Toyble DBAF [June 9, 2012] Vol 4 HD release complete

Chibi Mystic Gohan · Post by **Chibi Mystic Gohan** » Sun Mar 11, 2007 3:22 am

Ah. That's pretty much the only thing of Toriyama's that I haven't read (except perhaps Tocchio the Angel and Neko Majin ga Iru 2).

Shiini · Post by **Shiini** » Sun Mar 11, 2007 7:08 am

Chibi Mystic Gohan : Thanks a lot for the Ranking page ! There was many characters I didn't recognized ! Thanks again !

DNA · Post by **DNA** » Sun Mar 11, 2007 8:36 am

The story is a mix of win and fail -_- there are some cool bits but... Freeza's mom? I always took for granted that they were asexual. Plus, why the hell does she look like a Kaio Shin? And the Xicor thing look pretty lame as well. And then there is Brolly appearing out of nowhere. Didn't this guy got reused until oblivion already? I kinda like Brolly but... C'mon! He died 3 times already :D

Shiini · Post by **Shiini** » Sun Mar 11, 2007 11:00 am

Tatsunoboshi Horoko : You're awesome ! Thanks again pal !

strawberry · Post by **strawberry** » Sun Mar 11, 2007 5:57 pm

Tatsunoboshi Horoko wrote:Wow, that didn't take long at all. I did this inbetween my normal stuff.

Wow, you are great. You don't happen to be a professional translator? ^^ Thank you very much!

Pages 21 - 43
http://home.arcor.de/erdbeerkeks/af21-43.doc

Shiini · Post by **Shiini** » Mon Mar 12, 2007 11:13 am

Wow, thanks again Strawberry !

Tatsunoboshi Horoko · Post by **Tatsunoboshi Horoko** » Tue Mar 13, 2007 1:48 am

So sorry. I didn't even notice that you put the last part up already. Thank you. I'll try and have it done by tomorrow at least. Well, as soon as I finish my work, anyway.

laserkid · Post by **laserkid** » Tue Mar 13, 2007 4:13 am

I must say I'm impressed by the art, and grateful to those of you translating this as I found myself wanting to know what was going on. I know some basic Japanese but this is waaay above my level having taken a year of it back 4 years ago (I'm so badly out of practice >.>).

Its something diffrent for me anyway having never seena coherent "AF" attempt before (even if the plot appears to be pretty sad).

The S · Post by **The S** » Tue Mar 13, 2007 11:40 am

DNA wrote:The story is a mix of win and fail -_- there are some cool bits but... Freeza's mom? I always took for granted that they were asexual. Plus, why the hell does she look like a Kaio Shin? And the Xicor thing look pretty lame as well. And then there is Brolly appearing out of nowhere. Didn't this guy got reused until oblivion already? I kinda like Brolly but... C'mon! He died 3 times already

They aren't asexual. Freeza actually mentions his mother at at least one point in the story.

32nd: Karoni- Don't recall this one either. The name's familiar, though. Perhaps from a one-shot?

Caroni is one of Mr. Satan's pupils that accompanied him to the Cell Games.

sangofe · Post by **sangofe** » Tue Mar 13, 2007 1:25 pm

It would be helpful of threadstarter, or one of the first posters at this topic, could edit their posts with links to all translated pages so far, because digging this topic for them is kinda hopeless...
Another question: did those "lost" pages get uploaded at Toyble's? (Can't remember wich pages weren't online)

Olivier Hague · Post by **Olivier Hague** » Tue Mar 13, 2007 2:05 pm

The S wrote:Freeza actually mentions his mother at at least one point in the story.

Nope, he doesn't.

BlueSky · Post by **Kaboom** » Tue Mar 13, 2007 3:32 pm

Olivier Hague wrote:
The S wrote:Freeza actually mentions his mother at at least one point in the story.
Nope, he doesn't.

Well, that helps truckloads, thanks.

The S · Post by **The S** » Wed Mar 14, 2007 12:55 pm

Olivier Hague wrote:
The S wrote:Freeza actually mentions his mother at at least one point in the story.
Nope, he doesn't.

There's a specific piece of dialogue that I don't recall exactly, but he distinctively mentions his "parents" at one point as opposed to a singular parent.

