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Re: "This looks/feels like something out of AF/fanfiction"

Post by TheMikado » Tue Apr 19, 2016 2:41 pm

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Zephyr wrote:There doesn't seem to be any consistent rhyme of reason motivating the label, and I need help seeing if there's anything beyond "I don't like this and I'm too lazy to bother articulating why!".
I don't mind if Toriyama ends up using an idea that has already appeared in fanfiction. It's been 20 years since the manga ended so I'm sure fans have already exhausted almost every possible idea out there. I consider it "AF/fanfiction" when it's been used many times in fanfiction and criticized every single time as being lazy. This is what I asked in a different thread about Golden Freeza when it was it praised for being "characteristic Toriyama":
Just curious but what makes Golden Freeza differ from the millions of other AF palette swaps we've seen throughout the years? That's what bothered me most about this form. When Golden Freeza was revealed, I've heard fans saying "wow that's so Toriyama! He really goes against fan expectations!". I mean did anyone ever congratulate the artists of all those palette swaps in the past? They were usually referred to as lazy and unimaginative. I don't get how Toriyama gets praised for something that's so common in fanfiction and has never once been praised before. I understand if you like the form since that's your opinion but I'm just curious why it the reaction to it was so different than every other time something like that has been done.
Based on your last quote this guy should be the heir to ATs narrative in terms of Saiyan forms.
I believe this is even several years older than BoG and has both blue hair SSJ and Kaioken forms.

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Re: "This looks/feels like something out of AF/fanfiction"

Post by ekrolo2 » Tue Apr 19, 2016 2:48 pm

It's a quick & easy way to dismiss something basically. One that completely ignores the fact there are quite a few fan created stories that I'll honestly say murder the official material in terms of quality. Who Wants To Be a Superhero is infinitely funnier than anything Toriyama has done or ever will do imo.
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Post by Skar » Tue Apr 19, 2016 7:02 pm

Zephyr wrote:Tertiary concern here. What makes for a palette swap? Is a palette swap simply just....a palette swap, where only the colors are different, and Literally (capital L, actual literal dictionary definition literally, not hyperbolic literally) nothing else? If there are small changes here and there to the line work (Golden Freeza's case) or the aura (Super Saiyan Blue's case), is it still a palette swap, or is it a minimalist design? Do people understand that there's a difference when they're using that as a point against the designs? If they do, are they intentionally using incorrect terminology to take a dig? I'm not saying that people can't dislike minimalist designs, but if you dislike that its minimalist, say that you dislike that it's minimalist. Don't complain about a quality that isn't actually true to the design (although in Blue's case, without an aura, that would indeed be a palette swap).
Usually "palette swap" refers to either a literal palette swap as in just taking an old form and changing the color or a new form with slight alterations where the main distinction is the color change. That's probably why Toriyama decided to name the new forms "SSJ BLUE" and "GOLDEN Freeza" because he's acknowledging that what stands out about them the most is their new color. Whether we're going to call them a palette swap or minimalist, the color change is mainly what sets them apart from previous transformations in the series.

My first encounter with a palette swap was in GT when Nova Shenron transformed into his golden form. I really liked Nova Shenron but I thought that form was pretty stupid. I don't know how other fans reacted to it but I've never seen anyone say "Wow! Toei has really captured Toriyama's artistic genius with this one! We all expected something more but all he did was change his color! This is so like Toriyama to go against our expectations!" In the many years since GT, I have yet to see anyone offer the same praise to any AF transformation until now. I'm just saying that I try to keep a consistent reaction to something whether it was made by Toriyama or by a fan. If I think it's bad in a fanfic then I'm going to feel the same way about it if Toriyama decided to do the same thing. Of course if a fan did enjoy many AF transformations they've encountered in the past then I could understand them liking SSJ Blue and Golden Freeza. The only time I would disagree with them is if they claimed Toriyama is treading new grounds with these forms.
And what makes for something lazy and unimaginative? Does context not matter at all? Does the fact that Toriyama is only just now able to mess around with color for the first time not make any sort of difference in context behind the creation of such forms?
Couldn't the same be said about Toei? They were confined to what Toriyama wrote in the manga and GT was their first opportunity to mess with colors. They did that with Nova Shenron. What was the meaning behind that? I guess he changed his color to show the increase in power level and heat because a yellow star is hotter than a red star. Still I don't think that's ever been given as a reason to dismiss the fact that it's literally just changing his color.

