Does this sound like a good title for a chapter?

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Does this sound like a good title for a chapter?

Post by Steven Bloodriver » Mon Aug 08, 2016 1:29 pm

Hero Reborn Special: Like A Burning Wind… The Clash of Goku vs Vegeta Makes a New Legend!

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Re: Does this sound like a good title for a chapter?

Post by Anime Kitten » Mon Aug 08, 2016 2:35 pm

Depends on how the chapter is arranged. You might want to condense it a tad so it's not too long. Maybe something along the lines of:
"The Clash of Two Saiyans Makes a Burning Legend!"
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Re: Does this sound like a good title for a chapter?

Post by Steven Bloodriver » Mon Aug 08, 2016 3:18 pm

Thanks, Anime Kitten!

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Re: Does this sound like a good title for a chapter?

Post by TheMikado » Mon Aug 08, 2016 3:31 pm

How about this?

Saiyans' Regret: Atone for your Legacy of Sins

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Re: Does this sound like a good title for a chapter?

Post by Steven Bloodriver » Mon Aug 08, 2016 3:45 pm

1) For Anime Kitten, how about this one? Like A Burning Wind… The Making of A New Legend, the Rebirth of the God of Fear and Destruction!

2) For TheMikado, sounds like one for Vegeta.

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Re: Does this sound like a good title for a chapter?

Post by Anime Kitten » Mon Aug 08, 2016 4:14 pm

Like I mentioned, it should be shorter just to not drag on for too long.
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Re: Does this sound like a good title for a chapter?

Post by Draconic » Mon Aug 08, 2016 5:05 pm

I would go with:
A legend in the making! Like a brurning wind two Saiyans clash!

"Makes a new legend" sounds weird to me, while "in the making" is an actual expression.
Goku and Vegeta I replace with "two Saiyans" cause it is a bit shorter and flows better.
And if course rearranged the title a bit to still convey all your ideas :D
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Re: Does this sound like a good title for a chapter?

Post by Steven Bloodriver » Mon Aug 08, 2016 5:16 pm

Thanks, Draconic!

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Post by GokusWarehouse » Mon Aug 08, 2016 10:24 pm

Doesn't sound bad to me!
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Re: Does this sound like a good title for a chapter?

Post by Alruneia » Tue Aug 09, 2016 1:07 pm

Well, it depends on the feel you're trying to give the chapter. If you're trying to get a Funi feeling ha your titles should only be a couple of words long. For a more original feel (Japanese/Kai dub) you're definitely on the right track. And yeah, Draconic's title sounds good!
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