Super: Cease... [Fandub] (EP 59 Clip)

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Super: Cease... [Fandub] (EP 59 Clip)

Post by El Diabeetus » Sun Sep 25, 2016 10:39 am

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z0pEMnspsww

This is a dub of the scene from last night's Dragon Ball Super episode where Beerus takes out Zamasu. I knew I wanted to dub it right after I saw the scene. Was originally gonna use Kikuchi music, but couldn't think of proper pieces. So, I used some of the Sumitomo Battle of Gods music in place of what was originally used, since there's no soundtrack release of that.

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El Diabeetus: Goku, Zamasu and Beerus

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Re: Super: Cease... [Fandub] (EP 59 Clip)

Post by Dbzfan94 » Sun Sep 25, 2016 10:52 am

Saying "cease" just like sounds incredibly awkward. "die" or "begone" would've worked better.
Otherwise good job

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Re: Super: Cease... [Fandub] (EP 59 Clip)

Post by El Diabeetus » Sun Sep 25, 2016 10:56 am

Dbzfan94 wrote:Saying "cease" just like sounds incredibly awkward. "die" or "begone" would've worked better.
Otherwise good job
Yeah, I can see that. I was trying to avoid that same problem with just saying Destroy/Destruction without anything next to it. I was also trying to match the syllable amount of Hakai.
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Re: Super: Cease... [Fandub] (EP 59 Clip)

Post by Dbzfan94 » Sun Sep 25, 2016 11:01 am

El Diabeetus wrote:
Dbzfan94 wrote:Saying "cease" just like sounds incredibly awkward. "die" or "begone" would've worked better.
Otherwise good job
Yeah, I can see that. I was trying to avoid that same problem with just saying Destroy/Destruction without anything next to it.
Is that the line he actually says? That sounds really awkward too.

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Re: Super: Cease... [Fandub] (EP 59 Clip)

Post by El Diabeetus » Sun Sep 25, 2016 11:02 am

Dbzfan94 wrote:
El Diabeetus wrote:
Dbzfan94 wrote:Saying "cease" just like sounds incredibly awkward. "die" or "begone" would've worked better.
Otherwise good job
Yeah, I can see that. I was trying to avoid that same problem with just saying Destroy/Destruction without anything next to it.
Is that the line he actually says? That sounds really awkward too.
Yep, Hakai. With nothing next to it. So it'd just be the word by itself. Cease was a more liberal adaptation of it with the same syllable amount as Hakai.

https://youtu.be/1qHp65Ho-BY
35-ish seconds.

Probably should've gone with "Now, cease!"

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