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Re: "This looks/feels like something out of AF/fanfiction"

Post by dbzfan7 » Tue Apr 19, 2016 7:50 pm

Skar wrote:Couldn't the same be said about Toei? They were confined to what Toriyama wrote in the manga and GT was their first opportunity to mess with colors. They did that with Nova Shenron. What was the meaning behind that? I guess he changed his color to show the increase in power level and heat because a yellow star is hotter than a red star. Still I don't think that's ever been given as a reason to dismiss the fact that it's literally just changing his color.
Man I forgot about Nuova Shenron. I'm bringing that up from now on when certain SSJB topics come up. His brother was also a lame pallet swap of him. I know they were going for the whole ice & fire duality thing, but it's still lame for them to look exactly the same. Guess they got the twins excuse maybe.
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Re: "This looks/feels like something out of AF/fanfiction"

Post by FoolsGil » Tue Apr 19, 2016 8:55 pm

No offense, but anyone who uses "X is something out of a fanfiction" as an insult are uninspired poor souls lacking imagination and fun. :wink:

Fanfic writers take what's in a set universe already and just put the pieces together in a different way. Bulma Using science to clone replicate the effects of the senzu beans, or taking the Saiyan armors and scouter tech to outfit the Earth military and police, King Kold having a 3rd and 4th Form, Cell being able to create Dragonballs because of his Namekian Cells, Android 16 being taken out with an EMP of all things, and of course, improving the Kaioken. These are creative and ingenious uses of the rules already set by Toriyama but for his story he didn't go in the set direction. Anyone who wants to have a little fun and throw a wrench in for fantastic new results should be proud of what they do, and see "X is something out of a fanfiction" as a compliment, because it is.

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Re: "This looks/feels like something out of AF/fanfiction"

Post by Zephyr » Wed Apr 20, 2016 12:06 am

Skar wrote:Couldn't the same be said about Toei? They were confined to what Toriyama wrote in the manga and GT was their first opportunity to mess with colors.
No? Toei wasn't making a weekly, mostly black and white anime, were they?
Skar wrote:Usually "palette swap" refers to either a literal palette swap as in just taking an old form and changing the color or a new form with slight alterations where the main distinction is the color change.
So the complaints are hyperbolic then. Which is fine, but you often can't tell if the people making these complaints are saying ill-informed things, or being hyperbolic. It's not helpful that this fandom is filled with ill-informed assertions, or that hyperbole transfers poorly via text.

For the record, I'm pretty neutral toward both the literal palette swap Deviant Art stuff and the minimalist Toriyama mostly-palette swaps. The Evil Dragons are actually a great point that I've never considered before in relation to this topic. Didn't mind that they were literal palette swaps of one another, and I kind of laugh every time I see Si Xing Long's "transformation" happen when I rewatch GT. No salt or sour grapes about it though. Would more nuances to the designs have been cool? Yeah, definitely, but they're not necessary. In hindsight, now that you mention it, it did sort of subvert expectations, which does feel a bit like a Toriyama move, so props to Toei on that one. It's worth noting that two other dragons prior to that fight did have more going on with their transformations, so there were expectations set up to be subverted in the first place. That sort of thing doesn't necessarily apply to random fanart though. It's random, there's no story for me to be invested in. No expectations being built up.

When it comes to the possible eventual Super Saiyan White, at this point, I'm expecting some minimalist design work there. Subverting expectations at this point, for me, would entail adding more than just some slight changes. I still wouldn't mind if it was minimalist, but it would be more expected at this point, so more would naturally be better.

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Re: "This looks/feels like something out of AF/fanfiction"

Post by Faustus » Wed Apr 20, 2016 12:49 am

In hindsight, now that you mention it, it did sort of subvert expectations, which does feel a bit like a Toriyama move, so props to Toei on that one. It's worth noting that two other dragons prior to that fight did have more going on with their transformations, so there were expectations set up to be subverted in the first place. That sort of thing doesn't necessarily apply to random fanart though. It's random, there's no story for me to be invested in. No expectations being built up.
Right on the money as always; this is part of what I was trying to get at over in the Multiverse thread. Located in their proper context, these minimalistic design choices are never so outrageous or odious as they inevitably seem when they are ripped out to be taken purely in the abstract.

