charge, he ordered the planet evacuated so the Namekians survived rather than dying out.

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Post by FoolsGil » Sat Mar 05, 2016 3:38 pm

jcogginsa wrote:Basically, They needed the dragonballs to fix a major problem, and Slug took the youth wish after doing so. The creator killed himself before a third wish was made

And With Slug in charge, he ordered the planet evacuated so the Namekians survived rather than dying out.
And why would the Namekians follow him after he made the youth wish? If the creator killed himself to stop his third wish, it's obvious he can't be trusted. And the Namekians aren't a warrior race. Why would they listen to Slug and start conquering other planets?

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Post by jcogginsa » Sat Mar 05, 2016 3:42 pm

FoolsGil wrote:
jcogginsa wrote:Basically, They needed the dragonballs to fix a major problem, and Slug took the youth wish after doing so. The creator killed himself before a third wish was made
And With Slug in charge, he ordered the planet evacuated so the Namekians survived rather than dying out.
And why would the Namekians follow him after he made the youth wish? If the creator killed himself to stop his third wish, it's obvious he can't be trusted. And the Namekians aren't a warrior race. Why would they listen to Slug and start conquering other planets?[/quote]
Not everyone agreed with the creator's opinion on Slug. Slug did have a lot of popularity among the Namekian youth. Slug was able to convince the people that he needed youth to lead them effectively.

Keep in mind, the Namekian people we see in canon have been taught by a pacifistic leader. Slug was ruling over a completely different kind of Namekian population. That population had larger warrior clans. That, and Slug employed a lot of propaganda

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Re: Dragonball Timestream (Group Writing Project)

Post by FoolsGil » Sat Mar 05, 2016 3:58 pm

Sounds needlessly complicated.

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Post by jcogginsa » Sat Mar 05, 2016 4:00 pm

It's backstory. The important things to remember is that Slug rules the Namekians and they have an empire

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Post by FoolsGil » Sat Mar 05, 2016 4:03 pm

jcogginsa wrote:It's backstory. The important things to remember is that Slug rules the Namekians and they have an empire
Okay then

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Post by jcogginsa » Sat Mar 05, 2016 4:11 pm

Do you have any suggestions for events in Timeline 13?

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Post by FoolsGil » Sat Mar 05, 2016 6:11 pm

jcogginsa wrote:Do you have any suggestions for events in Timeline 13?
Just a couple.

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Post by jcogginsa » Sat Mar 05, 2016 6:33 pm

Some notes

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Post by FoolsGil » Sat Mar 05, 2016 7:03 pm

Well you wrote Rildo would find Cooler's remains. and you didn't mention Bebi before now so I assumed he didn't enthrall Rildo. There's too many factors to take account of, besides trying to get Babidi and his ambitions through so Slug can be where he needs to be.

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Post by jcogginsa » Sat Mar 05, 2016 7:07 pm

FoolsGil wrote:Well you wrote Rildo would find Cooler's remains. and you didn't mention Bebi before now so I assumed he didn't enthrall Rildo. There's too many factors to take account of, besides trying to get Babidi and his ambitions through so Slug can be where he needs to be.
The babidi stuff is very good.

Sorry for not mentioning it. Rildo's faction searches out Cooler's remains while their still intact, in order to gain control of the PTO's remaining forces

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Post by FoolsGil » Sat Mar 05, 2016 7:44 pm

jcogginsa wrote:
FoolsGil wrote:Well you wrote Rildo would find Cooler's remains. and you didn't mention Bebi before now so I assumed he didn't enthrall Rildo. There's too many factors to take account of, besides trying to get Babidi and his ambitions through so Slug can be where he needs to be.
The babidi stuff is very good.

Sorry for not mentioning it. Rildo's faction searches out Cooler's remains while their still intact, in order to gain control of the PTO's remaining forces
Thanks. What about after Turles defeats Freeza, he does go to the Eastern Galaxy. After wiping out a number of planets there, Cooler finds him, and is later defeated. Whether or not Turles sacks M2, Rildo under Bebi's orders go to the location and finds Cooler. Bojack and his crew escape their star and kills Kold. This could still happen in 735.

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Post by jcogginsa » Sat Mar 05, 2016 7:48 pm

FoolsGil wrote:
jcogginsa wrote:
FoolsGil wrote:Well you wrote Rildo would find Cooler's remains. and you didn't mention Bebi before now so I assumed he didn't enthrall Rildo. There's too many factors to take account of, besides trying to get Babidi and his ambitions through so Slug can be where he needs to be.
The babidi stuff is very good.

Sorry for not mentioning it. Rildo's faction searches out Cooler's remains while their still intact, in order to gain control of the PTO's remaining forces
Thanks. What about after Turles defeats Freeza, he does go to the Eastern Galaxy. After wiping out a number of planets there, Cooler finds him, and is later defeated. Whether or not Turles sacks M2, Rildo under Bebi's orders go to the location and finds Cooler. Bojack and his crew escape their star and kills Kold. This could still happen in 735.
Sounds good to me

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Post by ShadowBardock89 » Sat Mar 05, 2016 9:15 pm

I'm liking these ideas. Keep it up!
http://www.kanzenshuu.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=11&t=40715&start=20#p1439892
http://dba.bn-ent.net/character/barduck.html
https://i.imgur.com/86hOk5i.gif

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Post by jcogginsa » Sat Mar 05, 2016 9:20 pm

thanks bardock

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Post by jcogginsa » Mon Mar 07, 2016 12:58 pm

So, my Beta is taking a while to get back to me. Sorry about that.

Mean time, I have the outline for the next chapter finished, if anyone wants to go ahead and start on the next chapter.

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Post by FoolsGil » Mon Mar 07, 2016 2:53 pm

Sure. Let's see what's up

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Re: Dragonball Timestream (Group Writing Project)

Post by FoolsGil » Mon Mar 07, 2016 3:06 pm

Could we give Sixteen a name? He is based on Gero's son apparently.

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