General Fan Fiction Thread

Any general discussion regarding fan-created works of the Dragon Ball franchise, including AMVs, fan-art, fan-fiction, etc.
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Re: General Fan Fiction Thread

Post by Blackstripe » Sun Sep 25, 2016 3:38 pm

I'm confused, am I supposed to post a link to my fanfiction here? I don't really see anyone else doing so.

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Post by ekrolo2 » Sun Sep 25, 2016 3:41 pm

Alruneia wrote: Weeeell... I intend on writing all 100 chapters before I start posting.
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Where does most of your guys' inspiration come from? I get a lot by listening to Dragon Ball music, especially Sumitomo.
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Re: General Fan Fiction Thread

Post by Alruneia » Sun Sep 25, 2016 4:43 pm

ekrolo2 wrote:
Alruneia wrote: Weeeell... I intend on writing all 100 chapters before I start posting.
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Thanks. :lol: I'm not worried about that, because when I start writing and get into it, I easily finish a chapter a day. I've slowed down momentarily because of my studies, that's all.
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Re: General Fan Fiction Thread

Post by Scarz » Sun Sep 25, 2016 6:00 pm

ekrolo2 wrote:Post-Resurrection F is the best call then. Maybe even make it an alternate universe where Freeza's invasion was more devastating and wasn't so quickly fixed so we don't have a bunch of people who die then come back in a matter of an hour?
FoolsGil wrote:Ignoring Super would be good idea, give the RR a fighting chance. Or in an alternate retelling of everything, Super Saiyan God is ritual only, there is no way to become Blue or become a God by training alone.
I'm thinking of it taking place between BoG and RoF. Kinda like these short gaps of adventures they had to deal with. And after the new RR get their fannies handed to them, they retreat and go back into hiding. Then they have to think of some other scheme. And as soon as they think come up with the perfect plan. BOOM! They find out about SSJB.

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Re: General Fan Fiction Thread

Post by ekrolo2 » Sun Sep 25, 2016 6:02 pm

Scarz wrote:I'm thinking of it taking place between BoG and RoF. Kinda like these short gaps of adventures they had to deal with. And after the new RR get their fannies handed to them, they retreat and go back into hiding. Then they have to think of some other scheme. And as soon as they think come up with the perfect plan. BOOM! They find out about SSJB.
On a scale from Supreme Kai to the male cast of Red vs Blue (well, the males who aren't Freelancers), how incompetent are the main characters :P
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Re: General Fan Fiction Thread

Post by Kanassa » Sun Sep 25, 2016 6:13 pm

ekrolo2 wrote:
Scarz wrote:I'm thinking of it taking place between BoG and RoF. Kinda like these short gaps of adventures they had to deal with. And after the new RR get their fannies handed to them, they retreat and go back into hiding. Then they have to think of some other scheme. And as soon as they think come up with the perfect plan. BOOM! They find out about SSJB.
On a scale from Supreme Kai to the male cast of Red vs Blue (well, the males who aren't Freelancers), how incompetent are the main characters :P
Or the mercs... Or actual soldiers... Or really anyone who weren't purposly picked for their stupidity :D
When Super apparently shoves Goku down our throats:

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Re: General Fan Fiction Thread

Post by ekrolo2 » Sun Sep 25, 2016 6:15 pm

Kanassa wrote:Or the mercs... Or actual soldiers... Or really anyone who weren't purposly picked for their stupidity :D
I don't know, you're pretty stupid for thinking you can fight these lucky SOBs as far as I'm concerned :P
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Post by Kanassa » Sun Sep 25, 2016 6:17 pm

ekrolo2 wrote:
Kanassa wrote:Or the mercs... Or actual soldiers... Or really anyone who weren't purposly picked for their stupidity :D
I don't know, you're pretty stupid for thinking you can fight these lucky SOBs as far as I'm concerned :P
Considering one of them sucks so bad they replaced his ammo with confetti... Yeah. Though, Tucker and Sarge are actually pretty badass when they actually try to fight
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Re: General Fan Fiction Thread

Post by ekrolo2 » Sun Sep 25, 2016 6:19 pm

Kanassa wrote:Considering one of them sucks so bad they replaced his ammo with confetti... Yeah. Though, Tucker and Sarge are actually pretty badass when they actually try to fight
Those guys are the only ones outside of Wash, Lopez, and Carolina who can actually fight xD

Although, give Grif a vehicle and I'd say he can get put in that group too.
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Re: General Fan Fiction Thread

Post by Blackstripe » Sun Sep 25, 2016 6:54 pm

So...yes or no to linking actual fanfiction here?