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Re: "This looks/feels like something out of AF/fanfiction"

Post by Skar » Wed Apr 20, 2016 1:58 am

Zephyr wrote:No? Toei wasn't making a weekly, mostly black and white anime, were they?
No but that's why I specifically brought up GT and Nova Shenron. You said that Toriyama was now free to mess with colors and Toei was free to mess with colors and design their own transformations in GT. Both came up with palette swap transformations but only one of them was praised for it. RoF is the first time something like that ever happened where it received any sort of praise by fans.
So the complaints are hyperbolic then. Which is fine, but you often can't tell if the people making these complaints are saying ill-informed things, or being hyperbolic. It's not helpful that this fandom is filled with ill-informed assertions, or that hyperbole transfers poorly via text.
I would really appreciate if you didn't do something like this. It feels like you're now trying to claim everything I said was "hyperbolic" and "ill-informed" to ignore the rest of what I wrote:
Skar wrote:That's probably why Toriyama decided to name the new forms "SSJ BLUE" and "GOLDEN Freeza" because he's acknowledging that what stands out about them the most is their new color. Whether we're going to call them a palette swap or minimalist, the color change is mainly what sets them apart from previous transformations in the series.
I was explaining that not every fan palette swap is a literal palette swap but the main thing that stands out about them is that they're a change in color of a previous form. I believe that can be said about the new forms in RoF since even the author himself has named them based on their new colors. If you're going to claim that what I said is hyperbolic then please explain to me what Toriyama has done with these forms that distinguishes them from what fans have been doing for years.
In hindsight, now that you mention it, it did sort of subvert expectations, which does feel a bit like a Toriyama move, so props to Toei on that one.
Well hindsight it feels like a Toriyama move because we've seen the same come from Toriyama now. My point was that, prior to RoF, no one ever called it something typical of Toriyama. In fact, I would bet there's probably no mention of the artistic genius behind Nova Shenron's transformation on this entire forum.
That sort of thing doesn't necessarily apply to random fanart though. It's random, there's no story for me to be invested in. No expectations being built up.
I can understand your view but for me I had the same reaction to them in random fanart, GT, and RoF. When I first saw the new transformations, they were pictures of the new figurines. My initial reaction was that they were probably AF bootlegs or something because I honestly couldn't see anything unique about them for me to think otherwise.

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Post by apex_pretador » Wed Apr 20, 2016 5:10 am

TheMikado wrote: Based on your last quote this guy should be the heir to ATs narrative in terms of Saiyan forms.
I believe this is even several years older than BoG and has both blue hair SSJ and Kaioken forms.

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Re: "This looks/feels like something out of AF/fanfiction"

Post by Zephyr » Wed Apr 20, 2016 1:55 pm

Skar wrote:No but that's why I specifically brought up GT and Nova Shenron. You said that Toriyama was now free to mess with colors and Toei was free to mess with colors and design their own transformations in GT. Both came up with palette swap transformations but only one of them was praised for it. RoF is the first time something like that ever happened where it received any sort of praise by fans.
That's missing my point. Toei always had the opportunity to mess around with colors, because their anime was always in color 100% of the time. Toriyama was crafting his story in a predominantly black and white medium where color changes outside of Super Saiyan's "no shading" wouldn't be possible to consistently convey.
Skar wrote:It feels like you're now trying to claim everything I said was "hyperbolic" and "ill-informed" to ignore the rest of what I wrote
No, I contrasted ill-informed against hyperbolic. Yes, the color change was very obviously the most notable difference in the forms. No, that does not mean that they are literal palette swaps. When they are called "palette swaps" when they are not literal palette swaps, they are being hyperbolically called palette swaps. The same way people nowadays tend to use "literally" for everything except the actual contextually appropriate places. I'm not condemning anyone for being hyperbolic. Hyperbole, again, is completely fine. I'm saying that it can be difficult to discern between someone being ill-informed and someone being hyperbolic. In the future, if you call Golden Freeza a palette swap, I will have the understanding that you are being hyperbolic, rather than ill-informed. No issue will be taken. Hyperbole is fine.
Skar wrote:I was explaining that not every fan palette swap is a literal palette swap but the main thing that stands out about them is that they're a change in color of a previous form. I believe that can be said about the new forms in RoF since even the author himself has named them based on their new colors. If you're going to claim that what I said is hyperbolic then please explain to me what Toriyama has done with these forms that distinguishes them from what fans have been doing for years.
If fans also changed other minute details besides colors, than calling those palette swaps would likewise only be so hyperbolically. The dragons (to my memory, I could be wrong) were literal palette swaps. And I'm okay with that.
Skar wrote:Well hindsight it feels like a Toriyama move because we've seen the same come from Toriyama now. My point was that, prior to RoF, no one ever called it something typical of Toriyama. In fact, I would bet there's probably no mention of the artistic genius behind Nova Shenron's transformation on this entire forum.
I'd say that it feels like a Toriyama move because it subverted expectations, and the fact that Toriyama subverted expectations in the same way, in an age where things are readily discussed on the internet merely helps to illuminate that. I do understand your point that nobody likely pointed that out prior, but that doesn't alter the point that I'm trying to convey here.