Post by **TripleRach** » Wed Mar 14, 2007 1:49 pm

The S wrote:
Olivier Hague wrote:
The S wrote:Freeza actually mentions his mother at at least one point in the story.
Nope, he doesn't.
There's a specific piece of dialogue that I don't recall exactly, but he distinctively mentions his "parents" at one point as opposed to a singular parent.

The thing is, Japanese often doesn't specify plurality, because it isn't necessary with context. The only line that I can recall is one during his fight with Gokuu where he uses 親 (parent). From what others have said, Viz decided to translate it as "parents". But, considering that only one parent is ever actually shown or otherwise referred to, and this particular word could be easily pluralized (両親, both parents, or maybe even 親たち, parents), I'd have to call their interpretation into question.

DNA · Post by **DNA** » Wed Mar 14, 2007 2:03 pm

Like I said: Asexual! ^^

Tatsunoboshi Horoko · Post by **Tatsunoboshi Horoko** » Sun Mar 18, 2007 3:41 am

Well, I'm done. I did some parts fast and some parts slow, so, you'll probably see a variation in some of the sentences. Otherwise, it's all good.

Page 21

Xicor: Hm?
*Vmmm*
Goten: I wish that Oob would use a little courtesy...
Laila: We’ve already found you...
Laila: Son Goten!!

Page 22

Goten: Oh, man...
Goten: I wonder if everyone already went home...
(Shoop) (Glare)
Goten: Gaaah!!
Goten: W-Who are you!?
Xicor: Are you Son Goten...?
Goten: I’m not! (Fit)
Goten: I am the Great Saiyaman...

Page 23

(Shh...)
Xicor: Die!
Goten: !!
(Shiiine)

Page 24
(Kaaadoo...m)
Gohan: G-Goten!?
Gohan: W-What is the deal with this ridiculously large ki!?

Page 25

(Grm grm grm grm grm grm)
Man: W-What is this...!?
Random People: Aaah! Aaah!
Old Man: I-It’s an earthquake!!
(Crk crk crk crk...)
Child: Master, what is this!?
Lunch: Gaah!
Chaozu: Ten-san, that ki is incredible!!
Tenshinhan: Ghh...What is this? What has started?

Page 26

(Wshoooo...)
Goten: Aa...aagg...ggff...
Xicor: Hmph, so he’s still alive...
Laila: !? Someone’s coming!!
Gohan: Goten!!
(Bbmm)

Page 27

Gohan: Goten!! (Zzzmph)
Goten: Grgh!!
Laila: Good...it’s Son Gohan.
Gohan: A-Are you okay?!
Goten: B-Big bro...
Gohan: Grr!! (Tck)
Gohan: Was it you that did this?!
Gohan: Who are you?!
Xicor: So you’re Son Gohan...
Xicor: Heh...Why do you have such pathetic energy?

Page 28
Gohan: I’m asking you who you are!!
Xicor: Me? Why, I’m your little brother!
Gohan: W-What!?
Gohan: L-Little brother...? Who are you trying to fool...
Gohan: Listen up! The only little brother I have is Goten here!!
Xicor: Hah, hah, hah! You two do indeed have a strain of these pathetic Earthlings in your blood, don’t you...
Trunks: Gohan-san!! (Bbmmp)
Gohan: Trunks...
Gohan: Vegeta-san!
Xicor: Even more of them, huh...?
Xicor: Saiyans, that is.

Page 29:

Vegeta: So he’s the one who beat Goten...
Gohan: ...Yes.
Trunks: G-Goten...
Gohan: W-What does this all mean?
Xicor: I have the ultimate body that possesses the genes of both the strongest warrior and deity in the universe...
Xicor: I am Xicor!
Gohan: The strongest warrior in the universe!? ...Deity!?
Gohan: What are you talking about?!
Laila: Allow me to explain. (Zip)
Gohan + Vegeta: !!

Page 30

Gohan: Ghh!!
Gohan: Are you on our side!?
Gohan: When did you get there!?
Vegeta: ...!!
Laila: Xicor’s father is, Son Goku, the same as yours...but it's only your mothers that are different...
Laila: I, a goddess, am his mother!
Gohan: Wha!?
Gohan: You expect us to believe that...?!

Page 31

Laila: Hmph! (Fpp)
Gohan: Sh...
Gohan: She’s gone!!
Laila: I’m here, fools. (Vpp)
Gohan: I-Instantaneous Movement...?
Vegeta: Hey! You’re both speaking gibberish!
Vegeta: What’s your objective? What did you come to Earth for?!
Xicor: Objective? That’s simple. I am the heir to Son Goku, who boasted the most power in the entire universe!
Xicor: I will rule the universe in my father’s stead. It won't be any of you.

