General Fan Fiction Thread

Any general discussion regarding fan-created works of the Dragon Ball franchise, including AMVs, fan-art, fan-fiction, etc.
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Re: General Fan Fiction Thread

Post by Anime Kitten » Mon Sep 26, 2016 5:46 pm

ekrolo2 wrote:I would bother Herms about this but the man's too busy giving an insightful commentary on Wrath of the Dragon on Twitter.
Ask him when he's done then. (I don't keep up with them, but I love it when he does that.)
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Re: General Fan Fiction Thread

Post by Nejishiki » Mon Sep 26, 2016 5:50 pm

ekrolo2 wrote:
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ekrolo2 wrote:Any ideas for the name of Jaco's girlfriend?
Oh boy. :lol: Didn't they break up?
When you're gonna come up with a name in Dragon Ball, puns are usually where it's at. I'm not sure what Jaco is a pun on (if anything), but I'd try to use a similar one. Unless she's gonna be part of a bigger group, like a family or clan or something, in which case coming up with a new theme works best.
I'm almost certain Jaco's name is a pun of something but I can't figure out what it is :P
It’s probably a pun on zako, an unimportant small-fry (or a minor enemy in video games).
The quote above is from Herms. I have a vague memory of the "small fry" joke being made in the series, but I can't immediately recall where it was from or if it was even real.

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Re: General Fan Fiction Thread

Post by Doctor. » Mon Sep 26, 2016 5:52 pm

I think Brief called Jaco Zako in F.

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Re: General Fan Fiction Thread

Post by Blackstripe » Mon Sep 26, 2016 6:00 pm

Chapter 2 of my fanfiction is now up!

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Re: General Fan Fiction Thread

Post by ekrolo2 » Mon Sep 26, 2016 6:06 pm

Makes sense for him to get that name since he is nothing but an expendable grunt of the Galactic Patrol. So, what would a female version of that be? Zanka? Zankette? Zankia?
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Post by Anime Kitten » Mon Sep 26, 2016 6:11 pm

ekrolo2 wrote:Makes sense for him to get that name since he is nothing but an expendable grunt of the Galactic Patrol. So, what would a female version of that be? Zanka? Zankette? Zankia?
I'd go with Zanka. But I don't know whether any of those pun or not, if you are using a pun.
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Re: General Fan Fiction Thread

Post by Alruneia » Mon Sep 26, 2016 6:42 pm

Anime Kitten wrote:
ekrolo2 wrote:Makes sense for him to get that name since he is nothing but an expendable grunt of the Galactic Patrol. So, what would a female version of that be? Zanka? Zankette? Zankia?
I'd go with Zanka. But I don't know whether any of those pun or not, if you are using a pun.
I don't know if Rule 63-ing the pun is the best choice, though. I'd rather go with something like Gura (from Grunt).

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Re: General Fan Fiction Thread

Post by ekrolo2 » Mon Sep 26, 2016 6:46 pm

Alruneia wrote:
Anime Kitten wrote:
ekrolo2 wrote:Makes sense for him to get that name since he is nothing but an expendable grunt of the Galactic Patrol. So, what would a female version of that be? Zanka? Zankette? Zankia?
I'd go with Zanka. But I don't know whether any of those pun or not, if you are using a pun.
I don't know if Rule 63-ing the pun is the best choice, though. I'd rather go with something like Gura (from Grunt).