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Re: "This looks/feels like something out of AF/fanfiction"

Post by TheMikado » Wed Apr 20, 2016 3:15 pm

I don't think anyone is saying that all fanfiction is terrible but statistically if you took ten random pieces only 1 or 2 might be decent. So people are saying the fanfictiony stuff is low quality, uninspired, lazy, or poorly executed without the level of craftsmanship they have come to expect from the series.

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Post by Skar » Wed Apr 20, 2016 4:52 pm

Zephyr wrote:That's missing my point. Toei always had the opportunity to mess around with colors, because their anime was always in color 100% of the time. Toriyama was crafting his story in a predominantly black and white medium where color changes outside of Super Saiyan's "no shading" wouldn't be possible to consistently convey.
All Toei could do was color in the designs that Toriyama came up with. It's not like Toei could've decided that each transformation of Freeza or Cell would just be a color change of their first form rather than the transformations Toriyama had designed for them. In GT, Toei had the freedom to not only pick the color but also create a new transformation for their original characters that only changed the color.
No, I contrasted ill-informed against hyperbolic. Yes, the color change was very obviously the most notable difference in the forms. No, that does not mean that they are literal palette swaps. When they are called "palette swaps" when they are not literal palette swaps, they are being hyperbolically called palette swaps. The same way people nowadays tend to use "literally" for everything except the actual contextually appropriate places. I'm not condemning anyone for being hyperbolic. Hyperbole, again, is completely fine. I'm saying that it can be difficult to discern between someone being ill-informed and someone being hyperbolic. In the future, if you call Golden Freeza a palette swap, I will have the understanding that you are being hyperbolic, rather than ill-informed. No issue will be taken. Hyperbole is fine.
Correct me if I'm wrong but I'm pretty sure both definitions are accurate. In video games, not every palette swap is just a change in color. Sometimes they might try to add other features to distinguish them a little more. For example, Kuma and Panda from Tekken are palette swaps but Panda is wearing bracelets and it's not just solid color change. In video games, they're usually meant to save money and meant to be a sign of creative genius though.

