General Fan Fiction Thread

Any general discussion regarding fan-created works of the Dragon Ball franchise, including AMVs, fan-art, fan-fiction, etc.
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Re: General Fan Fiction Thread

Post by Jinzoningen MULE » Mon Oct 10, 2016 12:10 am

Anime Kitten wrote:I'm gonna do it whether you disapprove or not ( :P ), but just curiously, what do you guys think about this idea?
Currently have some ideas for a GT fic about Goku being in school, and it's going to essentially be a joke rewrite of the series. Baby and the other villains will still show up eventually... but that's not the point. My point is I'm going to have Omega Shenron say "Omega" every time he would say "end". When he formally introduces himself, he'll accidentally say "End Shenron" and scramble to correct himself. :D Sound like it'd be humorous to you?

Sounds interesting, at the very least.
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Re: General Fan Fiction Thread

Post by Sailor Haumea » Mon Oct 10, 2016 12:26 am

Here's one more:

...A fanfic where all, or part of, the Ginyu Force became allies.

They don't seem totally evil compared to Frieza. For them, Namek was just another job.

Besides, they couldn't disobey Frieza even if they wanted to. He'd kill them in a heartbeat.

Do any fics exist where the Ginyu Force switch sides?
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Re: General Fan Fiction Thread

Post by SilverArmada » Tue Oct 11, 2016 7:01 pm

Oh sweet there's a general fanfiction thread now. :D

So I'm going to go back through and check out any links anyone posted, but in the mean time, here is my own bit of shameless self promotion. I'm working on a fanfic titled "Illumination" (link: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/4835865/1/Illumination ) that stars Mirai Trunks in his timeline after he's defeated the androids and later Cell (it begins when he is 25). Long story short, Earth makes contact with the wider universe and while out and about on one of these planets Trunks gets into some trouble by accidentally helping a gangster rob a mercenary. It's a little slow in the beginning (first five chapters or so) because I have to do a lot of world building, BUT there is definitely an overarching plot and it starts to form early.

Anyway, fair warning: this fanfic is about Trunks in the future timeline and features a veritable crap-ton of original characters and locations, so if you don't like that sort of thing, I'm not offended if you don't want to read it. If you do read the fic, or try, and lose interest or just hate it, feel free to leave a review. I'm not super sensitive to criticism so I will live, trust me. :lol:
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Re: General Fan Fiction Thread

Post by Sailor Haumea » Tue Oct 11, 2016 7:16 pm

An interesting dive into Kuriza's response to Frieza's genocide of the Saiyans (he's on Cooler's ship watching):
"Ah, look at him! What foolishness! He's so pleased with that himself he's blinded by his arrogant pride! That could be King Vegeta on that space pod for all he knows!" Cooler chuckled.
"I hate Daddy..." Kuriza whimpered.
"Good boy."
Cooler doesn't realize, of course, that Kuriza hates him too.
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Re: General Fan Fiction Thread

Post by Sailor Haumea » Wed Oct 12, 2016 8:19 pm

One more change:

-After Buu Saga, Supreme Kai goes to Universe 6, gathers the Super Dragon Balls, and revives the other four Supreme Kais. However, part of his wish is Mr. Buu staying as is. So we have Mr. Buu staying...fat while Grand Supreme Kai comes back.

Oh, and North Kai, Bubbles, and Gregory are revived with the rest of Cell's victims.
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Re: General Fan Fiction Thread

Post by Anime Kitten » Thu Oct 13, 2016 8:14 pm

I know this may be one of the weirdest things to ask, but how do you guys feel about made-up special (traditional, even) greetings? Something as simple as a hug, or something as complicated as a handshake/bow ritual of sorts.
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Re: General Fan Fiction Thread

Post by Jinzoningen MULE » Thu Oct 13, 2016 8:26 pm

Anime Kitten wrote:I know this may be one of the weirdest things to ask, but how do you guys feel about made-up special (traditional, even) greetings? Something as simple as a hug, or something as complicated as a handshake/bow ritual of sorts.
Totally indifferent.
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Re: General Fan Fiction Thread

Post by Sailor Haumea » Sat Oct 15, 2016 7:09 pm

So, anyone have any fics to add to this list of "fics everyone should read"?:

Cold World
Honor Trip
Savior of Demons
Bringer of Death
The Fall of Lord Frieza
Who would have thought?
Piccolo's Choice
Son Gohan - The Warrior
Break Through the Limit
The Earthling Chronicles

Any other "must-reads"?
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Post by Anime Kitten » Sat Oct 15, 2016 7:12 pm

Dragon Ball Universe
Nothing that comes to mind immediately. I haven't read many fics yet.
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Re: General Fan Fiction Thread

Post by Jinzoningen MULE » Sat Oct 15, 2016 7:23 pm

Sailor Haumea wrote:So, anyone have any fics to add to this list of "fics everyone should read"?:

Cold World
Honor Trip
Savior of Demons
Bringer of Death
The Fall of Lord Frieza
Who would have thought?
Piccolo's Choice
Son Gohan - The Warrior
Break Through the Limit
The Earthling Chronicles

Any other "must-reads"?
I think this would be better asked over here: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=28682
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Re: General Fan Fiction Thread

