Okay, everyone. back by popular demand, it's my GT Rewrite fanfiction! After suffering several setbacks, I've finally completed Chapter Four, and boy, is it a doozy. It's at least twice as long as any of the previous ones, and a lot happens. Good thing, too; Nothing important really went down in Chapters 1 -3, so I decided to write this one extra long rather than split it up and have nothing worth reading happening until the second half.
So, I won't delay the fulfilling of your primal lusts any further...
Hyperlink: "Oooh, yes! Click me, baby! Click me long and hard! Oh, yes, that's good..."
Go ahead and hit that link. It likes you.
As usual, most of my comments and notes are in the FF document, so I really don't need to repeat them here.
Oh, and what's this? Doth my eyes deceiveth me, or is there actually two, yes,
two pieces of artwork accompanying the chapter?! By Joe, yes there is! Through the magic of modern-day computer graphics technology, and the even more unbelievable miracle of my not being too lazy to learn said technology, I have managed to whip up and even
COLOR these two little "masterpieces..."
There you have it, everyone. If I don't have y'all enraptured by this yet, then I'm probably not ever gonna.
By the way, in case anyone's wondering, I'm using the dub name "Valese" for Goten's girlfriend, rather than "Paris," or whatever it originally was. Every time I think of "Paris" as a name, I think of Paris Hilton. Blech. I'm gonna do Valese a favor, and not have her named after some stupid and shallow celebrity. Most of my less-informed readers on FF.net probably know her as "Valese," anyhoo.
In case you hadn't figured it out, this is what I was asking for the pronunciation of "Xue" for. But I figured it out on my own after nobody answered. Blah. 
Oh, and Dr.Slump cameo FTW!
You blew me away three times in a row with that one (especially with the part where Bulma's hand just 'phases through' Trunks). I'll be printing that story out in a few minutes.