I would appreciate if you could answer my original question. It seems like you're implying Toriyama has done something new with SSJ Blue and Golden Freeza that distinguishes them from what fans have been doing for years. If Toriyama deserves praise for them but not all these fans then that would mean he has clearly done differently.
I'd say that it feels like a Toriyama move because it subverted expectations, and the fact that Toriyama subverted expectations in the same way, in an age where things are readily discussed on the internet merely helps to illuminate that. I do understand your point that nobody likely pointed that out prior, but that doesn't alter the point that I'm trying to convey here.
I would say the reason no one ever brought up Nova Shenron's design as being Toriyama-like because Toriyama never did anything that simple in the manga. Of course it was black-and-white which forced him to subvert expectations with some creativity. Even then it wasn't ALWAYS an attempt at that because that would be too predictable. Final form Freeza was the first transformation that subverted expectations but even then it was a sleek new design and not a simple variation of one of his previous forms. SSJ also subverted expectations because no one expected a new Saiyan form and, if they did, they didn't expect it to be a change in hair color and new colored aura. Prior to that every transformation was always bigger and more muscular (Max form Roshi, Oozaru, Giant Namek Piccolo, Monster Zarbon, Freeza's first two forms). That's probably why no one complained about the movie transformations that Toriyama designed (Garlic Jr, 5th form Kooler, Super 13, LSSJ Broly, and Transformed Bojack) as being "not Toriyama's style" because he has done those types of transformations many times in the manga. Even 100% Freeza was a bulkier version of his 4th form. After that, Cell had a unique design in each transformation. Dabura was known as the King of Demons and he looked like an actual devil. Buu subverted expectations because no one thought that the terrifying monster that ravaged the universe was a fat, cheerful manchild. We later found out that he was the weakest version of Buu and his next form was stronger and definitely looked more menacing. His default form without any absorption was the smallest of all so that was unexpected. Nowadays it seems like "subverting expectations" is being tossed around to excuse every simple design that's released. He wasn't always trying to do that in the manga and sometimes a character or transformation was bigger and badder than the last form. If everything is an attempt at a subversion then it's no longer unexpected and now the norm. At this point, the only thing that would catch me by surprise is if the next "SSJ White" is actually more than just a white-haired SSJ1.

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Post by TheMikado » Wed Apr 20, 2016 5:06 pm

^ lol at that last comment but this assessment in my opinion is 100% accurate. Toriyama has always made new forms explicitly different with the exception of SSJ2 and even that's excusable because it's only a x2 boost and he had a couple of forms in between. Having such a massive power boost like God power and the only visual difference is that it's blue instead of yellow is so un Toriyama and in restive given the scale of what it does that it seems like something a fan would write in a poorly written fanfiction manga. Everything we've seen of Toriyamas work suggest he loves to design unique characters and character designs which is part of the reason many fans enjoy his works. I'm not sure how a clear departure from his traditional style is supposed to attract the people who enjoyed that style in the first place unless someone thinks people should just like it because it's Dragonball and ATs name is on it...

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Post by Xeztin » Wed Apr 20, 2016 5:17 pm

I doubt anyone can come up with an idea for Dragon Ball that hasn't been done in a fan-fiction. AF's been done to death, Super Saiyan Blue was made by a fan years ago, kaio-ken with Super Saiyan has been done. Super Saiyan/Oozaru hybrids have been done, multiverses has been done. It's hard to come up with an idea with a franchise that has fan's with a big imagination who at the time, wanted more material.

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Post by Zephyr » Wed Apr 20, 2016 5:31 pm

Skar wrote:All Toei could do was color in the designs that Toriyama came up with. It's not like Toei could've decided that each transformation of Freeza or Cell would just be a color change of their first form rather than the transformations Toriyama had designed for them. In GT, Toei had the freedom to not only pick the color but also create a new transformation for their original characters that only changed the color.
Toei has had original characters for years, anime only characters. They could have had them change if they wanted to. They could have had these changes take the form of strictly changing colors, or only mostly changing colors. Ergo, they had the opportunity for years. That's the point. They had the opportunity to play around with colors where Toriyama did not.

Literally the entire point I'm trying to get across is that Toriyama wasn't operating within a medium of color. Now he is. That's it. I don't know how this is difficult to understand.
Skar wrote:Kuma and Panda from Tekken are palette swaps but Panda is wearing bracelets and it's not just solid color change.
Then it sounds like they weren't literal palette swaps.
Skar wrote:I would appreciate if you could answer my original question. It seems like you're implying Toriyama has done something new with SSJ Blue and Golden Freeza that distinguishes them from what fans have been doing for years.
I never said that. It also wasn't anywhere near relevant to the point I was intending to make. Toriyama has done something new for Toriyama. Toriyama is doing things he has never done before, which is playing around with color as the key means of conveying change. Toriyama is also making them for stories, where actual expectations are built up. Again, this isn't what fans with MSpaint buckets were doing on DA.
Skar wrote:I would say the reason no one ever brought up Nova Shenron's design as being Toriyama-like because Toriyama never did anything that simple in the manga.
Not the point. I'm saying the dragon is simple, and that Toriyama has also done things that were simple. Different degress of simple, yes. But both still simple. That's the point. Simple. Minimalist. Unexpectedly so. That's it. That isn't to say that he has only done things that were simple, but that "I expect something big...oh hey I got something less" is something that I would indeed expect to get from Toriyama.
Skar wrote:At this point, the only thing that would catch me by surprise is if the next "SSJ White" is actually more than just a white-haired SSJ1.
I brought this up several replies ago. I also expect very little, thus in order for my expectations to be subverted, more would need to be done for design work.