Post by Sailor Haumea » Sat Oct 15, 2016 7:25 pm

Jinzoningen MULE wrote:
Sailor Haumea wrote:So, anyone have any fics to add to this list of "fics everyone should read"?:

Cold World
Honor Trip
Savior of Demons
Bringer of Death
The Fall of Lord Frieza
Who would have thought?
Piccolo's Choice
Son Gohan - The Warrior
Break Through the Limit
The Earthling Chronicles

Any other "must-reads"?
I think this would be better asked over here: viewtopic.php?f=6&t=28682
I'm referring to fanfics, not fancomics.
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Re: General Fan Fiction Thread

Post by ekrolo2 » Sat Oct 15, 2016 7:28 pm

Sailor Haumea wrote:I'm referring to fanfics, not fancomics.
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Post by SilverArmada » Sat Oct 15, 2016 8:09 pm

Sailor Haumea wrote:So, anyone have any fics to add to this list of "fics everyone should read"?:

Cold World
Honor Trip
Savior of Demons
Bringer of Death
The Fall of Lord Frieza
Who would have thought?
Piccolo's Choice
Son Gohan - The Warrior
Break Through the Limit
The Earthling Chronicles

Any other "must-reads"?
I have two to add to the list. First is "Broken Down Universe" by dragonbabezee. (Link: http://archiveofourown.org/works/914223 ... rs/1772307 ) It's AMAZING. Fair warning, there is Bulma/Vegeta smut, but the overall story is incredible. If you like fics about the alternate future or just DB stuff involving time travel, this is a must read.

And despite my feelings about the author, "Point of No Return" by niteryde is really good. (Link: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5785965/1/ ... -No-Return ) It's a great "what if" about future Trunks if his time machine went back too far in time and he met his father while Vegeta was still working under Frieza. It's a really great fic.
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Re: General Fan Fiction Thread

Post by Kanassa » Sun Oct 16, 2016 12:14 pm

Sailor Haumea wrote:So, anyone have any fics to add to this list of "fics everyone should read"?:

Cold World
Honor Trip
Savior of Demons
Bringer of Death
The Fall of Lord Frieza
Who would have thought?
Piccolo's Choice
Son Gohan - The Warrior
Break Through the Limit
The Earthling Chronicles

Any other "must-reads"?
Frigid Future, Frigid Future, Frigid Future. A very well written story of the alternate timeline if they never created the time machine, with Cooler coming to Earth for Revenge and plenty of badass Gohan.
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Post by ekrolo2 » Sun Oct 16, 2016 12:36 pm

For my fellow posters on fanfiction.net, how much success do you guys have with it?
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Re: General Fan Fiction Thread

Post by FoolsGil » Sun Oct 16, 2016 12:57 pm

ekrolo2 wrote:For my fellow posters on fanfiction.net, how much success do you guys have with it?
At least one review a chapter.

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Re: General Fan Fiction Thread

Post by Kanassa » Sun Oct 16, 2016 7:41 pm

ekrolo2 wrote:For my fellow posters on fanfiction.net, how much success do you guys have with it?
Lucky to get a review per chapter
Looks to other fanfics
They get more per chapter
Get jealous
Repeat Process
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Re: General Fan Fiction Thread

Post by ekrolo2 » Sun Oct 16, 2016 7:43 pm

Kanassa wrote:
ekrolo2 wrote:For my fellow posters on fanfiction.net, how much success do you guys have with it?
Lucky to get a review per chapter
Looks to other fanfics
They get more per chapter
Get jealous
Repeat Process
Ha, I feel ya mun. Although, followers mean more if you ask me, that shows you've got a dedicated readership who'll definitely come back for more.
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Re: General Fan Fiction Thread

Post by Kanassa » Sun Oct 16, 2016 7:52 pm

ekrolo2 wrote:
Kanassa wrote:
ekrolo2 wrote:For my fellow posters on fanfiction.net, how much success do you guys have with it?
Lucky to get a review per chapter
Looks to other fanfics
They get more per chapter
Get jealous
Repeat Process
Ha, I feel ya mun. Although, followers mean more if you ask me, that shows you've got a dedicated readership who'll definitely come back for more.
I'm the type of writer who just wants someone to shit on your work or detail a part they liked, those followers and favoraits are nothing but soulless gestures to this shit head!
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Re: General Fan Fiction Thread

Post by sailorspazz » Mon Oct 17, 2016 6:37 pm

ekrolo2 wrote:For my fellow posters on fanfiction.net, how much success do you guys have with it?
I've been on there a long time, and it's definitely a good place to get maximum exposure. The only Dragon Ball story I've written (so far...planning something soon, though!) still gets hundreds of visitors a month, despite the fact that it was completed more than two years ago (especially in the overcrowded category of VegeBul getting together stories, I don't know how people keep finding it!). I feel like in the old days, readers would give more feedback than they do now; before they had "follows", "favorites" and all that, I think people used to actually review more often, rather than just hitting a button to show they liked something. Which, I suppose, can be a good ego boost to see how many people added you/your stories to their favorites, but it somehow feels less meaningful than someone taking the time to say, "wow, I really liked x about your story!"
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