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Re: General Fan Fiction Thread

Post by Alruneia » Sun Sep 25, 2016 7:00 pm

Blackstripe wrote:So...yes or no to linking actual fanfiction here?
This thread is for pretty much everything related to Dragon Ball fan fiction - discussions about how to write good fan fiction, suggestions for Dragon Ball fan fiction you feel like other people should check out, asking for help with ideas for plot or character designs, posting pieces of your own work to get feedback without having to create a whole new thread for yourself...
Absolutely yes! I encourage plugging your own work, and you can absolutely also suggest other people's fan fiction here.
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Re: General Fan Fiction Thread

Post by Kanassa » Sun Sep 25, 2016 7:00 pm

Blackstripe wrote:So...yes or no to linking actual fanfiction here?
PLUG IT! And let other writers quiver in fear and envy!... I mean, yeah, you can. I think. I havn't plugged mine yet, though...
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Re: General Fan Fiction Thread

Post by Anime Kitten » Sun Sep 25, 2016 7:10 pm

[obligatory mention of my own fic]

A more specific question related to my last one: Does anyone else get inspiration by listening to music, DB or not?
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Re: General Fan Fiction Thread

Post by Blackstripe » Sun Sep 25, 2016 7:13 pm

Alright, then allow me to present The Daarua Chronicles:

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12158749/1 ... Chronicles

This is an Elsewhere fanfiction (meaning it isn't focused on canon characters). I look forward to hearing your thoughts, I'm actually putting the finishing touches on chapter II as we speak.
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Re: General Fan Fiction Thread

Post by Anime Kitten » Sun Sep 25, 2016 7:15 pm

Blackstripe wrote:Alright, then allow me to present The Daarua Chronicles:
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12158749/1 ... Chronicles
Aww, it's rated M. :(
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Re: General Fan Fiction Thread

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Anime Kitten wrote:
Blackstripe wrote:Alright, then allow me to present The Daarua Chronicles:
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12158749/1 ... Chronicles
Aww, it's rated M. :(
Oh, is that bad here or something? It's mostly due to language.

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Re: General Fan Fiction Thread

Post by Anime Kitten » Sun Sep 25, 2016 7:18 pm

Blackstripe wrote:Oh, is that bad here or something? It's mostly due to language.
No, it's just a thing with me. Mine's T for violence, blood, etc, but no language.
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Re: General Fan Fiction Thread

Post by ekrolo2 » Sun Sep 25, 2016 7:22 pm

Well, since we're plugging our fanfics, I'd like to present a couple of one-shots about Goku Black going through the ruins of mankind, giving us his innermost thoughts on mortals and observing them when we're not at our best:

viewtopic.php?f=6&t=35212&p=1149867#p1149867

Warnings for some "hard-T" material. We are looking at things through the perspective of a twisted guy who's seen ordinary people do lots of twisted things to one another so, yeah.
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Re: General Fan Fiction Thread

Post by Kanassa » Sun Sep 25, 2016 7:28 pm

Anime Kitten wrote:[obligatory mention of my own fic]

A more specific question related to my last one: Does anyone else get inspiration by listening to music, DB or not?
Don't resist the urge to PLUG! (Not that graphic, just your usual DBZ violence and destruction)
And I mostly get inspirations from DBZ AMVs.
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FoolsGil wrote:I hope Mark is dead. But chances are the dragonballs will bring his stupid ass back. :D
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Re: General Fan Fiction Thread

Post by Blackstripe » Sun Sep 25, 2016 8:05 pm

Seems like I've rerailed the thread. :lol:

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