Apologies if I'm coming off a bit abrasive, not in the best mood at the moment due to real life stuff. I'll try to rephrase any points that are continuing to not translate well.

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Post by TheMikado » Wed Apr 20, 2016 5:58 pm

I never said that. It also wasn't anywhere near relevant to the point I was intending to make. Toriyama has done something new for Toriyama. Toriyama is doing things he has never done before, which is playing around with color as the key means of conveying change. Toriyama is also making them for stories, where actual expectations are built up. Again, this isn't what fans with MSpaint buckets were doing on DA.
I don't see how the above is remotely true when SSJ(one of the most famous things he's famous for) was just a color change. You can argue an aura but even base Goku can have an aura. Further is discredits your premise that this is his first opportunity to work with color as the only change in his medium. I think this being one of his most successful designs proves he could easy have just make color changes only whenever he wanted, he just choose not too. I wouldn't try making up the narrative that him suddenly just changing colors is innovative because he's literally been doing it for years.

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Re: "This looks/feels like something out of AF/fanfiction"

Post by TheMikado » Wed Apr 20, 2016 6:11 pm

Xeztin wrote:I doubt anyone can come up with an idea for Dragon Ball that hasn't been done in a fan-fiction. AF's been done to death, Super Saiyan Blue was made by a fan years ago, kaio-ken with Super Saiyan has been done. Super Saiyan/Oozaru hybrids have been done, multiverses has been done. It's hard to come up with an idea with a franchise that has fan's with a big imagination who at the time, wanted more material.
Not really, no one drew up SSJ for Goku until it was introduced, same with SSJ3 and SSJ4. A lot of fan creations just key off existing work rather than being fully original creations.

Example Jar Jar binks type fan fiction wasn't a thing until the character and lore was created.
No one was writing horcrux lore in Harry Potter fan fiction until the concept was introduced.

If your new concept in a series is so uninspired and predictable or lazy that fans have already produced similar works about it, then it's probably not that original.

Case in point, prior to Darth Mail fans rarely wrote/drew multi edge light sabers. Following that official introduction it became extremely popular which in turn make the latest cross style light saber appear fan fictiony. A better route to take would have been doing something like having a device which spits out light spheres that he controlled with the force or something.

Just an example of something more original vs something that feels more fan fictiony

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Re: "This looks/feels like something out of AF/fanfiction"

Post by Xeztin » Wed Apr 20, 2016 6:26 pm

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Xeztin wrote:I doubt anyone can come up with an idea for Dragon Ball that hasn't been done in a fan-fiction. AF's been done to death, Super Saiyan Blue was made by a fan years ago, kaio-ken with Super Saiyan has been done. Super Saiyan/Oozaru hybrids have been done, multiverses has been done. It's hard to come up with an idea with a franchise that has fan's with a big imagination who at the time, wanted more material.
Not really, no one drew up SSJ for Goku until it was introduced, same with SSJ3 and SSJ4. A lot of fan creations just key off existing work rather than being fully original creations.

Example Jar Jar binks type fan fiction wasn't a thing until the character and lore was created.
No one was writing horcrux lore in Harry Potter fan fiction until the concept was introduced.

If your new concept in a series is so uninspired and predictable or lazy that fans have already produced similar works about it, then it's probably not that original.

Case in point, prior to Darth Mail fans rarely wrote/drew multi edge light sabers. Following that official introduction it became extremely popular which in turn make the latest cross style light saber appear fan fictiony. A better route to take would have been doing something like having a device which spits out light spheres that he controlled with the force or something.

