As Gokuu said, luck is also a factor in martial arts.ABED wrote:Agreed, for instance, if a plot thread is left dangling or a payoff isn't sufficiently setup, then it's objectively bad writing. Deus ex machina is also objectively bad, such as Goku losing the 22nd Budokai because he hit a car. Maybe someone can think of a reason why it make sense, but I can't
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I think Muten Roshi said it, but that doesn't make for a good story. Goku took everything Tenshinhan has and he loses because of a random car?As Gokuu said, luck is also a factor in martial arts.
Deus ex machina is bad execution because it breaks the internal logic of the story and is contrived.It deoends on the exercution.
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Pretty sure it was Gokuu. But anyway, I think it does make for a good story. Gokuu still put up a very close fight.ABED wrote:I think Muten Roshi said it, but that doesn't make for a good story. Goku took everything Tenshinhan has and he loses because of a random car?
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I see people do that same thing with Star Wars fan projects and The Force Awakens. Like, yeah, you can say they're better if you want but how about an actual discussion? Some critique? No? Okay, then. Whatever.Scarz wrote:"This [inser name of fan/comic/animation/fic] is two hundred times better than Super!"

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Oh god, I ran into an instance of this recently that made me laugh (and cry).Scarz wrote:"This [inser name of fan/comic/animation/fic] is two hundred times better than Super!"
It was a Saitama vs Goku fan animation and all of the comments were along the lines of, "Wow, they should hire you for Super!"
Every single bit of animation was traced from somewhere else -- Super included! How fans can be so blind baffles me.
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It's not a good story because it's not connected to anything. It's not even thematically on point and doesn't lead to some grand lesson learned that anyone later applies.RedRibbonSoldier#42 wrote:Pretty sure it was Gokuu. But anyway, I think it does make for a good story. Gokuu still put up a very close fight.ABED wrote:I think Muten Roshi said it, but that doesn't make for a good story. Goku took everything Tenshinhan has and he loses because of a random car?
I've looked at the manga and it was in fact Roshi who said luck is a part of one's strength.
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Yeah that animation took some of the greatest cuts in Z and turned it into something........differentAjay wrote: Oh god, I ran into an instance of this recently that made me laugh (and cry).
It was a Saitama vs Goku fan animation and all of the comments were along the lines of, "Wow, they should hire you for Super!"
Every single bit of animation was traced from somewhere else -- Super included! How fans can be so blind baffles me.

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This happens everywhere, and it annoys me so much (especially regarding Whatculture).Scarz wrote:"This [inser name of fan/comic/animation/fic] is two hundred times better than Super!"
I mean if someone doesn't like something, they don't like it. Are you mad that people dislike the Funi dub post 2008 ?What grinds my gears is modern Dub hate (Kai onward) comments in 2016
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Why? I've never understood the frustration people have towards others that prefer some fan material to some official material.Scarz wrote:"This [inser name of fan/comic/animation/fic] is two hundred times better than Super!"
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The Scarzverse is better than Super.Scarz wrote:"This [inser name of fan/comic/animation/fic] is two hundred times better than Super!"

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Maybe the point is that not everything has to have a grand moral.ABED wrote:It's not a good story because it's not connected to anything. It's not even thematically on point and doesn't lead to some grand lesson learned that anyone later applies.RedRibbonSoldier#42 wrote:Pretty sure it was Gokuu. But anyway, I think it does make for a good story. Gokuu still put up a very close fight.ABED wrote:I think Muten Roshi said it, but that doesn't make for a good story. Goku took everything Tenshinhan has and he loses because of a random car?
I've looked at the manga and it was in fact Roshi who said luck is a part of one's strength.
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That wasn't Toriyama's point, it's simply bad writing.
The biggest truths aren't original. The truth is ketchup. It's Jim Belushi. Its job isn't to blow our minds. It's to be within reach.
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Or maybe unpredictability is refreshing?ABED wrote:That wasn't Toriyama's point, it's simply bad writing.
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Having Goku lose is plenty unpredictable, it's the method of arriving at that twist that's the problem.RedRibbonSoldier#42 wrote:Or maybe unpredictability is refreshing?ABED wrote:That wasn't Toriyama's point, it's simply bad writing.
The biggest truths aren't original. The truth is ketchup. It's Jim Belushi. Its job isn't to blow our minds. It's to be within reach.
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Would you prefer if Tenshinhan had just fallen slower? That would be the exact same result but less interesting.ABED wrote:Having Goku lose is plenty unpredictable, it's the method of arriving at that twist that's the problem.RedRibbonSoldier#42 wrote:Or maybe unpredictability is refreshing?ABED wrote:That wasn't Toriyama's point, it's simply bad writing.
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I'll answer that in the Deus Ex Machina thread.
The biggest truths aren't original. The truth is ketchup. It's Jim Belushi. Its job isn't to blow our minds. It's to be within reach.
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You can enjoy fan created content more than the official material. I've see it happen all the time. But some will go as far to compare the two on a level that's really absurd. They just let their personal bias against Super cloud their judgment. With dragon ball, I've seen a lot of fan created stuff that's certainly entertaining. But I can't compare it to a professionally produced series like Super.gogeta97 wrote:Why? I've never understood the frustration people have towards others that prefer some fan material to some official material.Scarz wrote:"This [inser name of fan/comic/animation/fic] is two hundred times better than Super!"
Clearly the exception to the rule.Kamiccolo9 wrote:The Scarzverse is better than Super.Scarz wrote:"This [inser name of fan/comic/animation/fic] is two hundred times better than Super!"
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Its kind of sad that, even that still looked better than most of Super's terrible fight choreography. I cant stand the wild flailing fist animations we get now.Ajay wrote:Oh god, I ran into an instance of this recently that made me laugh (and cry).Scarz wrote:"This [inser name of fan/comic/animation/fic] is two hundred times better than Super!"
It was a Saitama vs Goku fan animation and all of the comments were along the lines of, "Wow, they should hire you for Super!"
Every single bit of animation was traced from somewhere else -- Super included! How fans can be so blind baffles me.
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