Does this sound like a good title for a chapter?
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Does this sound like a good title for a chapter?
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Re: Does this sound like a good title for a chapter?
Depends on how the chapter is arranged. You might want to condense it a tad so it's not too long. Maybe something along the lines of:
"The Clash of Two Saiyans Makes a Burning Legend!"
"The Clash of Two Saiyans Makes a Burning Legend!"
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Re: Does this sound like a good title for a chapter?
Thanks, Anime Kitten!
Re: Does this sound like a good title for a chapter?
How about this?
Saiyans' Regret: Atone for your Legacy of Sins

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Re: Does this sound like a good title for a chapter?
1) For Anime Kitten, how about this one? Like A Burning Wind… The Making of A New Legend, the Rebirth of the God of Fear and Destruction!
2) For TheMikado, sounds like one for Vegeta.
2) For TheMikado, sounds like one for Vegeta.
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Re: Does this sound like a good title for a chapter?
Like I mentioned, it should be shorter just to not drag on for too long.
Re: Does this sound like a good title for a chapter?
I would go with:
A legend in the making! Like a brurning wind two Saiyans clash!
"Makes a new legend" sounds weird to me, while "in the making" is an actual expression.
Goku and Vegeta I replace with "two Saiyans" cause it is a bit shorter and flows better.
And if course rearranged the title a bit to still convey all your ideas
Hope I helped!
A legend in the making! Like a brurning wind two Saiyans clash!
"Makes a new legend" sounds weird to me, while "in the making" is an actual expression.
Goku and Vegeta I replace with "two Saiyans" cause it is a bit shorter and flows better.
And if course rearranged the title a bit to still convey all your ideas
Hope I helped!
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Re: Does this sound like a good title for a chapter?
Thanks, Draconic!
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Re: Does this sound like a good title for a chapter?
Doesn't sound bad to me!
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Re: Does this sound like a good title for a chapter?
Well, it depends on the feel you're trying to give the chapter. If you're trying to get a Funi feeling ha your titles should only be a couple of words long. For a more original feel (Japanese/Kai dub) you're definitely on the right track. And yeah, Draconic's title sounds good!
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