Just an example of something more original vs something that feels more fan fictiony
The thing is, Dragon Ball was still ongoing back then no one had to make up their own fan-manga or characters. It wasn't until the end of DBZ or GT that things really took off. The inspiration of wanting Dragon Ball to continue is where AF and most ideas or fan-manga's come from. I don't know if you have noticed or not, but since Super has started a lot of fan-manga/fan-fiction has halted with the exception of multiverse and New Age. Theres really not many idea's as far as Goku, Vegeta, and the plot goes that anyone can come up with that they can honestly say is original. Unless of course it's something insane like Yamcha defeats Goku which probably wouldn't be a popular idea. There's very little you can do with a manga like Dragon Ball that can't escape from the "bad guy shows up, bad guy looses" formula. If you change that, well it's not Dragon Ball anymore.

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Re: "This looks/feels like something out of AF/fanfiction"

Post by Ryuman » Wed Apr 20, 2016 6:34 pm

Skar wrote:
Zephyr wrote:That's missing my point. Toei always had the opportunity to mess around with colors, because their anime was always in color 100% of the time. Toriyama was crafting his story in a predominantly black and white medium where color changes outside of Super Saiyan's "no shading" wouldn't be possible to consistently convey.
All Toei could do was color in the designs that Toriyama came up with. It's not like Toei could've decided that each transformation of Freeza or Cell would just be a color change of their first form rather than the transformations Toriyama had designed for them. In GT, Toei had the freedom to not only pick the color but also create a new transformation for their original characters that only changed the color.
He's trying to say that Toriyama, having worked on a (mostly) black and white format of media, limited his use of colour for changes in designs and the like. BoG and RoF are movies with colour in mind, so he chose to make use of those opportunites. Conversely, Toei are always working with colour, and could have done this at any time.

I think you do have a bit of a point about the four-star dragon, but such pinpoint discussions about GT have been and gone years ago, and you can't exactly say that no one has ever thought about this. People ignore it (Probably unfairly) because it's GT. If it means anything, I agree with you now that you mention it. Besides, the point is associated with Toriyama specifically. He's discussed on numerous occasions about his expectation-betraying method. Certain people, certain ideas, certain discussions.
TheMikado wrote: I don't see how the above is remotely true when SSJ(one of the most famous things he's famous for) was just a color change. You can argue an aura but even base Goku can have an aura. Further is discredits your premise that this is his first opportunity to work with color as the only change in his medium. I think this being one of his most successful designs proves he could easy have just make color changes only whenever he wanted, he just choose not too. I wouldn't try making up the narrative that him suddenly just changing colors is innovative because he's literally been doing it for years.
Erm, it also changed his very iconic hairstyle and (at the time) made him a much angrier person. I suppose muscle-mass could be brought in too, depending on how you see it. Certainly, there is not the same level of simplicity there. The point is that this design ethic kept snowballing over the different forms.


At the end of the day, Toriyama seems to have adopted views that are different to his former self. He's had time to reflect, and a bit of freedom from his old schedules and editors pushing him into certain design decisions. We've flipped the nature of the Saiyan forms upside down and are now working with a new, simpler method. Not every single decision of every single aspect of the franchise has to be a wacky and unexpected move. A change of pace here and there, that's fine. It keeps the series interesting.

Fanfiction, for better or for worse, has its stereotypes. However, fanfiction is fanfiction. It often is not in a position for such scrutiny and criticism that official work is subjected to, and that's just the nature of these things. Feel free to disagree with me, but I doubt Toriyama is looking at much Dragon Ball fanart (Heck, not even Dragon Ball anything) on the internet. He's concerned with himself, what he's done, and what he thinks people expect as a result.

...Honestly, I personally think Blue is a fun, slightly clever move that acts as a logical progression from the ideas presented in BoG. The idea behind the form is interesting without being convoluted (And better than SSG, IMO).

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Re: "This looks/feels like something out of AF/fanfiction"

Post by TheMikado » Wed Apr 20, 2016 6:38 pm

^ Xeztin, did you miss my Star Wars examples? The franchise has stalled for 3 decades with tons of expanded universe material x10000 over anything DB had and yet they managed to make MANY MANY original concepts and designs and story lines and characters without looking and feeling like a fan made piece of work. Regardless of how you feel about Jar Jar, his character and race were unique.
You could have made the same argument for Star Wars a thousand times over but true creativity will typically shine though. Whether you like it or not is a different story. I guarantee I could think of at least 10 original or different designs they could have went with rather than SSB right off the top of my head.

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