Page 32

Gohan: H-Hey! Have you made some sort of mistake!?
Gohan: Father was strong, but he doesn’t rule the universe!! And we don’t plan on ruling it either!
Laila: Hmph, such barefaced lies...
Laila: Xicor, don’t be swayed by them. Kill them and you will become ruler of the universe.
Gohan: Ghh...
Xicor: Heh...
Gohan: W-Whatever the case, get lost!!
Gohan: You guys don’t belong here!!

Xicor: Heh heh heh... (Bmmmm)
(Zbmmm)
Gohan: !!

Page 34

(Shiing)
(K-bm bm bm...)
Vegeta: O-Oh no!!
Gohan/Trunks: Aaaaaaah...!!
Group: The... (Wooooosh....)
Group: The land got plowed over!!

Page 35

Gohan: W-What are you doing?!
Xicor: Is it important?
Xicor: The Earth which you’ve spent your time with father with, that is...
Gohan: W-Why you!!
Xicor: I’m going to make you all disappear.
Xicor: Both you...and this planet...

Page 36

Gohan: Grr...!!
(Shh...)
Gohan: !?
Vegeta: Hey...I’ve been listening to you for a while about who’s the strongest in the universe.
Vegeta: You’d better listen up! I’m going to teach you who’s really the strongest warrior in the universe, right now!!
Vegeta: Haaa!! (Doomm)

Page 37

Gohan: Wait!
Gohan: Vegeta-san!!
Xicor: Oh-ho...
Xicor: So you’re Vegeta, are you...?
Vegeta: Daaaah!!
(Wapaaam)

Page 38

(Grin)
Vegeta: Ghh!!
(Zuzaza) (Tmp)
Vegeta: Tsaaah!! (Gaaah)

Page 39
(Grab)
Vegeta: !!
(Pull)
Vegeta: Gaaaaaaah!!
Xicor: Haah!!
(Wham)

Page 40

Gohan/Trunks: !!
Vegeta: Gh...
Vegeta: Ghhah...!!
(Stagger)
Xicor: Whoa there! (Grab)
(Pull)
Xicor: You’re this bad with just a single punch?
Xicor: Your royal blood weeps, Vegeta.

Page 41
Trunks: F-Father!!
Gohan: D-Damn it!! (Rustle)
Trunks: Gohan-san, I’ll join you...!! (Rustle)
Gohan: Trunks!
Gohan: You take Goten and get out of here!!
(CRAK)
Gohan: !!?
Trunks: Aaah!!

Page 42
Vegeta: Gffh...!!
Xicor: Hah!! (Shaa)
(Swiiish)
Xicor: May the entire Earth be gone! Vegeta!!
Gohan: N-Not good!!

Page 43:
Gohan: Haaaaaaaaaa.... (Grm grm grm grm grm)
Trunks: !!
Trunks: A-A tail!?
Trunks: Impossible!!
Gohan: Daaah!! (Doomm)
(Shine)

Kay · Post by **Kay** » Sun Mar 18, 2007 11:29 pm

Eh... does anyone mind if I use these translations for the scans? I have lots of free time as it's Spring Break from where I live.

Rocketman · Post by **Rocketman** » Sun Mar 18, 2007 11:32 pm

Taku128 wrote:
fps_anth wrote:Gohan went SSJ4 way to easily. It's a shame, the moment could have been so much more...epic.
I think he'd reached the level before in between GT and AF. In GT, you had to become a Golden Ozaru before becoming a SSJ4 for the first time, and then every time after that they can just go SSJ4 without becoming a Golden Ozaru.

In GT, you have to be a full-blooded Saiyan to go SSJ4. Gohan could never do it.

Tatsunoboshi Horoko · Post by **Tatsunoboshi Horoko** » Sun Mar 18, 2007 11:42 pm

Kay wrote:Eh... does anyone mind if I use these translations for the scans? I have lots of free time as it's Spring Break from where I live.

I was actually going to do it myself. (Maybe it will give me some time to freshen up the sentences a bit.)

Shiini · Post by **Shiini** » Mon Mar 19, 2007 9:13 am

Tatsunoboshi Horoko : Awesome buddy, just as usual ! Thx again !

Kanzenshuu

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