Also, you did the thing. Kitten mitten. :D
Gura sounds perfect! Thanks for the help guys ! :thumbup:
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Re: General Fan Fiction Thread

Post by Kanassa » Mon Sep 26, 2016 6:47 pm

Alruneia wrote: Also, you did the thing. Kitten mitten. :D
It was only a matter of time...
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Post by Anime Kitten » Mon Sep 26, 2016 6:50 pm

Kanassa wrote:
Alruneia wrote: Also, you did the thing. Kitten mitten. :D
It was only a matter of time...
I had to. :P
I've already got an idea for my next one. Hint: it involves my art and a namesake.
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Re: General Fan Fiction Thread

Post by Kanassa » Mon Sep 26, 2016 6:55 pm

Also, does anyone have any idea if the Kaioshin's have pun names?
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Post by Alruneia » Mon Sep 26, 2016 6:58 pm

Kanassa wrote:Also, does anyone have any idea if the Kaioshin's have pun names?
Zamasu and Gowasu do. I don't remember exactly what they were, but they had to do with "to exist".
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Post by Anime Kitten » Mon Sep 26, 2016 7:00 pm

Alruneia wrote:Zamasu and Gowasu do. I don't remember exactly what they were, but they had to do with "to exist".
They're just literally the words for "to exist." That's what I recall, anyway.
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Re: General Fan Fiction Thread

Post by Kanassa » Mon Sep 26, 2016 7:07 pm

Alruneia wrote:
Kanassa wrote:Also, does anyone have any idea if the Kaioshin's have pun names?
Zamasu and Gowasu do. I don't remember exactly what they were, but they had to do with "to exist".
Hmmm...
Shimasu?
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Post by Anime Kitten » Mon Sep 26, 2016 8:57 pm

GD#7
Do you ever find yourself in a situation so well thought-out that you actually need to stop and think to write yourself out of it?
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Re: General Fan Fiction Thread

Post by Nejishiki » Mon Sep 26, 2016 10:29 pm

Doctor. wrote:I think Brief called Jaco Zako in F.
Yes, that's it! I knew my memory wasn't completely lost. :thumbup:

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Post by sailorspazz » Tue Sep 27, 2016 4:12 am

Alruneia wrote:So... Do you guys write "linearly", or do you jump around a bit? What I mean is, do you start at the beginning, go word for word until the end, and then stop, or do you work more like doing a bit of Chapter 1, then a part in Chapter 4, then half of Chapter 2, then finishing Chapter 1, and so on?
I personally always write linearly. Mainly because I'm usually writing things off the top of my head, without ever writing down an outline or anything (Toriyama style! :D) The most I might do is write down a line I want to have a character say at a later point. Otherwise, it all stays in my brain until I get to the point in the fic where those scenes are taking place (which, in some cases, has taken me literally years). Of course, there's always the danger that I'll forget some of the ideas I came up with by the time I get around to writing them down...on the other hand, I do feel it's easier to come up with additional ideas that might be better than what I had before, simply because I continue thinking about it, rather than putting it in an outline and going, yep, that's what I'm gonna do.

I don't recommend this lack of planning method to anyone, but it generally works for me :P
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Re: General Fan Fiction Thread

Post by ekrolo2 » Tue Sep 27, 2016 5:49 am

Anime Kitten wrote:GD#7
Do you ever find yourself in a situation so well thought-out that you actually need to stop and think to write yourself out of it?
Does it count if I already had a pre-planned character in mind who'd get me out of said situation?
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Re: General Fan Fiction Thread

Post by Anime Kitten » Tue Sep 27, 2016 3:24 pm

ekrolo2 wrote:Does it count if I already had a pre-planned character in mind who'd get me out of said situation?
Not quite, but sort of. I mean, do you ever write a situation so well for the villain that you actually need to figure out how to stop him? Of course, you could use a character and say, "Oh yeah, I had this person. I'll use them to get out of this."
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Re: General Fan Fiction Thread

Post by Kanassa » Tue Sep 27, 2016 3:34 pm

Anime Kitten wrote: Not quite, but sort of. I mean, do you ever write a situation so well for the villain that you actually need to figure out how to stop him? Of course, you could use a character and say, "Oh yeah, I had this person. I'll use them to get out of this."
Not really since I already have how the heroes will get out of it already planned. Hell, usually the villain's plan is built around an action I want my Heroes to take.
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FoolsGil wrote:I hope Mark is dead. But chances are the dragonballs will bring his stupid ass back. :D
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